ASYA(KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Chapter 41 to Chapter 46

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#461

Originally posted by: krati5
firstly thanks 4 such a long update... i m glad there were no cliffies... i said in my last comment that zoya shld seek professional help but asad meeting Dr instead of zoya was way too lovely.. i loved it!... and ending it with a simple but so meaningful phrase... beyond superb

Thank you so much🤗

ha ha ha...I am glad that I can end it without a cliff😉

Yeah I read your comment after I posted the chapter and I am really happy to know you people are so engrossed with a story and give such logical suggestion...I really appreciate it.

Glad that you loved it. Actually I liked the idea more 😃

And thanks God...you get my point. I am not comfortable to write such things. I manage only for kiss but beyond that...NO!! It literally took half of the time to write the intimate scenes. It is really not my cup of tea...

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

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Posted: 11 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: anura7281
I have not commented for your early chapters. This story was very unique and fresh and how both Asad and zoya having their own trauma try and help each other to overcome it and make their wedding work even though it was an arranged one. I loved this concept so much that I always waited for your ff and read it first in the morning as soon as I get time. Then I used to get it everyday one chap but then i reduced to one week and now its one fornight. I know the reason behind it. Just told becoz I used to wait for this ff updates like anything.
All the chapter were fab and you are indeed a really good writer.

Please update soon

Anu Di🤗

Thank you so much for your comment...🤗

Wow that is a really cute story...Actually I enjoyed to write the update daily then. Although I had office,study but I was updating regularly because of inspiration. All gone after 26th December. I tried many times to write but it did not come naturally. I had to force myself. Day after day it is becoming difficult to write di. Thant's why I decided I will wrap it up as soon as possible.

Thank you so much for liking my story this much...

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Sabina

@Guguminti

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#463

Please update soon swappy

It was awesome just awesome

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#464

Originally posted by: Guguminti
Please update soon swappy

It was awesome just awesome

Gugu...🤗

Thank you so much🤗

Glad that you loved it😃

tera long wala update mil gaya na...ab khush reh😆

I will try to update soon😊

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Mvinfff

@Mvinfff

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#465

Awesome part ! Please can you add me to your PM list.

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: swapno

Thank you so much🤗

Sorry I could not welcome you last time..
Welcome to "Given and Denied"
Swapna ha suggested you right??
Well hope you are enjoying...
Glad that you loved it😃

hey hii.. Thnk u.. Nd it's k... Hmm it was amulya who sggstd me.. Nd yes.. I enjyd it... It was awesome.. Continue soon :)

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anisha

@anishaalluri

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#467

Awsome ff..
Read the whole thing in a go..
Loved it
Cont soon

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961111

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#468

Hi Swapno,
i have been extremely busy, hence this late comment

you have beautifully written about each day!!! it was such a treat to read the description of each day...
development of zoya's desire for asad due to his absence was also very nicely portrayed...
and finally they are one!!!!
it's just a very well written chapter 👏
loved it truly!!!
love you loads dear...😳❤️
miss you a lot buddy
🤗