An ArHi SS:Shaadi #3 *Completed, Moved to open blog* - Page 31

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Posted: 11 years ago
congo on new thread...
superb update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey ...
God ... You literally make me feel an array of emotions in just one chapter ... The best part is that there is no single dull moment ... Or a time when I feel like a particular scene is just being OTT !!!

The sympathy that I felt for khushi after viewing her unimportance in others life, the blush that automatically creeps up on my cheeks after reading these sizzling hot scene between Arnav and Khushi, the adoration that I feel for Arnav for trying to occupy Khushi's thoughts so they don't become sorta self-deprecating and depressing and again the tingles that I feel too when they kissed is something that comes so naturally and I swear Arnav and Khushi and especially the one in your fic are characters that seem real to me ...
Their actions, emotions and feelings are like something that I feel within myself too !!!
So thank you for creating these lovable characters and a story that just progresses ...

Now here's my take on the so-called spamming ...
The world that you've created just made all your fans just reside in it and take refuge in it ... No matter how our asli duniya is your story just gives few moments of happiness that sometimes many of us lack in our lives ... I live and breathe Arshi !! So the people who have got a problem regarding many of our comments need to get a life ...
I'm totally cool with wherever you decide to carry on this mindblowing, fantastic and brilliant FF of your's ... :)

Thank you so much for the pm :)
P.S: Did I just rant and gush at the same time?? Hope not ... ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.. Beautiful description of kushi's emotional turmoil..
If we sacrifice a lot no one knows the true value of us, they take us fir granted..at times we need to live for ourselves.. Glad atleast Arnav s there to support her.. hope atleast they keep supporting each other in times of trouble..
Congrats again on ur beautiful writin
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Posted: 11 years ago
You are an amazing writer. The way you describe the sexual tension between Arnav and Khushi is amazing, and the undressing scene is brilliantly written. 😳
Thank you for a wonderful update.
See you on the blog. 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Juhi !!!
First of all I'll address the more pressing issue of blog. You can update wherever it suits you and you feel at freedom to to do, be it a blog, IF or any other alternative. I'll be more than happy to discuss your stories on your CC link. All this is gud and workable till teh time tou keep writing and sharing it with us... dont worry about me leaving your side by not reading your stories further... I will always follow your work like the pug puppy ...😉 just keep sharing the links... You ework is too irresistible to be shunned !!!
Coming back to your update, gurlll you left me panting for breathe in both the parts. The sexual tension between the two was so palpable, though initiatior changed in both the parts...
The mind reader and concerned Arnav was so adorable. The need to become someone's center of thought and action is so real...Could completely relate with Khushi's feeling !!
Thanks for the pm.. Dont forget to send me your blog's link.. will be waiting...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
feeling bad for khushi
hope she will find the solace in arnav's arms
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesum update loved it its really sad to know bout wat happrn in last days i m happy with watever u dicided as long as i can read ur lovely stories
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is so interesting. i did not think that khushi would ask for a kiss
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Posted: 11 years ago
Juhi, First of all about your note, I am sad to see this happen and I have always enjoyed the wonderc omments, poems, deciations and whatever your readers put up in your thread, but if this leads to a blog then HELL YES I AM FOLLOWING YOU WOMAN.


Now for the update,

woh kehtey hain na DAER AYE DURUST AYE

apnya daernsey update kiya magar kiya update kiya!

The sexual tension is so well written that I was biting my nails by the time she finally opened the darn zip.

Why do I have the feeling that Arnav is behind all what happened with Aman...

but then aap na chahtey huay bhi choti choti cliffs chour deyti hain jiss pay readers hang ho jatey hain 😛

Hope you are having a wonderful time in India.
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update...things are just getting started

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