You are a great writer as I recently came across your index and read 3 of your 4 ff/ss. Only impenetrable heart is the one left and while returning to your index to start reading the same, I saw you started this new story.
I loved the idea. And about prologue, it was awesome, so detailed so thoroughly describing glimses of khushi's character, emotions and notions. I would love to follow this story and would love you to accept buddy request for updates.
P.S. Loved how each story of your has different idea and background and the detail you put in each to make it easy to imagine like a scene from a movie.