Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 23)

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Badtameez.Dil

@Badtameez.Dil

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#971

and khushi :😆😆

haa haa haa...haaye!
Naina bole re karorey chatkhaare
Kabhi humri gali mein aake jaa re
khaye joban ke jo wo hichkore
jo tumko najaarah dohra re

Haaye haaye... haaye haaye!
Bedardi arnav... jaraa paas to aaja...
Main to phool chhadi hoon
Ki maachis tu jalaa... ja
Haaye...
Phoolon wali teri khatir,
Sej hai bichhaayi re..
Sej hai bichhaayi..

bhanwaron ki najro se ye
baghiya bachaayi ye
maine...
Baghiya bachaayi
haaye...

Bedardi arnav...
Ho zara paas to aaja
re kachchi main kalee hoon
mujhe poora khila ja
haaye

Kauli kauli gori baahe
chhuo to maalayi jaise
chhuoh to malaayi
Rom rom daure re bijli,
marode kalayi
jab tu marode kalaayi

haaye
bedardi arnav
ho zara paas to aaja
jo mere gaal pe til hai
uss pe dil lutaa ja
haaye...!

enjoyed ??😉😆

Edited by Badtameez.Dil - 11 years ago

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shruti

@shruti46

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#972

are why naya dhaga nai ban ab tak??tanu di is waitng ..

unhe aur ques poochne hai

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bridgeofdreams

@bridgeofdreams

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#973

Finally caught up with the last updates!

Again, I want to say that I love the pace of your story. You don't rush things in their relationship nor write about them day by day when there's no big change. You always focus on the development of their relationship with details of the happenings.

I like how understanding Khushi is, how she sees him behind the barrier he made around himself, his heart. Knowing the truth of Arnav's mother, she is doing a great job now to erase his pains and make him open up for her, for life and for love and trust. Though she felt belittled when Anav asked her to prove herself, she now understands him. And the fact she is doing all of this with growing love and not for once feeling slightly pity for the way his life was is showing how great and lovely Khushi is.

My favourite two scenes of the latest updates are: when Khushi was drunk and made up that dog story. She's so adorable and Arnav could not help but like her more and more which resulted in their first unconscious (fr Khushi though she felt it was familiar that day) kiss.

The second scene is the last one of course. I'm glad that Arnav decided to leave that thin thread that he's been hanging upon and for once do what he feels like and follow his heart. I like the way you've written his thoughts and refelected his feelings and desires.

And Khushi, well she has already accepted this relationships from every angle that even when she was surprised and nervous with his approach, she had never thought of a 'no' as an answer to him. Not only becasue she wants or has to obey him and fulfill his needs, but because she also wants to move to a new level with him in their relationship and want them to get closer in every possible way.

Mindblowing updates. Beautifully written 👏

Sh~

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ashnitaa

@ashnitaa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#974

Cant wait for the next update..
please update soon

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#975

awesome..
waitng waitng fr next part 😊

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sushmita ghosh

@shalunsarun

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#976

Congratulations.:) u did well dear ..keep it up...plzz make this thread spicy with their romance..its an request

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narcy24

@narcy24

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#977

I am back...not full time but I will try to comment every step of the way... I love the way you made this FF...is so wonderful...Khushi and Arnav's steps for making this marriage work are priceless...

Wonderful work...amazing job...

PS: Thanks for the \PMs...

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Sidda

@Sidda8

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#978

Thanks for the update. Khushi is truly playing the role of a dutiful wife. It is good that she knows of her husband's past. They are both deeply in love with each other and Arnav is slowly accepting it. He loves her care, affection and attention.

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navjot7

@navjot7

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#979

awesome updt
sorry for late comment
khushi know everything about arnav past
she is trying her best to make arnav happy
she is loving arnav without any demand
its good that arnav like this change
he agree to spend his bday with khushi
thnx for pm
updt soon

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#980

awesome update..very well written...the story is progressing very nicely... Arnav and Khushi's relationship is blossoming slowly yet steadily...really good going...please do update soon..waiting for the next update eagerly..😊

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