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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kr: usse aur except kiya bhi kya jaa shakta hai *mumbled under her breath*

Karan & ravi heard that suppressed their laugh.

Kriya bites her tongue as she got that ravi & karan heard her.

Kriya holds her one ear mouthed a sorry to 2 of them they just passed her a smile

Rey saw the silent interaction between the 3.

It was only the gang & 3 teacher in the college everyone else was gone as the college was over so they talked for a while then left.
days passed annual happened the same in the show expect because of taani kriya fell down.

After the performance rey takes kriya to the hospital. The doctor comes & a girl comes with him

Gi: kriya tum yaha kyun gayi mana kiya tha na tume

Kr: wo bhabhi actually

B: mai abhi rajveer ko call karti hu

Kr: bhabhi nahi bro. Ko nahi wase bhi wo mujhse already gussa hai agar iss bare mein pata chala toh fir toh mere murder hoga

R: sahi kaha tune tu pitne toh wali hai mujhe

Kr: b...b.. Bro wo.. actually.. baat.. Yeh hai ki

R: baat kya hai kriya aur tumhari iss harkat ka mai kya matlab nikalu

Kriya just looked down upset as her brother for the first time called her by her first name without a word kriya let the doctor do his work it did pain but she still did not make a ahh sound because she knew her brother's anger.
Ranvijay, Rey, swaron & taani were also here with them.

Kritika & neha came there.

Kri: Kriya tumhe mana kiya tha na ki yaha se hilna maat phir tumne

Kriya looking upwards.

Kr: universeji bro. Kya kum the ki aapne mumma ko bhi yaha bola liya*talking to herself*

Voice from back

V: kyun daat rahe ho meri beti

Kr: mom *screamed happily b'coz she knew her preeti mom would always be there to save her from her both of her mothers & brother's lecture.*

Ranvijay was shocked to see kritika & preeti there.

Preeti came sat next kriya hugging her

Pr: kesa hai mera bacha

Kr: mom this is not fair apne kaha tha ki aap aaj subha office nahi kane wale taki aap meri performance miss na karo aur aap ayeh bhi nahi *pout face*

Pr: kisne kaha ki maine tera performance nahi dekha. Tumse aake baat karti tumhara friend tumhe yaha le aya

Kr: mujhe ghar jana hai

Ra: esi harkat karne kisne bola tha agar esa nahi karti toh fir tujhe hospital se kab ki leave mil gayi hoti.

Na: veer jane do na kyun daat rahe ho bechari ko

doctor came in.

Pr: doctor hum kriya kab ghar le jate shakte hai

Do: jab aap che mrs. Singhania bus make sure ki jayega ka ki yeh apna pair pe zayad dabao na dale
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Awesome update...loved it...
Update soon next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Fab update.. :))
Cntunue soon..
And Bhai ka gussa haww bichari kria.. ;)
Lvng it.. :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Just read all the parts ...
And the storyline is simply amazing ...!
Please update soon, and PM me when you have updated, would love to read further on, thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Read all the chapters...:)
Nycc concept...:)
Update next part soon...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
finally the gang performed and kriya had injure herself... and got scold too
from her parents and brothers and then came up her rey mom to save her and
stop all of them from scold her... and the doctor had said she can get discharge
on condition... do continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesomeee updates👏
loved ittt😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Thank u guys for the comments...
Here comes the next part.

Love you guys.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
All the others were shocked except kriya's family & ranvijay

Pr: thank u doctor. Raj tum kriya aur uske friends ke sath aa jana

Sh: aunty actually mom dad ghar pe wait kar rahe honge so mujhe nikal na chahiyeh

Pr: arey ese kese beta ek kam karo apne parents ko abhi humere ghar bula lo

Sh: lekin aunty

Kri: preeti sahi kahe rahi hai beta ranvijay tum chalo mere sath.

Swayam & taani had left as their parents called sharon also left.

In raj's car

Na: so kriya koi ladka

Kr: bhabhi plz

Ra: kya bhabhi plz i promise mai usko kuch nahi karunga

Kr: koi nahi hai wase bhi aapse aaj tak baat koi chupi hai joh aaj chupaungi (she said bit upsetly)

Raj understood that she was hurt b'coz of his behavior earlier.

