FF- In love with enemy UPDATE ON PG 7

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

earlier i didn't read this eventhough i heard about it . thanks will read now . lovely start and continue soon .

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Redross

@Redross

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: _CookieMonster_
me three

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baisakh45

@baisakh45

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

no need to change anything darling.just do what you like.we'll read whatever you will update.we are with you.

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CoolHania

@CoolHania

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Dear Reet, i understand ur pov here. u taking lot of trouble by editing the names and re posting it.
But dear, i first read ILWE and i became a fan of urs and ur writings the way u portrayed every emotion i so love that, i read it just in a flow, the only thing that i loved there was maaneet, their chemistry, their unconditional love for each other. His hurting her and she bearing it just for the sake of her love for her enemy. their realization of their love, & then Maan hurting her just to prove that he doesnt care for her. there are lots of fac scenes and dialogs are there which i still remember. Geet bearing everything as she knew he cared for her and faking the anger and hurting her intentionally. Dev's part where he proposed her for marriage and geet accepting it saying YES as she was with chief in her mind, was brilliant part. i didn't know it was not complete fic, else i wouldnt have started reading it. it was just then i saw that, it was incomplete fic though i read it lots of times this story of urs.
then u started MT, there u used ARjun instead of maan. i still am following that for only one reason that u r relating arjun with maan, as in he is faking his identity. just to get revenge from geet's grandfather. if it was not maan and geet , i wouldn't have read it.
as i said its only a request to plz consider readers views also, bcz it wont be having any fun reading some other chrs instead of we previously read. u not only changed maaneet but other chrs also. it will take long time for readers to even recognise the names and relate them with the story, when they already remember su, adi, rishi , mahi, yash etc.

plz dont mind and dont get upset.

PS:- i have posted same post on your link given on page 5

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

hey dear can u post the link when u update in this thread?
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fffanatic

@fffanatic

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

I read a story for its plot and not for the character names
I agree maaneet has lost the charm it used to have say two years back
now its for the story and plot and characterisation that I personally read any story so changed names doesn't make me any difference
you write a story you mould the character so you should continue with the character names that give you the eagerness to write the story
if arjun and raina makes you feel to share their story through your writing you should continue with them amd not maaneet
old readers will find it difficult in the starting to accept arjun and raina but gradually they will forget the character names and get hooked to the story
even I have read the story so far in maaneet version not once but more than fifty times now
but still when I read arjun raina version I was equally interested hooked and intrigued
we read because you write so character names should be your call as lomg as you continue the story
I would have voted for you to continue the story where you left it instead of reposting it but it was your call to repost it with changed character names and I respect your decision
dont be sad with mixed reviews and maaneet demands if you are determined to continue the story and give it much desired end ur reders will eventually accept arjun raina and follow the story for its plot and forget maaneet issue
please continue

no offence to anyone just ky pov I read a story for a story and not for maaneet even though I was a maaneet fan once upon a time

This situation is like changed lead in any show
people protest all that they can but later accept the new face as its just a face what they are attached to is the characterisation and not the face
anandi was changed in balika vadhu yet the trps never dropped to a level that they shouldn't coz they love anandis characterisation not pratyusha or toral.
In love with enemy is all about chief and his damsel
I personally dont care if his real name is maan singh khurana or arjun singh shikhawat

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mauaa

@mauaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

no we wd like u to finish the story as u wish.. we lv yr writting.. no need to change the names.. we r cool..😊

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maanugeetu

@maanugeetu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

just found out that u are writing it again but when i came here and started reading it, i am shocked and disappointed. i have waited for u to start this story, even lost hope but then Teacher started and u said that u will write it again but i guess i lost all hope again and now forever.

i also read ur note di, i completely understand what u are saying and i won't force u to change anything. personally i feel u have increased ur workload urself, if u had just started from the point u left, with chapter 33 (i think), then it would have been better for all of us readers, then there would not have been any confusion or gila shikwa.

ur stories are amazing and u are a great writer, but there is a thing called continuity, and that is missing here, u have not only changed the names but even the plot and deleted the first kiss scene which was an part of the story. frankly speaking when i read these four chapters i could not relate and didn't understand most of the things. it seemed a bit hoch-poch for me. the only thing i felt is there was no need of re-writing and re-posting. u could have simply opened a new thread and start from where u left the story.

i personally won't continue to read the story. for me , from today onwards, ILWE is a complete story with chapter 32 as the last chapter. i will imagine that they have confessed and came near each other aur unka milan ho gaya. i know u won't change anything and there is no use reading this story now because there will be constant comparisons in my mind and confusions.sorry di if i have hurted u in any way, i have just expressed my feelings and my true opinion. don't get hurt

Best of luck for the story.go on writing in the way u want.