~I was a Virgin at this but now I am a Pro~ Kriyansh TS (Part 2 Pg 7) - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Main bas yahi puchne aane wali thi... ^_^
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I have amde a twisted version of title to match you too..
my interpretation lets say... 🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: -Vaish-

I have amde a twisted version of title to match you too..

my interpretation lets say... 🤣


What's your interpretation? 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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You were so new at updating...
and now you became pro and we get daily updates... 😎
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Originally posted by: -Vaish-

You were so new at updating...

and now you became pro and we get daily updates... 😎


😆 Something like that but pro doesn't mean professional waala pro. And trust me there is so suspense to the title. It's just a saying which struck my mind.
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So title was intentional or random... clear karo... :/
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Posted: 11 years ago
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the concept and chapter were fabulous and well written...
do continue soon and pm me
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Originally posted by: -Vaish-

So title was intentional or random... clear karo... :/


It was both 😉 you'll see in half an hour. I am writing the climax right now.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing start
waiting for the next parts
update soon
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..Part Two..
(not Proof read)

"f**king goodness Riri" I partially jumped on him, engulfing him in a tight hug.


Yes, he was my best friend Riri from boarding school. It had been 10 years since we have met. I had to leave the school due to some reasons and I didn't even get a chance to say bye to any of my friends. He had always helped in school as he used to do my homework, projects and made notes for me aswell even though he was one year older than me. He was also the one who helped me to break into the boys hostel to meet my boyfriend, his brother. He has changed so much though.


He broke the hug and gave me a disgusted look.


"What?" I asked, my face depicting clueless-ness


"Would you stop calling that?!"


He is still the same. I smiled to myself.


"Aww Riri did I hurt you babe?"


"Firstly, stop calling me that. You know very well I don't.." He grimaced before continuing "..Like that name and second of all yes you did hurt me and third of all I am not a babe" he said. "And you numskull, you didn't even recognize me amazing"


"Not my fault babe" I said stressing the last word. "You see I couldn't in my wildest dream imagine you to look that hot and you never told me your full name. It had always been RIRI for me"


"Did you just call me hot?" He asked with amusement.


"Why? I can't? I mean look at you. The nerdy glasses are gone, the braces are not there, the oil in your hair seemed to have vanished and you are not lanky anymore. I mean just look at you!"


"Woah! Did THE Kria Ghai just complimented me or am I hearing too much?"


"Yes THE Kria Ghai just adulated you"


"Woah Rey! Well done man." He said patting his own back.


This guy!


"Excuse me? You both are blocking the dance floor. Get your ass outta here if you don't want to dance"


-Rey's P.O.V-


We were just talking when a girl out of no where interfered.


"Excuse me? You both are blocking the dance floor. Get your ass outta here if you don't want to dance" She said.


I just gave her a pity look cause lets just say she have no idea what she is in for..


"What did you just say?" Kiri said, voice dripping from venom.


"I said get off the dance floor and move" The blondie spoke again.


"Riri! Hold my earring" Kiri spoke and handed me her purse and earrings.


Stopping her would be like asking for death, trust me on that. I just obeyed her order.


"May God bless you blondie" I mouthed to her.


She gave me a confused look and before she could comprehend what I was trying to say, Kiri punched her right in the nose.


Ouch! that must have hurt.


"Ouch! You bitch.." blondie said while holding her nose.


"Say that once again and I swear this time it won't be the nose"


This was the time to stop her so I pulled her back by her arm.


"Kiri, stop."


And for a change she listened.


"Only, because you are saying, and you.." She said looking towards the blondie who was still holding her nose. "Dare you give order to me again. Take it as a warning and leave!"


She immediately left the place.


Oh Kiri! What am I going to do with you.


"So lets go, shall we?" she said giving me a smile.


What?


"If you were to go than why did you punch the poor girl?"


"Riri, she gave me, Kria Ghai an order. Nobody does that"


Still the fierce Kiri I knew. She has gotten so much more beautiful and damn! She gained flesh at all the right places.


Things I would do to her...wait! What are you thinking Rey? Stop!


"hello? Earth calling RiRi" She waved her hands infront of me, breaking me from my trance.


"Stop calling me that, its Rey"


"Okay RiRi, I wouldn't call you RiRi anymore since it hurts you when I call you RiRi. So, from now I would call you Rey. Is that okay RiRi' She smirked.


I just groaned. Never mess with this chick man, never ever.


I was about to answer her back when I got a call from Claudia.


Phone conversation:


"Hey baby, what's up?"


As soon as I said baby Kria grumbled.


