An ArHi SS:Shaadi #3 *Completed, Moved to open blog* - Page 34

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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update dear loved it plz update soon and regarding the deceison i dont hava any issues as long as u can send a pm or via email abt the updates
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Posted: 11 years ago

Just read part 2 and reread part 1, one word that comes to my mind is AWESOME...I don't say this because of your amazing writing talent (anyone who has read your stories could vouch for that) I say this because you have been able to mesmerise all of us yet again inspite of the upheaval that is currently on the forum with you at the centre of it all. I applaud you for keeping it together and bouncing back with amazing chapters.

Coming back to the story...

Lavanya: there is something off about her, she has hots for Arnav? She seems distant, wonder why? Dhruv is friendlier still ( if compared on employee-employer relationship meter)

Manorma: she is Khushi's mother-in-law away from home, ek killer look hi kaafi hai

Nandkishore: the guy who probably knows minutest of detail when it comes to his boss, he is definitely surprised with Arnav's choice, although he is being nice to Khushi, is he just curious or judgemental too?

Aman: ummm...I don't think he could have remained calm under the given circumstances, blaming Khushi for the whole debacle came naturally to him, I guess he will come around soon, once he realises that his anger was misplaced.

Khushi: since this story is from her perspective, we are clear about her stand. Poor girl, she did everything for her family and here she is, completely sidelined by the people whom she loves the most. My heart goes out for her as she paints a lonely picture. On the other hand she should realise if her family would have forgotten her, they wouldn't have called her too..may be in time her family would realise their mistake and make amends especially Payal.
She is having a tough time controlling her urges/cravings <which are not just for Belgian chocolates> She has given into the first temptation, boy oh boy she wants more( am already breathing heavy here ). She is falling for a powerful man with killer looks, amazing bank balance, and a golden heart...all her escape routes have been terminated already.

Arnav: he is still a mystery... He wants more from his so called 'marriage of convenience'. After declaring so openly that he is physically attracted to her (not to mention his nonstop innuendos)he has taken pain to explain his behaviour, we know he cares ...waiting to see where it leads to.

Oh you have still not revealed how he knew Khushi's name even before the first meeting and who the heck is Sheetal?

About your note: I am new here, as in I actively started using IF sometime back and am not aware of the rules and regulations, but with all that I have read so far it seems unfair, I myself enjoyed reading the poems and was actually having fun waiting for your next update, you are blessed with awesome readers who are immensely talented themselves
I respect your decision to move your stories to the blog and I thank you for keeping it open for all to access, hope you are able to share your blog link with me, will be sending you a buddy request in a short while

And finally, please keep writing...long live ARSHI
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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all, here's my 2 cents worth for the DT and the insecure people who started this scam - you are forcing one of the nicest, kindest and brilliant ff author to go on a blog. She has been such a compassionate writer, interacting with her readers to let them know that they matter as much as the writer. There are not that many selfless talented writers on this forum and the reason why there are still so many visits on this forum is for people like her. Once the blogs become the place for the ffs, there will be little to no reason to be here anymore. More IF loss than Juhi as her readers will follow her. JUHI, I will read your stories anywhere you post it as your writing is truly amazing. Let me know the blog address and I will be there as will all your supporters.
So about this long awaited chapter, boy you did not disappoint at all. The heat is up! And the best part is Mrs. Raizada is fully aware of him and the reactions to her body due to her husband's proximity. I am so glad that she initiated and asked for that kiss in the end. He would have had no problem getting her there faster but he wanted her to realize this and come to him. I feel he is trying to make her aware of how important she is not because she is the provider of something or support to someone like she was to her family or Aman but because she is an amazing person. He is giving her the boost to her confidence to grow as a woman and fully including her in all his plans. He is just so dreamy! I just came back from Cali and boy the ASR of San Fran was on my mind a lot. He is awakening her to what it is to be Kushi - not the one that is doing what everyone expects her to do but the one who is getting in touch of her need as a human being, the need to be heard and appreciated. Her mum was too busy to hear the worry in her voice after Aman fired her but Arnav saw she was disturbed and ensured she talks about it and that she is kept busy enough to not delve more into it. Similarly, she is also becoming the person who is offering him support, the man who is used to being the provider is getting some care from someone else and I am sure he is enjoying it too. NK though I can't figure out. I am sure he will be a nice character but hopefully no Kabab mein haddi (not sure of the spelling). Still trying to figure out what is up La's a** and you drop Sheetal. Who is this? Anjali's pet that she left behind in Cali? Just guessing that if it was a person, Arnav would have shown more concern. Well worth the wait Juhi! Each chapter is bringing them closer physically too, what should we expect in chapter 4?
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Posted: 11 years ago
The Update is just so wonderful that I read it twice and then thrice about the A/N
We'll be with you on whatever you decides. Some IF rules are seriously difficult for my brain to understand. Anyways, Hoping for next chapter soon.

Your stories are just so brilliant and you rock!

Dont be dishearten!
Edited by ...Ashley - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I dont hv words for ur writing stuff you are beyond any words
Juhi : n i mean it every time when i read ur single update
I just loose my intrest in other ff/ss n other writers im not
Saying dey are not gud but u r a best writer among dem
Im realy impresed with ur writing style, words, maturity, clarity
N so more thngs well in da end it was awwwsummm
Hunny thank you so mch for ur hardwork... Plz update soon
I hv to say dis coz i thnk i cnt survive wid out ur work...!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh part 2 was awesome! :D
wats wrong with aman??
oh n i understand khushi...her feelings abt not being even taken into consideration when fixing payals shaadi
aww arnav was such a sweetheart... helping khushi by keeping her busy... oh n the kisss :D
amazing chap...
oh n i dont mind u shifting to the blog :) easier to follow the updates too! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Love,love, love your story, actually stories.
To the extent that when I was in India in November and had no wifi at my house and you were writing seduction. At every opportunity to get wifi I would search for your updates on seduction.

That being said, I am also guilty of being a silent reader for most part.
And now am panicked as to how I will get the link for the blog. Can you please let me know.

Thank you so much for writing the wondefful stories. You truly are one of the best writers on the forum.

Thanks again,
New_arshifan
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super awesome update dear
Really enjoy your writing style, the way u explain simple gestures and feelings is great, it makes reading ur work very enjoyable
Both parts were kinda like khushi's POV, especially liked the part in which she's discovering her own feelings which are so new to her and she's trying to figure it out. She's feeling so lonely, but trying to find her solace in her husband, hayeee so cute
I'm following u where ever u update, I'm addicted to ur stories, can't leave them :p
Feel bad that u r on ur vacation and u have to go through so much trouble
Thanx for the pm
Wil be waiting eagerly for the next part 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...they are trying really hard to control their desires...poor khushi !
she had to forget the bad things happened to her...
they will take it slow and steady or will they be in hurry?
loved the update
thnx fr pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update and beautifully written 😛
How did biosys come to know that Khushi would be leaving with in 1 mth. Does lavanya have anything to do with it.
Aman could just not blame khushi for the contract he lost.

Khushi wants to be selfish and do things that she needs for herself.

Arnav was such a sweetheart because he knew she was depressed even before she could share it with him and helped her to come out of it by keeping her busy for the whole day?

How is sheetal related to Anjali and Arnav.


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