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Posted: 11 years ago
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What an amazing part 2. It is highly unusual to see such a heartbroken Arnav as we usually see Khushi being wronged in some way by the formiddable ASR or his family which leaves Khushi desolate to her circumstances, yet the acceptance the Gupta's showcase, the remanents of love shining through Arnav's chocolate orbs, and NK's blatant lack of comprehension as to ArHi's history, again has sucessfully raised many theories in my mind, and yet again I will eagerly wait for you to reveal more!
Manreet :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
Just read the first two chapters, and there's so much that I already love about this story.

The past that rearing itself into the present, and that is so interesting - what possibly could have made Khushi leave Arnav and not contact him for six years, especially since he is the father of her child?? I'm looking forward to finding out!

Arnav seems so hurt still - it's s shame that because of someone else, he's left hurting and wondering why Khushi left him so long ago? I can't even imagine how he will react once he comes to find out about Arjun (obviously, I'm assuming here that Arnav is the father).

I'm really enjoying the pace of the story, and how you write each chapter so concisely - you don't write superfluously to get your point across and that's really refreshing.

Can't wait to read more😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
a different story line and its interesting. waiting to read more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
So Khushi left Arnav when she was pregnant with his baby.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Just got a chance to catch up on they story...wow you do come up with some great concepts. So curious to know what happened in the past that she left Arnav whole carrying his baby. Who is the person that separated them...can't wait for the story to unfold.
Love that this is based in the states and areas that I know.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
very interesting ss ...loved ur writing nd very curious to know their hidden past.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Beautiful. So she left him. Would love to know the Flashbacks. Arnav is always handsome. Even with his grey hair.😳
So, she's gonna talk to Arnav? can't wait for the convo.
Do update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
So finally they meet and the love still seems to be simmering somewhere
beneath the surface 😆
It's good to see Arnav with slightly greying hair ...
Arjuns questions are only going to increase with time when he gets more
aware of the fact that Khushi is a single mom ...
Waiting to see Arnav's reaction when he gets to know about Arjun !

Thanks mklam ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yes!! She has to talk to Arnav... We shud also know the reason behind Khushiz departure from his life na...
it seems they were married!! Isn't it?? but when i think aloud now , i dnt think soo... They were in a very serious relationship... This is pucca!! And the woman K was referring to as ma was clearly Arnavz mother... She has been forced to move out of Arnav n everybodyz life in India?? Y is that so? Whuz that person?? Thing to notice is that Arnav surely made efforts to search for her since he mentioned her parents moving out of Lucknow...
that phase of theirs , i guess was during college/ uni...
now... M done with my rambling of this update MK!! Phew!! Waiting fr the nxt one!!:))
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
It must be something grave which led her to let go of him and deprive her child of a father.
She's clearly stuck. He still effects her.

He hasn't let go of her either. He wants her to get effected by him.
Now that he has found her, I'm sure he will pursue her again.

6 years is a lot of time. Hope they're able to make up for it because fate is giving them another chance.


Edited by IronButterfly - 11 years ago

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