An Arshi TS: In Search Of Love.LAST PART UPDATED

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Very good update...at least they talked properly like a loving husband / wife...let's hope tell her regarding his relationship with sheetal and then they can try to understand sheetal

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

amazing chapter

loved it

glad they are talking and khushi is sharing what she feels

not liking sheetal at all

continue soon

pm me if you can :D

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

oh oh... now sanka devi will get ideas that aarav is arnav's son.

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starsarun

@starsarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

You are a writer then why do you hide ur talent??

I don't like Sheetal Track even... Actually I didn't like sheetal...
Aarav was cute...
Karvachauth scene is also lovely!
It was just Sheetal that irked me...
I liked the turn in your story!
In IPK Sheetal was able to manipulate Khushi's thinking and showed her that Aarav is Arnav's son.
But here Khushi is trying to find the reason behind Sheetal's behaiour. Thats a change! A good change...
CVs would have shown change in Khushi bcoz if Arnav changed in Love then why not Khushi.. But they...
Chalo g Ab toh jaane do!
Hope for best from you...
The most lovely scene was Farmhouse wala... While reading, I was even able to portray the scene in my imagination.. :);)

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Great update. You have really peaked my interest. Can't wait it see what Arnav says to Khushi and how she reacts.

Great job with Khushi's dialogues, it totally reminded me of the show.

Edited by Nidsubh007 - 11 years ago

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

I love that Arnav and Khushi are in sync with each other and I am glad your are exploring and making his love for Khushi so obvious and her happiness is his penultimate goal, I loved that she is secure in his love and I it was really nice how they find time and go off on their own and Khushi is the one to initiate it. Somewhere in the show I think Khushi started being more of a daughter in law, a sister in law and the one who was constantly working be it in the kitchen, buying gifts, buying vegetables ...she was show doing everything expect for being his wife...I liked how without guilt she decides to go off for the weekend...

Was Sheetal surprised to see Khushi at dinner when she was invited the first time and was introduced as his wife? I thought she had met her when she was saving Arav from the kidnappers and Arnav came there and said that she was his wife?

I liked that Arnav can sense that Khushi needs to talk to him and knows something is bothering her ...and I loved the way he stole the kisses from her earlier in the day and also loved how you interweave the flashbacks to the story...

Sheetal's attempts to lure him so fair unsuccessful and I am sure that is making her more angry and desperate ...

Waiting for him to reveal what he hopes Khushi will understand...

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yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Interesting story...thanks for the PM

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Sayali_23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Gud start Hetudi... I m really luking fw to ur version of ths crappy track frm ipk...

I loved the way khushi share she thoughts regarding sheetal with arnav rather then going into her own khushi ca do anything mode...

Waiting for next part..

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Mints23

@mints23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Oh my Hetal!!! You have turned into a full-fledged writer!! Its a brilliant start... I so wanted the Sheetal track to be different from what it was shown... they ruined the post-wedding romance of Arhi by showing some crap about Arnav spending time with Sheetal and deeming Khushi... Khushi dressing up as peon and what not!! It left such a bad after-taste... Sigh!! But seems like for story is going to be redeeming everything!!

Loved all the tender moments between Arshi!! And Sheetal.. the conniving woman, thinks that she is better suitable for ASR than Khushi!! Ha! Dream on woman!! But they met first time during the kidnapping scene right... that's when Arnav introduced Khushi to Sheetal?? I got a little confused with that part!! I am glad that Arnav realized Khushi's discomfort about Sheetal... and now that he has decided to tell her the truth of his past relationships... I wonder how Khushi will react!!!

Waiting for next part Hettadi!! 😉

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Rami

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

wow i so love ds track hw sensibl khushi s acting here makng arnv understand her discomfort n arnv atfrst stated she s a fren but ar the end whys he giving a nervous feel wt he s gonna say n do to khushi abt sheetal waiting didi ps: doing a vry greT wrk didi 🤗 ❤️ yu