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Padfoot_Prongs

@Padfoot_Prongs

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#41

wow. i m loving it.

i m not going to pester u to change the names. doesn't matter to me.

please continue soon. i m so eager to read more that i m wishing for all 32 parts in one go.😆

i m first.🥳

Edited by mannu_minnie - 11 years ago

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fffanatic

@fffanatic

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Arjun is an ultimate flirt
he loves to irritate her by sweethearting and honeying her
sunita the sissy is here...rofl
I always laugh my head off when I read the paan and devijee scene
even pooja could make out he was ogling geet
Raina darling wanting to gather information..rofl
she asked him what he does and if he is a contract killer..yea right he will give u his janam kundli
somehow arjun knows the direction in which her brain functions
can't have enough of them
arjun sir doesn't come on duty regularly. How will he . He ahs new job these days to keep a tab on certain miss ahuja
he might not be coming to police station for his duty but every time he does come on time to drag her from there

continue soon..waiting for the reposting to reach 31st part and for the story to move forward. Desperately waitinh for that day

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didlr

@didlr

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Just yeaterday i started reading this story on geet forum, and after chapter 32...blank! No more updates. I was sad like hell, but after exploring the entire if , got to know that u've again started this story:)i must say its a wonderful experience to read through the story again with changed names:) n its not the names that make a story, but the charaters, their roles, plot and the style of writing which contribute majorly:) and the same is present in this story. i had always wanted to read something similar to the concept on which ur writing, and I'm glad i came across ur ff. U have beautifully written the emotions. I'm a big fan of yours...n truely from my heart I'm in live with this ff:) continue soon and go ahead in the way you want to:) its always good to take advices but when a thing belongs to u , so does the decision abt it:)All the very best! looking forward for a great story!

Edited by didlr - 11 years ago

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Mishu

@-Mishu-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#44

i m so happy u r going to continue this story...i don't care if u r going to start from the beginning...i love this story & i m going to read it...hope this time u will be able to finish it...

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Aishwarya

@Drashtirocks1

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

This Arjun Singh Shekhawat has soo many shades to play...the police station scenes, with the whole deviji and paan chewing silly messy officer, always crack me up... then there is the flirty stranger or muderer so as to say using terms of endearment... and then the sharp, intelligent and focused chief (although now there is someone to bring about a change in the latter most personality ) the way raina started her negotiation and interrogation with arjun was amazing... her insinuating didn't result in any positive results other than her flushed cheeks... coz he is too smart for her... the plot with taleb and manjar is more matured and polished this time... good going with that... u sure have a really investigative, detective suspense thriller kind of mind... and well expectations really hurt if not met up to... eagerly waiting for your next update...

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

My heart is not accepting the story.Even than nice updates

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insight555

@insight555

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

re reading and loving the story...I must say I am not anymore affected by the names...the characterization of Chief and raina/geet is so strong that visuals of the story are imprinted in your mind...again falling in love with the flirt,witty,arrogant chief and bubbly Raina...waiting to read the changes in the further story...