☺️ First things first...this story should undergo an alteration when it comes to its title.And I am about to rechristen it. for me, shaadi will now be known as-
Shaadi- A Steamy tale of a Sexy Arnav and a Seduced Khushi, who are on the verge of doing things Scandalous, giving in to their needs which are definitely not Sins ☺️
The prologue had been read earlier, yet reading it again in context with the entire chapter ensured that it still had the rightful impact, not just on our dear Khushi but the readers as well😉 And while she struggled against the throes of her flagrant desire, I couldn't help but hyperventilate over here. I'm glad I delayed reading this to a time when I was at leisure...this chapter, like wine had to be enjoyed languorously; the end result was ☺️
While I fangirl over the arnav of this story, I should also point out towards all that goes around the duo. NK brought out slight hesitation in the beginning before I settled into accepting him, just like Khushi. Also, Manorama's silent criticism made me smile; the woman might be a house help, but her behavior was reminiscent of a typical mother in law.
I also loved the part where Khushi deduced Arnav's need to be the one who nurtures rather than the other way round...and the revelation of another aspect of Arnav's past by him did nothing if not strike an intangible bond between them.
Sheetal still continues to perplex me; I know it could be nothing in the end, but I can only say that once her part in this story is revealed.
As for Aman, I cannot say that I detest him; men tend to behave in the manner he did. what i do like about the part in which he was mentioned that Khushi held her poise, choosing to focus on what he did for her earlier rather than venting out more than necessary. Says a lot about her as a person.
What I am disappointed with is Payal. She has proven to be a selfish person, and although I couldn't have been happier with the turn of events that were triggered by her action, or the lack of it, I can't help but berate her for not being the sister than Khushi has been to her.
The kiss ☺️...it was not just the actual act, but also the verbal acumen and subsequent usage of the same by Arnav that made it a resounding experience😉. Although I must marvel him for his poise...hamaara Arnav badaa self disciplined hai😳
I don't know if you wrote this chapter in Amreeka or mera Bharat mahan, I just hope no one else was standing behind you all the while😉 😉
About the note: The decision to shift from IF although unfortunate is rightful; a person can only take to a certain extent, with there being no fault of hers. I wish you did not have to endure it all. As for the blog, I have no problems with one; that there will be no interruption in your stories itself is heartening. If I could, I would suggest one thing; go for wordpress. I have an account over there; the shift will become easier for me. even if that doesn't happen, I'm on board😊
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