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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Finally Khushi lands upon the reason behind non medical Tachycardia. This chapters leaves with so many questions where they married, does he know about Arjun. Waiting 4 you reveal all the answers. Thx.

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

It was so nice to read about her family. More than reading about her encounter with Arnav, knowing about her parents and aunt was interesting.

So Arjun is Arnav's child and he doesn't know about it?

She has moved out of the city to avoid him?

Keep it coming.

Loving the story.

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Khushi's childhood was so lovely any body could envy.. and I loved Maddy Boo the teen-at-heart!!

Hmm. we all need a chill-pill 😆

I'm very curious about a detail you didn't mention, dont know if it was intentional or unintentional. When Khushi went to Super market did she take Arjun with her or arranged for a baby sitter or left him alone? If she left him alone, that could lead her to serous trouble right? So I was surprised why there was no mention of him with her.

Arnav is here and Khushi feels him even before she sees him. With your parting shot, I see some court battles in the near future Or may be I'm overly pessimistic, Arnav might woo Khushi back 😳.

Whatever you have got for us, I can't wait for it to unfold 😉

Cheers

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Maarrriiiam...Mariam :-)

@MaankiMariam

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Eek this story makes me exciteddd

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Michelle

@-ChildOfChrist-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Oooh nice update

Can't wait for the next chappy

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gauri

@GAURI29

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

nice start dear...
Of possibld pm me when u updte...

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sweetieangel

@sweetie_angel

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Loved the start
Do continue soon

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savvz

@savvz

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

ohh wow...
arnav's entry... let the fireworks start now... :)

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Nutcase

@dreamymaya

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Sorry little late...Aha! the prologue has given a comfortable setting to watch the story play out. SOmething about NK coming to pick Khushi and Arjun from airport- their pizza pick up-welcoming apartment---- it felt familiar MK. very familiar..Sigh!

Coming to another main point which I loved --- " pair of chocolate brown eyes with a lopsided grin on a sinfully handsome face flashed through her mind for a few seconds" oh god! when you describe like this --even devil becomes handsome...he he...loved that description. Waiting to know more of Khushi