ArHi: His Inglorious Deeds#3|| Link to thread four, page 144

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avni_barun

@avni_barun

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

I am first...

Kiss was not unexpected and it was not soon...
Mein to kabse wait kar rahi thi... 😳 😉

ASR was making blunders... 😆 Ye ladka to gaya kaam se...Poor boy... 😉

Even I agree with ASR "Kiss indeed was mind blowing..." I am still blushing... ☺️ 😳

ASR was blushing... Ufff...I am gone... 🤢 🤢

" zindagi kaise nilklegi humari?" Seriously yaar ye band mujhe pagal kar dega apni cute n naughty talks se... N d way he teases her... Hayyyeee... 😳

Shruti is sooo sweet yaar...Achi lagti hain mujhe...ASR ki side jo hai... 😉

My eyes always get moist when I read Arnav's past...The way u show the pain is just amazing Cheeni... I can actually feel it and as a result I cry... 😭 😭
The past was bad but was written superbly...

Coz of Arnav's dad he broke his promise made with his mom...I wish Arnav's past would not have been so miserable...

His words to Khushi broke my heart...He is in sooo much pain...I cant see him in pain... 😭 😭

After reading the last line I know I will cry buckets in the next update...I already did cry and will cry again...I know dat...

U r a rockstar Cheeni...Bahut mast likhti ho yaar...
I luv ur writing... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️

Edited by avni_barun - 11 years ago

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Bada wala res :D

I though t i made res nd i m first 😕 😭 Bt nooo i was scnd 😭 😭 All thnks to my stupid net 😡

Back to update..

Khushi teasing arnav 😉 Hahahahaha ..Poor girl doesnt knw wid whom she mess up 🤣 He is d one nd only master in making khushi red ☺️ in all ways. 👍🏼

Bt i loved d power of khushi to try teasing arnav 😆

Ohhh how badly i was laughing wen arnav said challenge was of a peck bt wat u gave was bonus 🥳 Ufff d kiss was hot

On top of dat dat kiss effected arnav 😆 He was nt able to concentrate ..He was fumbling wid words 😔

In all d teasing nd fumbling of words d prsn who enjoyed d most wa shruti 😆

Loll she knws arnav nd khushi share smthng nw 😳

Arnav past 😭 is very sad.. I knw it was wrng to steal money 😔 bt later wasnt right to..

Just bcz of his father he hates honesty 😲..

His mother died infrnt of his eyes 😲 Ommmgg..

He thinks d ppl he loves will leave him just like his mother 😔 😔

Khushi will heal d wound ..She wil show him d true love ❤️

I loved how khushi tried to make him understnd nd speak up his prblm..

Loved d update cheeni ❤️

Awsm poem kiran 👏

Update soonish 😳

Edited by Barun_Gf - 11 years ago

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--MISHTEE--

@--MISHTEE--

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Loved d update

love their emotional bonding

nd Love seems to be really in d air 😳😳😳

it was a beautifully written update 😊

pls update soon 😛

Edited by --MISHTEE-- - 11 years ago

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

wow awesome update...first of all about the note..the kiss...i think it doesnt look early at all in the story...as wt she did it was purely after seeing the positive shade of arnav...and thats very natural to be attracted towards the great asr :)...hilarious update in the beginning...lthis is lucknow from asr...hahaha...like khushi i loved the blushing arnav too :)...happy to see strong khushi here...she was actually really there for arnav...no matter how harsh his words were...so arnav mom was killed ..that is so sad...he suffered ..forsure need now love of khushi in his life :)

Edited by lalarukh - 11 years ago

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anu1017

@anu1017

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Awesome update Cheeni, as I don't expect anything less from you and I have been spoiled rotten by you 😃

Aww so the after affects of the kiss have been showing its color on both Arnav and Khushi!!!! Poor Arnav could not even get his starting lines right, can you blame him 😉

Khushi has gotten really bold and she thought she could tease besharam laad governor himself hehehe!!! She has a very professional opponent at besharmi 😃

Poor Arnav felt so bad for him, he clearly has unresolved issues which I guess he is being carrying the burden for so long!!!

Happy that Khushi did not back down and kept on pushing him as he needs to vent out and get to the happy place in life that he deserves!!!

Cannot wait for the flashback update!!!

Will pm you later about your note Cheeni my lost sister lol!!! For now enjoy college and hopefully your voice will be back soon 😊

Edited by anu1017 - 11 years ago

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

thursday night IST, thats today, right ??

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@EchTee

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Awesome update.
Aisa kya hone wala hai after 2 -3 chapters
Tu dara rahi hai yaar.
Arnav saw hiss mother murder.
is his father the murderer??

continue soon

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

chapter was good...Bhushan doesnt seem like a bad person, but ofcourse Arnav;s mother's murder is what impacted him the most...m assuming she was murdered cause of bhushan's inclination towards justice n honesty and thats why Arnav has become like this...but no matter what he does, Arnav can never become totally bad, so he has to use that money for a good cause...

bad things in another 2-3 chapters...just how bad...will Arnav turn dark again...hope he doesnt show his womanizing side to Khushi...

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1987Trisha

@1987Trisha

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#149

oh Gosh...you have ended there...at that point...why😡

plzzz plzzz plzzz update Ch 14 soon...this week??

things are gonna bad???hope not between Arnav N Khushi

Someone Killed his mom that too in front of his eyes😭

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#150

awesome update..especially the first half was superb..arnav ka kaam mein dil hi nahi lag raha..both r still in dazed after the soul shuttering kiss they shared..arnav was clean bowled after receiving the kiss from khushi..and i don't thinks so k kiss early tha..it's timing was perfect..after their visit of orphanage seeing arnav's bonding with kids.. khushi is falling for him...and his childhood...uff...his father was too strict and rude with him...i'm wondering k kya reason ho sakte hain...and he lost his mother in so young age...and who killed his mother?? kya arnav k walid ne uski maa ko mara hy???...eagerly waiting for the next part..when all the truth will be revealed..interesting update..

Edited by Chandni.. - 11 years ago