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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: deepkriti


thnk u!!😃
bhaag milkha bhaag😆 *so happy to see your comment after such a long time*😃


You have no idea how much I missed commenting here😳
Me no milkha😛
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#92

Originally posted by: deepkriti


Glad that you liked it yaar!
it seems like you are very happy with the update. so me happy too😃😃😃
Itna saara please. not taken. I'll try my best to update fast


I love KKHH like anything and this entry...ahhh...😳😃
Dil garden garden ho gaya...
Hoping to see the update soon😉
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#93

A new relation

While Rey was busy in admiring taani, she was still trying hard to control her blush. As if this was not enough, a few children while playing switched on the music player making it even more embarrasing for them.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=36t5VfF6FFc


Taani's eyes moved to the music player cursing it for making it more difficult. Rey though had least problems. Infact, he thanked it 1000 times in his heart cause the lyrics were just made for them.

Tum Aaye To Aaya Mujhe Yaad

Gali Mein Aaj Chand Nikla

Taani looked in his eyes which only conveyed happiness and inner solace. Her own heart rejoiced as she realised that he was happy.

Jaane Kitne Dinoon Ke Baad

Gali Mein Aaj Chand Nikla

Rey looked at her confused and embarrased face and a smirk reaches his face. A smirk that signifies his another chance to bring her back.

Jaane Kitne Dinoon Ke Baad

Gali Mein Aaj Chand Nikla

Gali Mein Aaj Chand Nikla

While the two were lost in each other, an old man entered with a basket of flowers .

"Arre! Memsahab ye kaha rakhu!" He shouted making them loose their balance. Rey fall on taani while rey's leg came in the man's way making him fall too. The basket flew out of his hand falling somewhere while the flowers gets showered on the love birds.

Swayam went instantly to switch off the player. He took sharon to a corner.

"Itna romantic to meine bhi nahi socha tha." Swayam whispered to sharon.

"Kitne pyaare lag rahe hai dono." Sharon gave a sigh.

"Sharon! Sab unhe hi dekh rahe hai. Do something!" He said.

"Oh!! Yeah right!" Sharon said and reached the main door where taani was still trying to get up while rey had no intentions to do so.

"Mrs Sharma! Dekhiye na Kya jodi hai!! Kitne pyaare lag rahe hai dono!" Sharon heard a lady. She giggled while taani gave her a 'I'll kill you' glare.

"Rey, humne tumhare liye alag se room rakha hai, so please tum main door se hatt jao." Sharon came on her knees and whispered in his ears while they were still in the same position.

"Huh..Kya?" Rey finally got out of his dreams realising where he was. He quickly got up and gave taani his hand. Without wasting a moment taani quickly accepted it getting up and managing herself.

Taani was feeling too embarrased to face him. Feeling her discomfort he tried talking to her.

"Actually..."

"Rey!!!" Before he could continue, vicky shut his mouth by giving a bone crushing hug almost choking his lungs.

"I missed you so much yaar!"Vicky started crying.

"Vicky I am choking!" Rey said trying to gain his breathe.

"Arre mera hone wala baby tujhe chachu bulane ke liye taras raha hai.Meine kitna samjhaya ki jab tum bahar aaoge chachu jaan aa jayenge. But vo hamesha complain karta hai." Vicky was crying like a girl. Everybody felt like hitting their heads with wall.

"Chachu jaan!! Seriously dude!" Nil said.

"Exactly! Pregnant Neha hai aur mood swings isse aa rahe hai." Simmi said while everyone laughed.

"Guys! Remember me?! I am still choking!" Rey said and soon Neha and swayam took vicky away from rey.

"Rey, tum fresh ho jao. Taani tum please rey ko uska room dikha do." Sharon said as she walked away to find swayam.

"Tum kab aayi?" Rey asked finally breaking the silence as they were walking on the stairs.

"Bas aaj subah.." There was silence again.

"Uncle kaise hai??" He asked while her face becomes pale as the old memories came back.

"Bolo tum mere dreams pure karoge na!" She asked desperately.

"Offcourse taani! I'll fulfill every wish of yours. I promise." He said keeping his hands on her soft cheeks wiping her every tear. "But mein akela kyun, hum dono saath mein tumhara dream pura karenge."

"Kaash!! But this is not possible rey. Mein tumhara saath nahi de sakti. I know hum ye dream saath mein pura kar sakte hai par I can't walk with you on this path." Her tears fall and her sobs gets higher.

"But kyun.."