"At the V.I.P section, anyways where did you go?" Claudia spoke on the other end.


"Had to fix some undone work" I said looking at Kiri.


"Come to the V.I.P section soon. I'll be waiting" She said.


"Okay cool. Bye fianc"


"Bye Babe"


I hung up and looked at Kiri who looked so perturbed and angry. I wonder why?


"Kiri lets go to the V.I.P section, shall we?"


"Sure baby" she mimicked Claudia and I really couldn't suppress my laugh after that.


This girl will be the death of me. I had always loved her but she would always be busy in flirting with my brother. I guess it was better to stay friends than to stay strangers so I never confessed my love to her.


"Let's go than!" I said and dragged her with me to the V.I.P section on the second floor.


As soon as we reached there Claudia hugged me, pushing Kiri a bit.


"I missed you so much baby"


-Kria's P.O.V-


I missed you so much baby...my foot. Stay away from him, RiRi is mine.


Gosh! Did I just called him mine.


I won't lie, I always had a soft corner for him but I was the head cheerleader, the most popular girl and he was a nerd. A cute one actually but in school I had a reputation to maintain so dating him was a big fat no but now I've realized that reputation is not everything, being popular is fun but having good friends is enchanting and elating. Friends over bloody status anyday.


Life as I said has always been a bitch to me. Literally f**k my f**kery filled life.


There, there their PDA started again. I am already feeling nauseated. Puke! Puke!


I turned around in disgust but what I saw made me excited.


Holymoly! Body shots..Hell yeah!


I went there stumbling a bit, okay maybe not a bit but hey! I am sad, frustrated and drunk.

Its time for body shots.


"Who's up for body shots" A guy spoke.


"Me!" I said and everybody's attention turned towards me. Boo yeah! I didn't even look at RiRi and Claudia. Why should Couples have all the fun aye!


"What's you name sexy" The guy asked.


"Kria"


"You sure babe?"


"Definitely, babe"


He was so sexy I tell you. His hair were spiked up a bit and his emerald eyes were so full of beauty. He looked like harry styles but without the curly hairs. Still Riri was sexier.


I went to him, pulled him by his collar and whispered in his ears...


"I want you to take the shots" I said, voice husky.


"My pleasure sexy lady" he replied.


Body Shots...Checked


-Rey's P.O.V-


While I was busy with Claudia Kiri went away. I thought she went to get some drinks but as soon as I heard her say that she is up for body shots I was left aghast.


I saw her whispering something into the boy's ear and I knew what was she up for.


Why do you always do this to me Kiri?


She took her heels off and laid on the bar's table and on top of that she was wearing a crop top which exposed her belly. Damn!


The boy started to put salt around the rim of her belly and on her neck.


"Lick it! Lick it!" The crowd cheered.


f**k! No ways.


I had to do something. I tried to make my way through the crowd but I was pushed back. Urghh!


The people blocked my vision as I couldn't see what was happening anymore. A hell lot of people gathered around to watch the show.


"Yeah just like that"


The crowd cheered. As soon as they said that I pushed them away and went to see what was happening.


I was so f**king angry at the sight that I just pushed the boy who was licking the salt he put on her belly and punched him hard with such force that he fell on ground. How f**king dare he even touch her. I was about to punch him again but a hand stopped me.


"Rey stop.."


Kiri said in her drunken state.


"Shut up! Are you nuts kria. Body shots! Really?"


She was about to reply but she stopped due to the crowd which gathered around us. I took her hand and made my way to the patio for some privacy.


On the way back we collided with Claudia.


"Oh hey Rey"


"Hey Claudia...Listen I'll handle this from here. Thanks for the help." I said to her.


"No problem Rey, Bye" She left.


"What help? What is going on" Kiri was totally confused.


I sighed. It was time to tell her the truth. Plan Backfired! Epic fail Rey.


I entered the patio and closed the glass door. Luckily there was no one here and the atmosphere was serene and quiet.


"Look Kiri-"


"I am already lookingg at youu" She said while swinging her body back and forth in my grip.


"Will you let me complete?"


"When did I stopp you RIRI" She said and started laughing.


How much did she drink?


"Kiri this is serious" I said with a grave voice.


"Okayyy RIRI, Putting my finger on my lips. Shhh" She said.


Oh man here I am telling her the truth and there she is looking as cute as ever.


Focus Rey, you have to tell her.


"Claudia isn't my fiance"


As soon as I said that she became a bit serious...a drunk serious girl.


-Kria's P.O.V-


"Claudia isn't my fiance"


My blood ran cold. All this time I was mourning about him being my sister's fiance and now he tells me he isn't. This alerted me and I motioned him to continue.


