#4 - AsYa/KaBhi FF: AsYa's Love Story... COMPLETED !!! - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: DevikaRavish

Bano.. That was a nice update.. I loved the way Asad narrated the story of Zoya and Ayaan and got Najma to admit that girl was innocent was so so sweet...😊😊

Asad being there for Zoya next to her as she rested was very sweet of him.. and his nightmare... He loves are so much


Thank you Devika!! 🤗
Yes the story telling had to be this way or Najma would have stopped listening from the very beginning 😡 aaj kal ke bache! 🤣
Asad has fallen really hard in love with Zoya!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: shamagvl45

Lvd d bnd btw asad nd najma
nd asya scene was so sweet
waitng fr d najma reaction nd pls turn her positive
nt able to c hr as negative
update soon nd waitng fr some mre asyaholic scenes


Asad loves Najma very much! 😳
Wherever u place them, AsYa r always too cute and sweet! 😳
Haha we will see positive or negative 😆
Dont worry i have a strongstock of Asya u will definitely love it!! 😃 i cant wait to post that part even though i have to start writing them! 😆
Thank you! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: grad2011

congrats on new thread!!!

awesome update!
thanks for the pm :)

Thank you! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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unres soon Swathi! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: ashrina

Wow!!! That was a cool update...
I really loved how asad was always there for zoya...
Poor najma...but still she deserves it for wat all she
said to a poor soul...
Oh my!!! Asad had a nightmare about his own life...
But now that life is upside down...except for his love zoya...
How much he loves her...I wish she reciprocates his love soon...
Wow! I love dilshad and zoya bonding...so sweet!!
Haha!!! Asad making fun of zoya...haha!!!...poor her...

loved the way as ad narrated the story in the form of fairy tale...
I just love this story...superb...
Fantastic story...
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

Thank you so much Ashrina! U r really sweet! 🤗
Asad has always been the person on whom anybody could rely but Zoya, she became his pillar 😳
Bechari Najma 😆
Mera baby andar se bikhra padha hai 😭
How much Asad loves her! 😳 his love made me fall in love with my own created character 😳
Mother-daughter 😳 Asad loves tontease necause he knows that it bring a smile on thrir faces 😳
Asad had to tell Najma this way or else she wouldnt have listened to jim 😳
Awww Thank you so much!! I m very happy that u love it sooo mich! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sweetnandu

awesome but u shud have continued it..


Thank you 😳 sorry but i needed to sleep was writing till 5am! 🥱
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: aashiqua

I liked how Asad made Najma
understand (I love Asad )
Want to see how Najma
reacts ? Will she say sorry ?!?


I love Asad too! 😳 😆
Reaction? Wait to know! 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: nikki1810


finally ab najma ko deemaag aayega. She was uselessly cursing zoya. Poor zoya. But even najma is not at fault. Any one at her place would have thought so. Good update overall. Waiting for the next chapter. Plz update sooonnn...


Finaally people r seeing things from Najma's POV! 😆
Thank you! 😳

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