Arshi: Burdened #2 | Chapter 15 Page 27

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Nishi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

read all the chapters in a go...interesting story...pls continue soon

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neha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

oh!!! now i get the title of the chap "Perfect Fit" ring do fit her perfectly

loved the update

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sher_lock

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

That was a very interesting chapter.

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shalini_s

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

lovely.. the ring got stuck... lets c what Arnav does now..

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singhni_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007
Congrats on the new thread!

thank you!! 😆

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singhni_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: mrin0709
hey,,, u just updated

👏👏👏

hehe yup:) updates will be more frequent though, hoping on atleast once a week after my exams are over

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singhni_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: seeta_naips
good omen the ring was meant for her

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singhni_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: headtotoe
Congrtas on the new thread !!

Loved the update !!

All the naughty, protective and lovey dovey moments were veryu nice.

I dont feel its slow... I rather like the description of the day to today mundane life scenes that you are potraying...

Thanks for the mail...

thank you!!

and yeah I'm trying to keep it very realistic and provide a lot of their day to day life, but there are some people who keep on saying they want all the love in it. but they have only known eachother for like a week and there is a lot of time for the love to happen. an no problem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: badfaith4u
I liked their fighting over the bill
I'm glad Khushi got to pay since there were her clothes

She figured out why he helped her with the dori
Smart girl

😆 hehe yup, there will be more arguments coming up