SanDhir FF : Memphis ~ Abode of the Good [Till Part 19]

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Khyati

@So_Naley

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#361

Cute update but it was too short !!
I really love Parth right now !! The responsible parent handling both the messed up kids Randhir and Sanyu !! 😆
When Randhir said that he doesn't deserve Sanyunkta I was really taken aback !!
Though he is kind of right when he thinks he is messed up and incapable of love but this idiot has no clue that his concern for her stems from the fact that he has subconciously fallen for her !!
Hope he realizes soon !!
Level 4 sounds pretty interesting !! Guess Randhir wants to challenge Sanyu and get her spirit back !! Smart !! :)
Update soon !!
I am waiting !! 😊

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samairaa gupta

@iraa_parsh

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#362

Finally an update...yipppieee..

As always amazing yaar.

Sanyukta's pov was supa cute, loved it and so was Randhir-Parth's convo.

"Sanyukta deserves better. I'm not the person made for

her" aww he thinks so...u dipicted it really well..

Randhir back to his MCP character?? :O

Hehe I know just to provoke her so that she gets back to her feisty self who's first love is machines.

Will b waiting for the next eagerly. I know you are busy but I'm very impatient so try to update the next part jaldi jaldi.

Lotz of love

Samaira

Ps :I wrote an os. Scrapped u the link. Please do have a look if time permits, would be glad to read your reviews.

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Tanya

@TashaForever

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#363

Shit!! Sorry for being so late!

Thank God your exams are over. I am expecting early updates now!

Thank you for updating..

The update was fab.

Amazingly well written.

Sanyukta covered her slip of tongue well.

Randhir wants Sanyu to get her interest in machines back..eh?

Jeez. Kaha se laati ho ideas!

Awesome overall.

Update soon.

Love,

Tanz

Edited by TashaForever - 11 years ago

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319125

Suspended

Posted: 11 years ago

#364

kriti my drling u nailed it... bby wat an update...
i loved it... reallyyy... :)
aww... luved it wat a contrast of emotions... m sure lovingg it
and the way u showed it...
sooo good
and m sooo eager fr more updatesss...

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shalini_shakti

@shalini_shakti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#365

Awesome update kriti...!!!
Loved it so very much...!!!
Randhir..!! Y does he feel tht he's not perfect to her...!!!
Update AsAP..!!
Will be waiting eagerly..!!:):)

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Aditi.shubha

@Aditi.shubha

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#366

nice update. her MCP Is back now. where randheer should kept her diary hope so she could not find diary in his bag or somewhere else randheer belong. but your thoughts are very good.

bye tc

good night.

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Kriti

@BeLi3Ve

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: barauni
Itthu sa update iss baar???? 😡 So Sorry!!
So finally Randhir told u what level 4 is! 😆 Yes, finally, phew!!
He thinks he isnt right for her n he can't be blamed for that... eggjactly!
Parth n that doc having that smile always 😆 yepsi pepsi
Diary missing! 😲 Someone's gonna get it!! 😆 hehehe.. shh!!
Nice update. ThankS!!
Im taking ur word for early updates! Beware! 😆 Uh-oh
Waiting

Love you so much NIKKI

Kriti ❤️

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A12345R

@A12345R

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#368

Wow! Kriti It was just Awesome and Fantastic
Thank u For Update
We will be waiting for ur Next Update
Any ways, My name is Reem
Thank u Love U

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tanda

@tanda

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#369

aww! poor sanyu..:'( yaar wil u promise me daily updates atleast till 27th? uske baad ur wish..but pls atleast till 27th??? pleaseee...lamba ones nd daily ones?..(selfish on my part i know :P)

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Kriti

@BeLi3Ve

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#370

Originally posted by: sandhirlover
hey Kriti...!! Hi, your name?Loved it..❤️ Thanks so much!!
Amazing...👏 xD

lekin end me Randhir itna rude behave kiya???😔

zaroor uske plan ka part hoga hena...😕 Shmaart gurl !!

but yaa it was awesome...👏

plz cont soonish...!!! I will

Love

Kriti ❤️

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