"Kyunki mujhe dad ke paas rehna hai.." He was confused. "Dad ke paas zyada waqt nahi hai rey. Mein unhe akela nahi chod sakti. Mujhe finally mere dad mile hai, I can't afford to loose him again. Jitna bhi time hai, I just wanna spend with him. Mein sab chod dungi..music bhi.. Mujhe bas dad ke saath rehna hai." Rey looked at her shocked. He always knew she had a pure heart but he never saw her this strong. He grabbed her wrist and pulled him into a tight hug. She cried hard wetting his shirt. Rey's eyes went blur as he realised he is in tears too.

"Meine decide kiya hai ki mein dad ke saath wapas jaongi. Unka buisness sambhalungi aur unhe bhi. I want you to make your own career, soar high in success, mein tumhe waha dekhna chahti ho jaha mein bhi kabhi nahi pahoch pati. I know you will, cause I know you can." Rey just nodded as his voice was choked.

"Hum aaj agar door bhi ho rahe hai, I know hum phir milenge." She said.

"Aur mein tumhe phir kabhi nahi jaane dunga, I promise." He said making his hold tight on her.

"Rey.." She almost whispered. "Mom will be happy , right?"

"Bahot zyada. She is so proud of you. See!" He pointed at the star which signified her mother. It was shining brightly.

"I love you taani."

"I love you too."

"He is no more.." She said in a low voice while he looked at her shocked. How could he never knew? He felt guilty for not being there in her toughest times. "Dad, tumhe bahot yaad karte the.." Taani said with a smile and he gave it back. He knew well, that what happened is past. Now he'll never let her face anything alone. He'll be with her and this time forever.

"Taani madam, luggage!" A worker came and handed his luggage in the room.

"To yeh hai mera room." Rey's eyes wandered over the entire place. "Tumhara kaha hai."

"Just in next corridor, first room. Sharon ke room ke bilkul paas." They stood there in another silence.

"Tum fresh ho jao, kuch chahiye ho to.."

"Tumhe bataonga, I know." He grinned. She smiled back and moved towards the door. As she was about to step out she stumbled as someone suddenly came in front of her.

"What the hell Rithvik! Dekh ke chal na!" Taani shouted.

"Taani, mere kurte ka button toot gaya." He said giving a pout.

"Ok fine, kuch karte hai." She said as her gaze moved to the confused rey staring at them and amused Rithvik looking at rey.

"I'm so sorry guys, mein intro karvana bhool gayi. Rey, this is Rithvik, my friend from Mumbai and my business partner . Rithvik, this is rey, my.." She didn't knew what to say.

"Rey, so nice to meet you dude!" Rithvik forwarded his hand while Rey accepted it with honour.

"Chale taani!" Rithvik dragged him out.

"Just wait!" Taani glared at him. "Tel me if you need anything." She told rey and he smiled back.

"Arre Nil mera kurta paas kar na!" Vicky yelled from bathroom.

"Mere paas bas yahi kaam hai kya?!! Dekh na swayam mera pajama dheela hai. Agar beech function mein gir gaya to kya izzat reh jayegi teri." Nil said dramatically.

"Meri izzat tera pajama girne se kaise chali jaegi?" Swayam asked.

"Arre kyunki tu mera dost hai. Jo tera hai vo mera hai. To teri izzat meri izzat!! Hai na Rey!" Nil looked at him expecting him to laugh at his joke.

"Thank God ki taani yaha nahi hai varna mein confuse ho jata ki engagement mein jao ya hospital." Rey said.

"Hospital kyun??" Nil asked.

"Kyunki taani tera mooh jo tod deti." Rey laughed and this time swayam joined him too. Nil pouted.

"Ye sab kya ho raha hai!!" Taani barged into the room without knocking only to find Vicky peeping out of bathroom half naked, Nil holding his pajama with his hand, swayam rofling on the bed and Rey busy in adoring himself in the mirror.

Rey looked at her and he realised that his biggest dream had come true. Here she was standing in a pink saree. A backless blouse adoring her feminity. The pallu was partially covering her cleavage and tugged on her waist. He was getting clear view of her waist and the desires which never hovered around him all these years started empowering him.

"This girl is really black magic. Don't know what happens to me whenever I see her." He thought to himself.

"Guys tum log abhi tak ready nahi hue!" Taani shouted. "Swayam its your engagement aur tum yaha bachhon ki tarah bed pe roll kar rahe ho." Swayam stood straight. "Nil, go and ask Simmi to give you another pajama." Nil ran holding his pajama tight while Swayam followed him. "Sheesh vicky!!! Ye lo kurta and come out asap." She tossed the kurta and he catched it in reflex. In another second, the bathroom door closed."And you.." She looked at rey." Mujhe pata hai ki ladkiyan tumpe bahot fida rehti hai par iska matlab ye nahi ki tum pure din mirror ke saamne pose karte raho." Rey gave him a embarrassed smile. "Now come fast." She turned and walked away.

