An ArHi SS:Shaadi #3 *Completed, Moved to open blog* - Page 32

I am a new reader and wanted to let you know that you can add another fan to your long list of loyal readers. You have an amazing gift and your writing style is quite sophisticated. I just discovered you a couple days ago and ave gone back to your index and started reading your earlier pieces. I read Scandalous in one sitting and loved it. You stay so true to the characters and yet manage to surprise with your twists and plot turns. I look forward to continuing to read you on your new blog.

As someone who discoverd IPK pretty late in the game (Sep 2013), I am grateful to be able to read talented and dedicated writers like you that have kept the spirit of Arnav and Khushi alive in our hearts long after the curtains came down.

Looking forward to reading a lot more from you!👏

I read your ff for the first time. Am in awe to say the least. Loved the absolute new conceptualisation and your way of story telling.

Looking forward to more.

Anu

dey R made 4 eachother 😊

I wuld lyk to knw mre abt sheetal n hw c is related to arnav

N evn abt la, c is sumwat mysterious

surly i 'll feel hurt wid arnav's wrds bt i do undrsnd hw he mst b feelng

khushi is takn li8ly by evry1 nw atleast arnav is dere 4 her

I find payal tit-bit selfish

Oh my Khushi... won't give up a challenge... I was sweating while she was actually doing all the clothes shreading 😉... Arnav does surprise khushi and me as well... from all the talk about his way of living life... he is quite good at controlling himself... he is so attracted to her physically but slowlyhe is understanding her as well maybe without his own knowledge... I am just waiting for that attraction to turn in love and care... right now I love all his flirting which give increases khushi's heartbeats

The day was just worst for Khushi... she did nothing wrong (she just thought about others except herself) yet everything seemed to turn against her... the blame by Aman and her family not including her in their decisions... maybe they did overlook it with their excitement... but that was not right... Khushi scarificed her life for her sister and now its like they got what they want and we don't need you... I was hoping that Arnav would help her out with her sad mood and you made him the only person to see that she was sad and worried... I think shes without her knowledge trusting Arnav and talking to him about how she is feeling... the part I loved was him making her do stuff to keep her mind busy... My feeling is they both understand eachother at a different level and they are discovering it slowly...

Coming to the kiss... I was really happy when Khushi decided to explore her feelings... finally she thought about herself atleast once... I lvoed how Arnav say "Go ahead" and Khushi is confused... I guess she was expecting him to take the lead... Arnav not leaving this opportunity to kiss her out of her senses leaving her wanting more... He is enjoying it as the same time wanting more... Oh I am just waiting for them to more comfortable with each other... they are going to be hot and very passionate... 😉

We have to Read this Story and will read there..anywhere you post it..period!

And as far as update us concerned..its was great..just loved it

Totally unexpected things happened..for better ofcourse..

I am loving their bonding

:)

I'm all blushing☺️

He's already attracted to her. She herself was pulled in to him.

and her asking for a kiss amazed me. I imagined it to happen.

loved it to bits.

I'll be with you whatever u decide and read it wherever u write.😊

Is ek "kiss" ki keemat tum kya jaano Arnav Babu

Jo khwaabhon mein socha tha, usse kaee badhkar hai...ye ek "kiss"

Mere dil ke adhoore armaanon ko poora karta hai...yeh ek "kiss"

Aur man mein chhupaaye dher saare khwahishon ko khul ke zaahir karta hai...ye ek "kiss"

OMG...an impromptu poem!!! That too in Hindi...now that's a first for me...

I must put up the English translation..

You cannot imagine the value this single kiss holds for me Arnav

It far surpasses anything that I may have ever dreamed of..just one kiss

It fulfills the unrealised desires of my heart...just one kiss

And it brings to the fore, the millions of secret wishes I had kept long-hidden..just one kiss

I apologise in advance for the lameness...

But you are to blame dear, I think I have lost control of my senses and wandered in to dreamland...what with making up couplets on the spot n all...

I thought that the first kiss (the baarish one) from "Shattered" was one of the best ever..but this one...ohhh...this one...

I loved the concern that Arnav shows and Khushi's cognizance of the same...it's not just about all the physical awareness (not that I'm complaining about that) and that makes this story so much more special!!

Coming to the A/N, I was planning to suggest to you that you move to a blog..it is the best way..you made a great decision..

One suggestion though...if it is possible for you, please do continue to update the subject of this current thread when you post an update...I feel it is any easy way for us to know if there are new updates...as I would hate to add to the huge list of PMs that you may already be sending...

Otherwise, ff course...I will stalk your blog... :)

And I do not know if you read Dr. Tina's blog...but there was an issue with the large number of comments posted there..in the sense that it caused pages to load slowly etc...so she created a separate page for just comments...may be you could do that from the start..just a suggestion...

I think that it is also wonderful that you are planning to move all your previous works to the blog...I would love to reread all your beautiful stories and a blog is much easier to navigate stories with several chapters..

I am so glad that you were not deterred by all that went on in the past few days on IF..

Love your spirit and your generosity...

Cheers

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