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ASRphanki

@ASRphanki

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Thanks for the note MK...:)
Take your time and update as and when u are happy :)
As for blog...i m not in your pm list...so i wil personally pm asking u later for the link ...

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amaypranay

@amaypranay

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Thx for your note!

You write beautifully.

This story has got me so intrigued...seems like they were in a serious relationship...wondering will little Arjun fix that broken cord!

Waiting eagerly for the continuation of this story!!!

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yoga123

@yoga123

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Awesome story...I read the prologue and the chapters in one go...Brilliantly written...the prologue was very intriguing and kept me glued to the story and tempted to make me read the chapters...am curious to know why khushi has kept her son a secret from Arnav...why she left him suddenly...there should be some thing serious that made her do what she did...can't wait the story to unfold...payal, akash, nk are nice people...maddy boo is awesome...please accept my buddy request...can you please PM me the updates...thanks in advance...

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savvz

@savvz

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#104

awesome update... arnav ..plz come back soon... :)

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seema13

@seema13

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#105

very interesting story nd update was good...loved payal entry nd now they r good friend,it was sad to see how Arjun is missing his father.m sure there must be a valid reason for Khushi to hide this from Arnav but happy that now Khushi is planing to reaveal the truth to Arnav,waiting eagerly for next update,

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yeshyeshna

@yeshyeshna

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#106

nice story

read the 3 parts😊

waiting to read why khushi left arnav??

does arnav know that khushi has a son???

poor arjun..he misses his father

plzz pm me when u update😊

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eversweetdreams

@eversweetdreams

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Oh OMG Khushi how could you keep Arjun a secret from Arnav. I am sure the reasons for them breaking up might have been big but the moment a child entered the equation she should have told Arnav the truth...he deserves to know that he has a son.

The sad part is that khushi is thinking of telling arnav only after he has re entered khushi's life...i am sure he will not take too kindly to the information so late.

I am sure there will be fireworks in the next update.

Thanks for the blog link i am going to catch up on your other stories there. :)

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#108

Awesome update

Payal is very sweet and friendly and it's because of her nature she become good friend with Khushi and her son. She is getting very attach to Khushi and Arjun is already becoming fond of them.

Payal knows something about Miss Gupta.

Khushi is taking her thought to tell arnav about his son very seriously.

I am eager to know his reaction.

Update soon

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palaayan

@palaayan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#109

The plot deepens with every update and my heart aches at the pains Arnav, Khushi and Arjun have gone through and will continue to endure in their personal pariksha before they (hopefully) gain their long overdue happy ending.

Your narrative is spellbinding and I truly cannot wait to read more :)

Manreet