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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#521

Thanks for the note... Was wondering about the arrival of the next update...😉

What happens next?? Are you gonna make them sit next to each other on the flight to Kashmir???

Looking forward to Friday...

Till then take care and enjoy AD...😃

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#522

Wonderful update...I am away at the moment with limited access...I will read thoroughly when I come back home and comment

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Vaibhavi Mane

@cookie-lover

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#523

its just beautiful...
i can't believe i missed it in first place...
update soon...

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#524

Thanks for the note.

You take your time.😃

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mansin129

@mansin129

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#525

Really like this story...very interesting!!!

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#526

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A_BA

@A_BA

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#527

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Edited:
So Arnav and Khushi meet, even exchange a few words, and Khushi is left with thinking about a certain man more than she would care to admit. I liked that it wasn't a love at first sight kind of a thing, but instead something way more realistic. And even though Arnav was not exactly nice when Khushi approached him about the book, Khushi was still left wondering about the man, as we all are now.

What's Arnav's deal - what is he trying to drown out? Is going back to India causing him to be kind of rude or is he always like that? And what's with the book on the his fourteenth birthday - does he have daddy issues??

The way you described the journey to India was also so realistic - although I haven't made that specific trip on KLM, it still reminded me of all the times of traveling from US to India, with the stopovers, the anxiousness on an airplane, seeing all different kinds of people making the journey for their own different reasons - really loved how you incorporated that into this last chapter!

I'm so looking forward to knowing how Arnav and Khushi's love story will start in Kashmir - knowing you, I'm sure it's going to be quite romantic😊

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#528

Res :)

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Jenny - The one thing I love reading is the different ways authors write about the protagonists meeting for the first time - i almost always struggle with it because my stories always have a shared past theme (hmmm - pointer for future exploration)

I loved that you are bringing Serendipity into the mix so beautifully. And I love that this Arnav is a little dour-faced despite the fact that Khushi's the diabetic :) There is something about Arnavs when they smile whole-heartedly for the first time and with your emphasis on the lack of a distinct curve on his lips - I now wait for the moment to come by :D

Saffron Fields awaits with impatience for the two unaware strangers waiting to be woven into a lifetime by fate (read author)

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Arnima

@Eternalallure

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#529

You are weaving this tale beautifully Jenny- from the protagonists' interactions(or lack of thereof) to tedious plane rides and friendly passengers to exasperating officials, a diabetic Khushi to a sour Arnav with a troubled past- it is refreshing and intriguing.

Looking forward for the plane to land in Kashmir, the " Paradise on Earth". I am sure the beauty of Kashmir will only enhance the brilliance of this tale and the inevitability of their love.

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AquaSandhya

@AquaSandhya

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#530

Personally, I love travelling. Am absolutely passionate about it not withstanding the frustrating behaviours, queues and too friendly co-passengers and kadoos co-passengers 😉

Arnav is seriously troubled huh...I'm glad he spoke up when he did although it wasn't much. I was trying to think how I would react to a guy whom I noticed and who reacted the way Arnav did...I personally would have thought...chill dude. You are not the only good looking guy in the world. but then I'm not Khushi, so thank God for that😆

I'm very excited about the setting of this tale...Kashmir. Cannot wait for it to begin.

Cheers

Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago