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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

😭 today... you aren't updating😭😭😭 kyun aisa kyun humaare saath😭😭

I cant wait to know about arnav's past!!!

Edited by jas0308 - 11 years ago

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Cheeni u r testing my patience 😡..

Tell me d past also y did khushi cry 😔

Pretty plss 😭

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Sorry guys, I think will not be able to update tomorrow too:( my friend was show stopper in fashion show but she fell down and fractured her right hand, I need to be with her. Moreover I have not even read all the comments:(

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Pearl_Oyster

@Pearl_Oyster

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Oh...
I am disheartened.. :(
But I do undertsnad the situation.. :)
Tu apni frnd ke saath reh..
Will prey for her speedy recovery :)

Edited by Pearl_Oyster - 11 years ago

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Pooja agarwal

@Barun_Gf

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Cheeni u knw na how badly i was waiting for d update 😭 Nd nw dis 😭

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mayabhi

@mayabhi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Loved it.. I liked that khushi came to see arnav this side by chance as shruti made her go with arnav.

I knew khushi wud not lose the challenge. But din expect it to happen so soon..

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

oh damn...
ok.. take care of your friend yaar.. she needs you more 😊

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sher_lock

@sher_lock

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

I guess next update is going to reveal more past

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rk2127

@rk2127

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Can understand your concern and love for your friend. Hope she recovers soon!!!

Lately Wednesdays became glorious days with your update but well the glory didn't continue, well unfortunately after all it's inglorious deeds 😉.

Well jokes apart hope you don't put us on wait for long... Yup can't say the update word oopppsss...sorry please don't take this thread down😡

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Pearl_Oyster

@Pearl_Oyster

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

Okay, this is for the first time in life that I have tried to write something away from my stories nd usual killing shayaris 😆
So, do not kill me if this is not good enough..!
I just wrote this poem :p
Pata nahi if it even goes with the story or not..
And it's in Hindi.
Meaning scrap karke pooch lena..
Agar samjh me naa aaye to 😛

Agar tu shama hai, to parwana hu mai

Teri kaatil adao ka deewana hu mai

Dil tujhe dekhkar, har baar dhadakta hai

Tujhse pyaar hai, ye maan ne me theherta hai

Mere muskuraate chehre ke peeche, kuch raaz chupe hai

Shayad ye raaz hi hai, jo tere mere beech me deewar ban kar khade hai

Abhi tak mujhe mere pyaar ka, ehsaas nahi hua hai

Par itna to mai jaanta hu, tu meri liye maangi hui dua hai

Kaash ye faasle fana ho jaaye kaash mere dil ki baat juba pe aa jaaye

Kaash mere andar ko wo aag bujh jaaye

Wo aag jo kaafi puraani hai mere beete kal ki choti si kahani hai

Shayad wo waqt kareeb hai shaqad mai tera aur tu hi mera naseeb hai

Agar tu shama hai, parwana hu mai

Teri kaatil adao ka deewana hu ma

Edited by Pearl_Oyster - 11 years ago