Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 23)

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simran

@crazymg.04

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Posted: 11 years ago

#761

wow update...loved it i m waiting for the next one eagerly😉

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adhu11

@adhu11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#762

how can you do like this?😭

now waiting for next part impatiently 😉😆

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cheval

@cheval

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Posted: 11 years ago

#763

Yaaay im so happy u updatd today super awesome dear ... wooow they r getting closer I just cnt wait for next

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abcdefg1234567

@abcdefg1234567

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Posted: 11 years ago

#764

Beautiful update. Loved the way there relationship has been progressed. But after reading last few chapters I am feeling like this is more of making Arnav mine instead of making Khushi mine. You have started writing more from Khushi's point of view. Please write little bit more from Arnav's point of view instead of just writing his physical desire.

Thanks for update.

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yogini18

@yogini18

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Posted: 11 years ago

#765

pls update soon

it'stoo intresting ff

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

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Posted: 11 years ago

#766

awesome beautiful written amazing cudnt be more better.

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pallavi_92

@pallavi_92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#767

Just what I wanted to read.

Lust , attraction, hunger and poccessiveness all are allowed if they are towards your wife.

I was a bit disconnected because of long gap between the two chapters but once I connected I read it 3 times.

Loved it.

Waiting for next update.

Read my arshi ff understanding khushi too.

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sarahjac

@sarahjac

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Posted: 11 years ago

#768

As usual loved the chapter 😊

Khushi is doing such a marvellous job, she is mature beyond her years. She is doing her best to de-mystify her husband... It was so thoughtful of her to study Arnav's behaviour and reach out to Buaji for help.

Not to take away anything from Madhumati, for noticing changes in her titaliya and introducing her to her mother in law which made it so easy for Khushi to understand where Arnav is coming from.

Finally Arnav, simply put...he can not resist her, I can almost feel how strongly he wants to give himself away to his Khushi, but the past not letting him leave his reigns free. Baby steps, I say baby steps...he is taking them...with Khushi's new found devotion and understanding, his Sailing should be smooth

All through out the chapter I was missing one on one communication between Arshi and when you added that, you took my breath away...How in the world can you stop where you did?????

Looking forward to the next one...plsss update soon