14 Days || A Kriyaansh Short Story|| Updated on page 10

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Ramya sree

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

awesome update
kal mei long comment dunge
thoda busy hun

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k.sweet

@k.sweet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

awesome update

kr convo was superb n

liked the way kria retorted back

thanks for the pm

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alex754

@alex754

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Posted: 11 years ago

#73

God i just cant imagine rey in that way
I cant see kriya all broken
Please see that kriya is not hurt
I am likimg this
Ur way writing is sooo unique
Thanks for pm

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Aditi M.

@reyaditi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#74

argh... 😡 i hate dat shivam...he iz d one who aggravated rey to spend a nite wid kriya...god...n how cn rey even rey think of hurting such a beautiful n innocent lady..
arghhh...swayam plz give rey some piece of ur mind n diz tym seriously...
bichari kriya...she doesnt even knw hiz plan...
buh shez suprb...d way shez replying him..i likd it...
shez not gonna fall so easily rey...so back off...
itz betr to do mr. reyu...
do write soon...i vl b waiting...
thnk u mannu...for d update...

Edited by reyaditi - 11 years ago

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Vrutanshi

@kreya204

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Posted: 11 years ago

#75

Hey!!! Grt part!!
Ye ladke hai ki kya hai??!!! 😡
Ladki dekhi nahi line marna shuru!! Aur ladki ne naa bol diya to frnd ko bol k revenge k plans banana shuru!!!
Ye shivam ka screw dhila hai kya!!!
Aur iss rey k ego ka ku6 hoga ki nahi!!!
Kriya ne a6a retort kiya!!!
Widout saying it out in words she actually rejected him n dat too so politely!!!
Dis gal surely knws wen n whr to create controversy n wen to stop ppl from creating it!!
Composed n calm kriya!!! Well dats smthng new!!
N iss rey ki akal ghaas khane gayi hai kya?! 😡
I totally agree wid swayam!!!
Vo ek esi ladki hai who doesnt go fainting around or drooling around seeing dem!!! N so dey wanna break her!!! Wt*!!!

Mehnaz yaar tu sachi mein solid likhti hai!!!
Gumrah walon ko bol tujhe hire kar lenge!!
Ego troubles k khaufnaak outcomes!!! Tu concept rakhiyo!!
Fir dekh gumrah walon k dill garden garden honge aur tera bank balance!!! 😉 😆

No bt on a serious note... It was fab!!!
N ese hi update kiya karo!!!
Tera update padhke me apna tension bhul gayi!!!
Chalo nw gtg... Assignment n journals mera wait kar rahe hai!! N ya nxt update jaldi dena...
N ya 1 more thing... Ab ye padhne k baad mujhe nahi lagta ki rey change hoga!!!

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Mahnaz Gul

@NoMoreUsing

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: kreya204
Hey!!! Grt part!!
Ye ladke hai ki kya hai??!!! 😡
Ladki dekhi nahi line marna shuru!! Aur ladki ne naa bol diya to frnd ko bol k revenge k plans banana shuru!!!
Ye shivam ka screw dhila hai kya!!!
Aur iss rey k ego ka ku6 hoga ki nahi!!!
Kriya ne a6a retort kiya!!!
Widout saying it out in words she actually rejected him n dat too so politely!!!
Dis gal surely knws wen n whr to create controversy n wen to stop ppl from creating it!!
Composed n calm kriya!!! Well dats smthng new!!
N iss rey ki akal ghaas khane gayi hai kya?! 😡
I totally agree wid swayam!!!
Vo ek esi ladki hai who doesnt go fainting around or drooling around seeing dem!!! N so dey wanna break her!!! Wt*!!!

Mehnaz yaar tu sachi mein solid likhti hai!!!
Gumrah walon ko bol tujhe hire kar lenge!!
Ego troubles k khaufnaak outcomes!!! Tu concept rakhiyo!!
Fir dekh gumrah walon k dill garden garden honge aur tera bank balance!!! 😉 😆

No bt on a serious note... It was fab!!!
N ese hi update kiya karo!!!
Tera update padhke me apna tension bhul gayi!!!
Chalo nw gtg... Assignment n journals mera wait kar rahe hai!! N ya nxt update jaldi dena...
N ya 1 more thing... Ab ye padhne k baad mujhe nahi lagta ki rey change hoga!!!

thanks for the reply. Happy that you liked it...

Yaar gumraah Walon se it baat kar na mere paas contact number nahi hai... Phir shayad next season Mein Mujhe as a writer le lein... Just kidding par mere bank balance ka sawaal hai try kario

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

👏 👏 Hey its awesome yr
loved it
Can u plz PM me

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

👏 Lovely & Awesome
When u update d next part
plz do pm me

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Tisha

@Jiana.ArSHa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

amazing written!!😃

superb description!!👏

sarcastic sarcasms!!😆

all in one perfect update..👍🏼

kria's attitude ws like mind blowing..😎

REY omg!! BEHAVING TOTALLY LIKE A PERVENT..

KILL THAT MORONIC BLOODY freakingly irritating shivam on my behalf!!🤬

saint and sensible swayam was lyk typical SWAYAM..🤓

loved it..🤗

waiting for nxt update!!!

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Pray_For_Peace

@Pray_For_Peace

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

the undying attempts of Rey were really amusing... Kria's retorts back each time was so like her... Swayam the only sane person in the group... and Shivam is umm... well Shivam. Sorry, nothing good comes to my mind hearing that name

Overall the continuation of the prologue was pretty good, loved the way it was written...it was with the flow and that is something I really liked about this update.

Ok, I think I wrote a bit too much😆 and thanks for the pm 😊