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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#71

And the mystery deepens! Why did Khushi have to abruptly leave and put an end to whatever they had shared ? Arnav's hurt and Khushi's jealously hints at the possibility that for both of them 'It ain't quite over' yet. My romantic heart is nodding in approval:)

Edited by IPK007 - 11 years ago

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Okay, you have my romantic fanciful heart hooked on this story. Really curious as to who committed the crime that resulted in lovers being torn apart and an innocent child growing up without a father.

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sweetieangel

@sweetie_angel

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

must say this is a very interesting ss

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Very interesting take on Arnav and Khushi. I like your writing style , its very simple and uncomplicated though the emotions running underneath the surface are anything but that.

Arnav and Khushi obviously share a past and also have a child between them.

Looking forward to finding out what its all about.

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Sigh - so much time, a child, love - the list of things that might have been lost is so poignantly overwhelming.

Waiting for the layers to peel back and for the story to unveil - and enjoying the ride one word at a time?

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#76

pleasing update...

arnav still loves khushi...

khushi was lost in arnav's thought...

arnav doesn't know the reason of her disappear...

khushi is jealous of name payal...

arjun asking of his father...

khushi will talk to arnav about arjun...

hope soon she does it...

update soon...

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#77

nice update

will wait to know the reason and the person behind arhi's separation

lovely update

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anonyasr

@anonyasr

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#78

Just found this. Very interesting and well written story.

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#79

This was amazing...wondering how Arnav going to react!

So looking forward for the next...and waiting eagerly too see how this story unfolds..

Ps: the Barney song...I love you...got back so many memories!

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Hmm. there is more to their past than what meets the eye. So Khushi left him not out of her own volition hence still harbours feelings for him!! Felt sorry for Arnav for being kept in the dark!!

Poor Arjun had lost what could have been a wonderful father all this time!!

Please update soon!