"Look Kria, I don't know how to say this but I am not engaged to anyone"


I was rooted to my place. Is this some kind of a joke going on?


I am not drunk anymore.


"I did all this to make you jealous."


To make me...What?


"Go on" I said.


"Well, I have liked you since school days but you were always busy with my bother. I never knew how I started loving you but I did know that it was impossible for you to even like me at the first place. You were popular while I was a nerd" He sighed before continuing. "Then when you left I was left heart-broken. I lost track on my studies because you were always on my mind. Suddenly I experienced a downfall and everything went hay-wired. I needed you Kiri but you were not there. Finally I decided to move on and came here for further studies."


He took a deep breath before continuing further.


"One day, I saw your sister in my university. She was a path to get to you so I contacted her. Than I came to know that you were living here with your boyfriend. I was crushed again. But after 2 weeks I got to know that you two broke up. I decided it was the time to meet you again, I wanted to confront you but than I realized that I need to know that whether you even like me or not. So I decided to invite you here through Claudia and make you jealous by addressing her as my fiance. I knew you abhorred Claudia the most so I chose her. But the plan back fired as you see I again ended up being jealous. Why do you always do this to me Kiri?"


He left me awestruck by his revelation.


I slapped him.


"ouch! Kiri what was that for?"


"That's for lying to me"


I slapped him once again.


"Kiri, The f**k are you doing!" He said.


"That's for making me get jealous of my f**king sister"


I slapped him for the third time.


"Kiri! Now what is this for?"


"This is for using the F word infront of me"


He gave me a are-you-being-serious look.


And than I kissed him, I kissed him hard.


Damn, his lips are so soft and perfect. The way they moulded with my lips as if they belonged here.

He held me by my waist and pulled me closer to him while I snaked my hands through his thick hairs. His hair are so smooth. Damn I love this feeling, I love it so much. He poured so much of his anger, passion and love in the kiss that I couldn't stop myself from reciprocating.


Kiss a stranger..Checked. Well he was a stranger at first so yeah checked.


He turned me around and pushed me towards the glass door while we continued to kiss. I couldn't prevent myself from smiling in the kiss. I know nobody is perfect but he is so damn close that it scares me. He is not only a prefect creation of god but also a perfect human being with a golden heart.


We broke the kiss as our forehead touched with his hands cupping my face. I could feel his hot breath on my face.


"And what was this for?" He asked.


"This was for loving me so much. Mr Singhania you'd be pleased to know that the plan was a hit"


His smile is so contagious that even I smiled seeing him like this.


I have realized that I do love him. How could anyone love me so much. It's his love that forced me to love him back.


Suddenly his smile disappeared and he backed off a little.


What did I do wrong?


"Kiri, would you still love me if I go back to my high school looks?"


I knew this would come but honestly I had my answer ready. I didn't fall for his sexy body..well I did but moreover it was his heart, his love that made me fall in love with him.


"Yes" I replied in a heartbeat.


He kissed me again.


"I love you Kiri"


"I love you too RiRi. Kiri-Riri meant to be"


"You maybe cool but your jokes are still bad"


"I am offended" I pouted.


"Kiri how do you manage to look cute and sexy at the same time"


Aww! He is such a sweetheart.


"Thats Kria Ghai for you. But I still have a question"


"Shoot"


"How did you managed to get Claudia agree to this?"


"Blackmailed her a little plus you know she is a bimbo so it was easy"


I was shocked okay how and when did he learn to control bitches.


"But you are so inexperienced I mean you sucked big time at lying and blackmailing. You were such a nice soul. Heck! You never even bunked a class ever. How did you improve so much?. I mean not for once I doubted about you both. You improved in acting as well. How did you become an expert at all this?. Justify the kiss too please."


"Well I kissed Claudia because come on! That would have created a better impact and trust me those were the worst moments of my life" He made a disgusted face.


"And for the rest of your query all I can say is, I was a virgin at all this but now you can consider me to be a pro"


He winked at me before sealing his lips with mine again. He crashed my body into his to such an extent that I found myself rubbing on him.


Grind on a sexy boy...Checked.


List completed but I got myself a life partner aswell.


Life is not that bitchy afterall. Perfect ending to a perfect night.



Here is the update. Hope you like it. Hit the like button and do comment if you liked it. I know you had alot of expectation which I feel I couldn't fulfill to much extent so bare with me. I lost track of the story a bit so just wrote what came in my mind. Last half of this chapter was unplanned and was written in the moment so please don't kill me 😆


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