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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Anupama.

Me here..

*And this starts all over again * =)
I enjoyed reading it,Jen. And must I say this is clearly ahead in terms of narration than all of your previous stories.. Very well written.
Dr. Khushi might be a doctor but a thing as simple as getting married, her self has conditioned to think what others have been saying all the while. I am not saying she should listen to her heart and not get married to Aman but there is this uncertainity which is the big deal. Still, it wont stop the obvious from happening. If they are to get married and spend that togetherness,its possible that Khushi will learn to love him. There is nothing that can hinder that since Aman is a good man. After getting married, Khushi s heart and mind will know he is the man in her life and will work its way towards him.
But right now..! With this phase of confusion and unsurity, if there comes someone like we all know who will, someone with whom there wont be any question of mental barriers and would be as natural to fall for him , she would realize this is what it is which was lacking earlier. Something she did not know existed when she had thought Aman as her parents made her.
And Dr. Arnav? Whyyy sooo seeeriouss? Is he having a troublesome relationship or what? There seems such unrest and dormant anger, he seems to take this chance to leave for Kashmir as an escape from all problems. Lets see.
And if their little encounter of tailgaiting alongwith their demeanour is anything to go by then evidently they are two very characteristically opposite personality. Opposed to what Khushi thinks of similar kind of beings in a relationship, that was very interesting in its wake and the idea which it is giving me about what may happen ahead., I am veryy very eagerly waitingg.. =)

Unres'd ,Jenny. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
A wonderful prologue Jenny!
Your FFs are always unique...

Just loved the way you've captured the essence of Ohio...your writing truly gave me the feeling of driving on I-75 in Cleveland ( I had been there twice). And your comparison of Arnav's profile to that of emperors in roman coins was simply amazing!...now i'm gonna remember Arnav whenever i see a roman coin.

Looking forward to the next update in Kashmir..another beautiful place.

Dhivya
Miamisburg,Ohio
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Posted: 11 years ago
Comment updated here
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful prologue...can't wait to read more ...glad to see you back.
I have often wondered after reading your previous FFs and now this one -are you a doctor ?...your stories have accurate medical lingo and scenarios...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very interesting. Keep me updated.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it great work continue soon x
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing...Brilliant prologue...loved this khushi...I could understand her predicament in going forward with Aman...she is not in love with him...she got an opportunity to work in Kashmir, India...WOW ...there is very little of Arnav ...now he owns the saffron fields in Kashmir...can't wait for the next update...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago

I enjoyed the prologue...I'm looking forward to this Doctor Doctor FF...So, from Cleveland to Kashmir...very well written as always Jenny...another master piece from you we are getting...first Mewar after that Landour and now Kashmir...really excited to read more dear...we will wait till next Friday...thanks for the PM.

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Posted: 11 years ago
A hearty welcome to your new FF. Been looking forward to yet another fascination tale of love from you. This one sounds very promising indeed. Khushi a doctor, once again like in 'T I H'. but without the tragic baggage of her past. She sounds like a more regular girl. And Arnav- we are so used to reading abt him as a business tycoon. So ARnav as a doctor is gonna be different.
Looking forward to see how u take this story forward.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful prologue...looking forward for the next update... Thanks for the pm

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