Ra: sorry na kiddo maaf karde na plz

Kr: its ok

Ra: sachi mein sorry angel tumhe uss halat mein dekh ke aur gussa aagya iss liye sorry.

Kr: its ok bro.

Ra: waise bolna koi hai kya jisse tu pasand karti hai

Kr: bro. Aap jante ho na hoga toh aapko bina care kiye bata. Dungi. (She said while hugging him & seat from the back.)

Naina smiled seeing their bond.

Rey was abit with surprised by brother & sister bond as he didnot have any sibling & kriya never told him about her brother.

They reached kriya's house which was a big mansion

Kriya's family was quite fun loving made feel comfortable. He was surprised that their parents were college friends.

They were sitting in television room. While their parents were in the garden.
Its was only 2 of them as raj-naina were in their rooms. While neha was at her house with her brother. & preeti also left as she didnt want to face ranvijay.

Kriya looked abit uncomfortable.

Re: tumne yeh baat kyun chupayi ki tumhare aur humare parents ek dusre ko kahi salo se jante hai.

Kr: batane se kya pharaf padta wase bhi tum ko meri baat tak suni nahi thi.

Kriya's phone kept beeping.

Kriya looked abit annoyed. But she didn't reply any of the message calls she was getting.

She replied one message & her phone stop buzzing.

Re: tum aur kya janti ho jo hum nahi jaante

Kr: tumhari mom ke bare mein but tum iss bare mein aapne dad se pucho toh acha hoga

Re: mom ke bare mein kesi hai woh thik toh hai woh mujhe unse milna hai

Kr: wo bikul thik hai tum already hospital mein mil chuke ho

Re: you mean doctor ne mrs. singhania kaha woh meri mom hai

V: ha woh teri mom hai

Rey turned saw his father there with kriya's mom

Re: sach mein dad

Ra: ha

Re: lekin agar mai unhe pasand nahi aaya toh.

Kr: woh tumse bohat pyaar karti hai

Re: agar karti hai toh woh mujhe aur dad ko chod ke kyun gayi

Ra: woh mein bata ta hu

Re: dad

Ranvijay tells him how he and preeti had misunderstanding & he had asked preeti to

leave. & she had left with rey's elder brother. When he realized his mistake it was too late

to find preeti as she had already left the country.

Ra: anyways tum dono baat karo mai jaa raha hu sone

Kri: mai bhi jaa rahi hu sone kriya

Kr: so jaungi 12 baje se pehle dont worry

Kritika left kissing her forehead. Ranvijay also went to his room which kritika showed him

Re: tum meri mom ke bare mein kese pata aur tumne mujhe pehle kyun nahi bataya.

Kr: maine aapko iss liye nahi bataya kyun mai nahi janti thi ki aap mom ke bete hai mujhe bad mein pata chal ki aap mom ke bete ho mai aapko bata pati use pehle mujhe college chod na pada. Aur mai nahi chahati thi ki aap mera wait karo iss liye woh sab bola tha. Aur jese maine socha tha aap 2 months ke baad move on kar gaye.
She said while looking down trying to hide her pain & hurt she felt when she got to know abt him moving on.

Rey could make out that she was hurt. But he could do nothing abt it.

Before he could reply a boy same age as them maybe even a or 2 older.

B: monkey tujhe kya humesha monkey wali harkat karni hoti hai.

Yup its was Rohan.

Kriya got up on the sofa holding rohan shoulder and hugged him tight wrapping her legs around his waist. Quietly crying in crook of his neck. As she didnt want rey to know that she was crying b'coz of him. Rey was angry seeing her that close to someone.

I know many of guessed that Rohan, Neha & rey were siblings if not oh well dont think this is the only twist in the story there are more twist coming up &many secrets of rey's life will be revealed...
Love you guys
Hope you enjoyed it

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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Himu ki bachi tune kya ye story twist se bhari.hui hai
Waise maza aa gya awesome update yaar
Rohan preeti ka son hai jise wo lekar chali gyi thi
And Neha Rohan. Ki sis hai toh Neha preeti ki beti hai.
Par ye kab hua
Kahi tune ismai bhi twist toh nhi dala
Update super soon

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