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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

I simply loved this OS. Was like I travelled a whole journey with Arnav getting to know Khushi, her nuances, her mood and getting amazed, transfixed, curious and wishing to be always around her. Such an apt title too.

The moments of hilarity in this one, really had me chuckling. 😆

Such a well written, well thought out OS.

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mrignayani

@mrignayani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

My heart was all muddled with warmth just like Arnav...wonderful is just too small a word to describe this OS!

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soumee

@-pearlblu-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Hahaha...i almost fell off my bed...arnavs monologue with himself ws the best!!

Especially this line, "If he calls her Maasi, she might start calling you Bhaiya next."

N then, their teasing n flirty conversation...ufff!!!! Ankita, this ws cute cute cute!!!!!!!

N all the best for mdjnd last chap sweety...i know its gna b awesome!!😃

🤣

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Uthra

@Viji79

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Every time I read a beautiful story, this is what I think. Will this magic ever fade? Will weever move on? Will this craziness ever reduce?

Any situation, any small or big event, any movie, Bollywood or Hollywood, I can't stop thinking 'how will this feel if it we're to feature arnav and khushi'. Hell, to me, Arnav's SUV became Maximus, when I saw Eugene asking rapunzel 'you okay?'

I don't know what was your inspiration to write this. May be you recently had a niece or a nephew or your friends had.

It was beautiful. Simple but cute. He almost proposed. And khushi is not dumb, she was smart enough to gauge the meaning and blush. The entire scenario was so heartwarming, that I was left smiling a long time after I finished reading it.

Wonderful. 👏

Edited by Viji79 - 11 years ago

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happypeace

@happypeace

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

how can you write just so heart warming pieces everytime!!
loved it!
awee!! the little aarav playing cupid <3
arnav's reactions were hilarious!! 🤣
every single bit of it was amazing!!!!

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Awesome OS!!

It was super good!

Khushi teasing Arnav and Arnav thinking of Khushi calling him bhaiya was so funny!

When Arnav said, "that could be managed"...I couldn't control the huge smile on my face. It was a very Arnav thing to say!

It was so so sweet!!

Great job and thank you for the pm!

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Beautiful writing!! Loved Khushi's teasing and Arnav's musings while watching Khushi care for Aarav.! Arnav's horrified thoughts when Khushi suggested she be called 'Maasi' were hilarious 😆

Loved the way how finally the confession came about and Khushi became Aarav's mami 😉

Wow, you write beautifully dear!! ⭐️