She's the Man [A-K Style] PG 5 on 09/13!! - Page 4

Just caught up with it 😊
great part loved it.... 😊
and u know wat take ur time hun i kno wat ur going thourgh it's the same here

Love

Sahana

awesome part!!!!!!

can w ait for my angad's entry!!lolzz

contineu soooooooon

hey i read ur first part its very nice but just a suggestion dont be mad i was thinking why dont u try putting it in ur own way u no instead of writing it just like the movie i mean u no take the scenes from the movie but write ur own dialougues u no. hope u dont feel bad u no that way it will b ur creation rather then the actual movie. other then that good start continue soon 😊
hope u dont feel bad 😉 😊

please continue soon 😭 great part

hey i just read it all!! lol!! i have seen shes the man lmao and its like exactly the same!!! lol its like i can funnly picture it out since i have seen it all1!! lol

continue soon!!!!!



Hina

She's the Man- AK Style
Chapter 2

As Kripa walked to across the lawn to the soccer field, laughing with her friends, she saw that the lacrosse team was there. Confused, she looked around trying to figure out what was going on. Just then Claire, her friend came up to her with a notice her in her hand.

"they cut our team!! Not enough girls signed up." She said pissed.

"What? HOW COULD THEY?" cried Kripa. She raced to the boy's coach. Before she could say anything he said.

"Im heard the bad news. Too bad. It must suck.. If there's anything I can do just tell me."

Kripa replied, "yes there is something. We wanna try out for the boys team she said. He looked at her like she was crazy.

"girls don't do what guyz can! Its just not possible!" he said smiling like a monkey. Just then Prithvi came over with his teammates. He kissed Kripa on the cheek.

"what's up?"

"The girls here think that they're better than guyz." The coach said smirking. All the teammates including Prithvi laughed. :

"Ya right" said Prithvi. Kripa looked at him bewildered.

"what? You said yesterday that I was better than most of the guys on your team!" she said. All the boys went ooooo and looked at Prithvi.

"Ya well." He said.

"Ya well what?!" she replied crossly.

"Ya well end of discussion!" he said haughtily, crossing his arm. She looked at him with a sad smile.

"Then end of relationship" she said and walked away.

************

As Kripa walked to across the lawn, cutting into the house with her hood up and her iPod ringing loud in her ears. She swayed with the music, and bobbed her soccer ball on her knees. Just then she was grabbed by the shoulders and turned around. She looked and saw her brothers girlfriend Mishti*. Mishti looked at her and made a face.

"eww its you. Wow you and your brother look scary alike from the back. Maybe its just you lack of curves." She looked at Kripa with a sneer. Kripa just smiled.

"And hi to you Mishti! How are you?" she said. Mishti just stuck her nose up in the air, being the snob that she was.

"Ya whatever. And tell your brother when he sees me that he better start doing better if her wants to be in my life."

Saying this she turned around and walked away. Kripa just smiled, shaking her head and walked inside the house, only to be greeter by her mother holding 2 pink and ruffly [is tat a word?] dresses. Kripa groaned.

Not only was her mom part of DAR, which was a special country club only for the rich and famous, and basically a snotty club, where girls were supposed to drink tea and eat no more than a spoon of soup and complain about how fat they were, but she was also very stubborn. She always got what she wanted, and when she didn't she was a witch. That's why Kripa's dad and mom got divorced in their second year of marriage. Since then Kripa and Nishant have been staying alternative weeks with each of their parents.

Kripa groaned.

That's it! Its short and bad. Yes I know. I can't help it- I have to much hw and two test tomorrow and 3 on Friday. So Ya sry once again. I feel bad! =[ so that's for today. Mishti is no longer the girl Angad likes. She is now the b**** that is dating nishant, Kripa's bro. Its gonna be alike for the next part, but then I use my own dialogues and stuff. Im just doing it so that the fan fic is on the right track. Ok and I also will use some dialogues that I loved in the movie here and there. So that's it! Please leave comments even though I don't deserve them I also updated road trip yesterday so read tat!

Lots of Love
Prakriti

WOWO! great part i love it yaar! love it loive! cont soon! pritivi sooooo deserved taht!😆

Originally posted by: muqualp

WOWO! great part i love it yaar! love it loive! cont soon! pritivi sooooo deserved taht!😆

thanx😆

did i tell yu - tht is my FAVORITE partt in the movie - where she goes end of relationship 😆

Originally posted by: pakigal34

did i tell yu - tht is my FAVORITE partt in the movie - where she goes end of relationship 😆

lol agreed