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Arshi67

@Arshi67

Sparkler

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Hey I hope you continue getting such random thoughts.

That was such fun reading about the voice in Arnav's head.

Nice twist as it's usually Khushi mumbling to herself!

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

oh god
wow so this was interesting
so she came back to look after di child huh
as anj was too weak to look after him herself
and that provided our arnie enough time to realise that life without khushi is anything but normal
dude she cant let aarav call her maasi
as you were right that would make you her brother
no wonder he chocked on his coffee
which he was doing a lot
so mama ma and mami aarav knows how to call huh
the last one curtesy of his mama
hmmm she sure got him there
where does she come up with suhc ideas
but good she did right
or he wouldnt realise about his feelings for her
2 years is long time to realise the same
but glad he did so
thanx to pushes by khushi indirectly
cheers for pm

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

I love everything you write, but this one is amongst your best.

I loved it.

Certain dialogues are masterpieces.

That could be arranged" has to be one of them.

Loved the insinuation behind it.

And Aarav calling Khushi , Mami , was so cute.

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tina

@cpervaiz

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

brilliant one
i just love arhi stories with babies ( i'm going through a baby phase right now) so that thank you for that
thank you so much for the pm:)

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Fantastic shot 👏

Love it. 👍🏼

Love the pace you used to show the actual relation between Arnav and Khushi. At first I thought that they were couple but they were very much single.

Two years, Arnav took two years to find Khushi suitable to be a part of his life n perfect for his family. His every predict action for Khushi went wrong and Khushi proved herself as a strong, confident n mature girl.

Tailor?? Only Khushi could use the word tailor instead of fashion designer. ROFL 🤣

Adore the bonding between Khushi n Aarav. Khushi is so sweet n has a very big heart that she openly n happily helped Anjali n Aarav when they need proper care. Doing this she won Arnav heart by treating every one with utmost care n like her family. Khushi is a girl with golden heart.

Khushi was Aarav second mother so she was right to worry that due to having no close relation with Aarav what will he call her. She became very attach to the kid, Khushi always comfortably n easily got attach with kids.

If she calls Di Maasi, she might start calling you Bhaiya next.😆

I laugh out loud on this thought of Arnav.

He solved khushi's problem that his nephew will call her his mami, she will be soon Arnav's wife.

Very unique way to show a girl his love n proposing her. Love it.

Beautiful shit.

I enjoy a lot reading it.

Edited by Javeria3991 - 11 years ago

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janu

@Janu75

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

At first thought its their kid and you bowled me. Over!

Eagerly waiting for last chapter of M... And wishing luck to you

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

just brilliant! Only khushi can dare to call a fashion designer a tailor and get away with it😆

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varshapan

@varshapan

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

This one leaves me grinning like the cat that drank the milk on the sly... you once again managed to get me into arnav's character. so at the end of the story when he promises aarav a mami, I feel I am on top of the world.
dear nafisa, you would do well with mdjnd.. it would just flow as easily as it always has... Cheers