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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#151

Very good chapter
Arnav was back to his flirty self with Khushi and she went back to her old self. But the conversation was really cute and adorable.

I'm gald Arnav talked to Khushi about his dad and his mother's death. I didn't the that kind of twist coming.

Good luck for your exams

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Wonderful chapter cheeni! It had everything! Humour, light moments between khushi n shruti, some romantic teasing between arnav n khushi n finally some intense emotional sequence between the two.
Loved how khushi didnt leave him this time n gave him the much needed love n support!
So arnav does it becauses its something that his father hates and he hates his father! N secondly he likes it!
Things will get clearer in the next chapter but i loved what how you make arnav express his feelings n vent out his frustration! That y he did all that!
Waiting for full truth to be revealed as there are certain things that m still nt convinced about!
Waiting fr the nxt part!

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rkapoor1382

@rkapoor1382

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#153

tht was fab

arnav khushi nok jhok abt kiss was aweee

loved the way arnav cares for khushi

super loved wen khushi understands arnav

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

oh his mother was murdered? did not see tht coming...

lovely chap

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Sanah

@--Sanah-Sizzles

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Okay I did not Get the Pm Chennu Di

But Still I Remembered and Read it!

It was a Beautiful Update Loved it To Bits

The way they were Thinking about the kiss,

Awww Coohie Cooh!

Khushi Has Started to understand Arnav Really happy for the Fact!

Arnav's Part is Reslly painful

But yet I Understand Bhushan too But I have that Small hate for him

Please update Chapter 14 soon

Love

Sanah

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aashi12

@aashi12

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Beautiful Poem Kiran!

As for Cheeni di, yaar i do not read Teasers and hence for me this Intezaar was quite Long!!

But the update was worth it all!

Their flirting, Arnav's blunders.. That was really fun to read.

But the mystery unfolds now as their face off begins. Khushi now has began to understand Arnav. She has seen through his facade.

So was Arnav's mother murdered because of some Case that his father was fighting?

I really wanna know. This whole past is getting intriguing and i'm waiting for the OS! ;)

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#157

reserved

unres

awesome update

lol.. loved blunders arnav was making during his shoot😆 and arshi's teasing.. that was really very cute😳

hmm.. so arnav's past isn't out completely!! omg, arnav's mom was killed, I think, those persons killed with whom his father fighting with!! that's why arnav hates his father more!!

loved how khushi ask him to share, share his feelings and bad times with and how she was persistent to listen to him.. that's khushi!😃

continue soon please cheeni !!

omg.. you'll be gona.. nahiii😭😭 why? kyun??

PS: waiting for OS

PPS: glad your friend is doing fine!!

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cute_sarun

@cute_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#158

arnav's mom was murdered 😲 beautiful update...continue soon

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#159

I am your host Lucknow from ASR!

Aww Arnav Singh Raizada blushes too

Awww Santa is so right ASR is a goner. And Khushi can't hide the fact the that Kiss was not out of the bet. The reason and feelings are a lot deeper. Oh and Khushi is to precious for Arnav to let ASR hurt her ...awesome!!!

I understood earlier that ASR doesn't like his father because he is too practical for a kids mind who wanted to stay close to his mother. His mother was his anchor for all the disagreements and lashing he got from his father. And now it make sense in a way that he lost his mother the only thread holding him to his father was snapped and just to prove him wrong he did all the things his father disagrees of.

Well will have to wait for rest of the truth to unfold to know more...

P.S. Kiran's poem on ASR was so apt for the character... Loved it! Never read any of her poems or shayeris in her on updates but I guess she has this great quality with which she appreciates the work of others.

P.P.S. Read your note...not happy that you will leave IF in future, don't want a great writer like you to leave but yeah this is not real life... And everyone has one so no holding back when AD knocks!!!

Want to enjoy your work till you are their and even after if you keep it on IF.

P.P.P.S. Don't know what make me feel emotional and write P.P.S. as though I know you personally and feels like saying, "tusi jareho, tusi na Jao" (don't go away)

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#160

Superb update

OMG Arnav was only 15 when his mom got mired red. Poor Arnav his only understanding best friend, his last hope, sanity n peace in his life fade way that's why he is like this. I think he believes n blames his father for her death n that's why don't talk to him.

Khushi can understand his pain of loosing his mom, she lost her too but she was lucky enough to get such a sweet father but his father wasn't. His father wanted fame n money n their he started getting distant from his family n now he hasn't got a family. His only son hates him n ignore him. He doesn't leave any chance to degrade n making fun of him n his social efforts just like once his father did n mistreated him after sending him to hostel.

Love is finally in the air n now I am eager to know its effect in the stubborn duo.