Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 24)

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atipreet

@atipreet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Wow...a new thread early...last update was fantabulous..cant wait to read more..!!

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fffan123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

Love the story. Looking forward to next part.

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Maria Ahmed

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

umm i am still to comment..but trust e dear I soo love te part..iam not ine but tonight i'll comment:)

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_disha_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Comment for chap 38 !

Your updates always manage to include little bits of an everyday routine which we may even look over in a rush and give it a whole new life in this story.

From Khushi hovering like a mother hen over the breakfast table , to Madhumati's silent observations , to her bade papa's exaggerated views on the amount of work load his little girl is carrying on her dainty shoulders to finally Arnavji and his ever present ruggedness! The simple act of her knotting up his tie just filled my heart with unexplainable warmth.

So very clever and perceptive of Khushi to go to Madhumati with all her questions and also a very sound and well thought out response from Madhumati as well.

The amount of effort Khushi is taking in to understand her husband is commendable but whats more important to note is that she is doing all this so very selflessly in love!

Finally we see a growth between them as husband and wife ,and also the inclusion of their physical intimacy adds a lot of weight to their relationship.

The entire rain scene was mesmerizing and with the sexy picture you created of Khushi ... i did not expect anything less from Arnav !

About time to take this relationship to the next level...bahut hue baby steps !

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mrin0709

@mrin0709

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

Oh.. the spamming criterias are 😭

Anyways.. still I must congratulate you for the new thread and also tell you that i am very very eager to see the relation between Arnav and Khushi progress...

You have woven this story so beautifully... hats off to you!!!

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madhu1210

@madhu1210

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Marvelous.. new thread!!

👏

Its all your effort, truly deserved it...

of course eagerly waiting for coming chapters...

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rainyday3000

@rainyday3000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

I am "Making this thread Mine" ;)

I am ready to read what khushi gifts her Arnavji on his birthday!!! ;)

Thanks for the note...I was not aware of the new spamming rules...u saved me from spamming!!! :)