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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 8
What the! 😲

What the hell is wrong with Khushi? Arnav saved her and she ran to Armaan? I mean seriously?

I absolutely loved Arnav in this chapter. The reason of his father's death was unusual. Shyam, Anjali and Akash shouldn't have asked him to sing knowing about his promise to his mother. But he did sing for his lady love. It was a very sweet gesture. Loved the siblings' simultaneous convo. Just when I thought Khushi was acting in a matured way, she proved me wrong. What was she thinking standing in the middle of the road? And again her reaction to Armaan was not what should've been. I felt so bad for Arnav. Loved the way he reacted to Khushi's almost accident. But I would've felt cheated if I were in Arnav's place. Arnav must've been heart broken. I can't say I loved the chapter just because of Khushi's last action. Except that part, the rest of the chapter was fantastic.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 9


Aalu I absolutely loved this chapter. Tere mooh mein bohot saare Aalu err...I mean ghee shakkar 😛
I am so very glad that Khushi's illusion broke and she slapped Armaan. I am happy that Khushi slapped him because he deserved it for attempting to love her but I am thankful that he did not marry her. It would've been worse if he married her and then left her. I was ROFL-ing reading about the songs Arnav's heart was playing according to the situation. First Battameez dil and then Bhadra Kali 😆

I loved how he supported her and then they kissed ☺️
Khushi started to irritate me when she thought so low of Arnav and said those hurtful words to him. At that time my dil was all set to play Bhadra Kali. But then she understood what she was doing. Loved how she hugged Arnav and let everything out. I wonder what she will ask him to do. Your way of writing makes me laugh even in the most serious situations 😆

The song was perfect. It said all that he was feeling and Khushi too somewhere knew that it was for her. Loved the way the past was written. This is one of my favourite parts of this chapter. The update was fabulous Aaluji. My dil dance maare re after this chapter 😆
Edited by RizArshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Khushi who brings the Arnav out of ASR, she knows that his ASR avatar is a facade. Kgul had tears in her eyes because she doesn't want him to suffer inside while Arnav can't see her tears..they are made for each other ❤️

Arnav sang 'tumse hi..' for Khushi ❤️ lyrics of the song are apt and romantic too 😳
I adored the way you wrote and showed us the song sequence ❤️, its really awesome..loved it

Khushi understands that Arnav cares for her and she is ready to make him hers 😉

Arnav holding Khushi's hand while sleeping..haaye

Amazing chapter Aalu 🤗 I loved reading each and every part of it 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
Is it first time that any debut writer getting itny achy achy comments aalu ..

😳 😃

proud of yu ..my bachhi 😛 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 10
Aalu ji this is the best chapter so far. Fantastic 👏

There is not a single thing that I didn't like. The song, the dance, their reactions, their thoughts everything was superb. Arnav sang again for his lady love and she wanted him to sing not only for her but for himself too. That was really very thoughtful. Arnav's decision to give some hints to Khushi about his feelings worked perfectly. Loved Khushi's reaction and thoughts. I am so glad that she pushed all the negative thoughts aside and decided to embrace the new feeling. Loved the way she invited him to sleep on the bed with her. But I feel picture abhi baki hai mere dost 😉
Awesome update. Loved it 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank You all!! 🤗

As you all know I reply to each of you but today, I got some work which is not giving me much time to reply all. Forgive me for that!

I Have read each and every one's comment which made me over whelmed. I am so grateful to you all! Thank You Thank You So Much! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
I apologize for the inconvenience but due to unforeseen reason there won't be any blog in the near future. If I ever decide to have the blog you will be informed.

With Love,
Aalu 😃
Edited by LOLWAsAalu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry res again
forgive me again😆
i will try to unres atleast this soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Now, what was that. Everything was going on well. Suddenly this 'I love u Lavanya'? Where did that come from & on what pretext.
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
lavnya entry
lavnya like arnav but arnav never serious about her
end dailogue broke heart
i am confuse why arnav said i lv u lavnya
cannot wait for next part
i hope u will updt soon
thnx for pm

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