"Aaj bhi bilkul waisi hi hai, Oh Taani!!! I love you.." Rey fall on the bed dreaming about his angel when the bathroom door opened.

"Yaha ek ek karke bakre shaheed ho rahe hai aur tu majnu ban raha hai saale." Vicky entered.

"Tu nahi samjhega vicky." Rey said still in his dreams.

"Agar mein nahi samjhata to aaj neha mere tag wala baby bump leke nahi ghoom rahi hoti."

"Chal na! Late ho raha hai." Rey said shrugging off.

"Ab mein zyada advises to nahi dunga but itna zaroor bolunga , kaise bhi karke usse hamesha ke liye apna bana le." Vicky said while Rey gets his another shock seeing this side of vicky.

"Lagta hai sachme neha ke mood swings tujhme aa gaye hai." Rey said and they both started laughing like maniacs. Soon they left for the ceremony.

"Swayam beta ring pehnao." Swayam's mom get her son out of his dreamland while he was already making plans of suhagraat seeing sharon in the desi avatar. Taani was standing beside sharon and facing Rey who was standing beside Swayam. It was then she noticed that his gaze was only on her. To get both the majnus out of their dreams she signalled Vicky to so something.

"Arre yaar! Shaadi nahi karni thi to bolna tha na swayam. Aise statue ki tarah to khada nahi hona padta."Vicky shouted making Swayam come out of his trance.

"Shaadi..Kisne kaha nahi karni...Mujhe karni hai..Sharon." He looked at sharon and in another minute slid down the ring in her finger. Everybody laughed seeing swayam's stammering. Taani was laughing whole heartedly. She didn't even realise when Rey came and stood next to her. It was only when she felt his touch on her hand when she turned to find him right beside her.

"Sharon beta, ye lo ab tum ring pehna do." Sharon's mom said.

Taani felt his grip getting a little tight on her wedding finger. As sharon slid down the ring on swayam's finger, taani felt a cold metallic thing getting into her finger. She turned and found him grinning. She was confused. She looked at her hand and that was when she realised what happened. She felt like to shout on top of her lungs, might kiss him in front of everyone or just do anything to make him realise how much special he made her feel today. In her ring finger was a platinum ring with encryption 'TR <3'

Edited by deepkriti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Res 😉
UNRES!!!
I'm speechless after reading the update!!!!
Aree aapne kuch ulta sidha khaa liya hai kya
Itne mast FFs start kiye and itna superb update!!!
On sunday I was again watching K2H2
And when SRK was going to camp
All I could do was smile and remember tge update!!!
And the ring thing kya bolu main
I myself was feeling to scream at top of my voice
Or kiss rey as Buddhu ne kuch sahi kaam sahi time pe kiya!!!
Waiting for next update
Wanna see how will tani react!!!
I said I was speechless and itni saari bakwaas bakki!!
Plz bare with me main aisi hi hu
Sorry late UNRES karne k liye you also no naa BOARDS coming

P.S - I'm first to comment!!!!
Edited by NIMRATKAUR - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Res/unres

Eepppsss😃
This is what I really wanted😃

Such a romantic meeting...hayyee

"He is Rey, my ____"
Dialogue conplete kyun nahi kiya😡
Not done yaar😒

Boys room wala scene🤣
Haayyooo rabba...yeh log kabhi nahi sudhar sakte😆

Swayam😆
Kitna dreamworld mein rehta hai yaar😆

Rey slid a ring in Taani's finger😃
Love you for this😳
But wahan end kyu kiya yaar...
Chal koi nai aage aur romantic wala update dena😉

Waiting eagerly😳
Edited by sashaz_sis - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
Omg that was awesome
Loved it 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
wow awesome update
TR meet is so super loved it
TR fb so emotional
chachu jaan funny hahahaha
boys part is so funny
taani in pink saree reys dream comes true
rey gift her ring how sweet
omg taani want to kiss him
whole update is amezing
update soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
lovely update...

taarey meet was totally filmy...

loved the flashback...

i cant describe how much i loved this chap...

rey sliding ring in her finger...awww...that was the best moment...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99
omg i love this update
amazing update dear

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...👏

Just love it...👍🏼

Taarey scenes r so cute...😃

waiting egarly for nxt part so update soon...😊

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