Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 23) - Page 75

U cannot have ended at THAT point. Have a heart!

First of all thanks for da pm..
Secondly most important happy valentines day...

It was really a wndrful valentines gift...

First of all well pennd dwn... No doubts ...u hav put all ur efforts to giv us such a magnificent update.
I really appreciate ur efforts... And wish u emerge as a superb and da mst personified and perfectionist writer..

Nw coming to the update ... It was so realistic... I was like flowing with its flow...

O its good khushi gts to knw about arnav past... Nw i think her prespective towards him will gt more clear and she will make her way to reach his hiddn insecurities ... And can gt out his love ...

Khushi considering her all responsibility nt only as wife bt also as a dil is wat clears that hw seriously and with her soul she want to be the dil of raizadas...

Evn she was a naughty,crumpy ,lazybone... Bt as nw with this new relationship she is putting herself entirely ...
This evn shows a realistic thing that a grl wen her priorities changes she change herself all for her loved onw ... Same i fing with khushi...
She is giving her 100% in this realtion in love... And i guess this love is making her journey to his heart easier...

She is playing a superb role as wife as dil and evn as a enterpreneur...
All thanks to ur brains gtng it totally related to reality...

I appreciate the thing she consider her family to be her first priority sply her husband for whom she has put her frdshp on a hold with rishabh maintaining required communication... And creating the space of line required..
She is entirely matured as a women...

Madhumati ... She in today's update was more acted as a anchor... To guide the changes in khushi and make the readers ride deir journey of past... Hw khushi steped forward and trying to know about her husband's past..
This really helped her to knw y his husband so reservd .. To himself evn he too hav all feelings bt are lovkd under deep corner of his heart.

So overall khuahi"s character is so well potrayed.and the way u nurture her in evry update is like hw a grl's life change frm a small princess of his father to a lady of his man..

Hw much i say about khushi will be less... As u expressed a lot in her character...

Nw coming to arnav ...
I think many of us have noted.. This if m nt wrong in his character in ipkknd a quality of arnav which always amused me .. And i evn likd it was his way of representing himself..
As to his family he was always a serious tought man bt in front of khushi he was just arnav.. Teasing her loving her gtng possessive ... Torturing her..
If i say it was like many of his true shades wer reservd only for her..
Same i have read here .. As wen khushi exploring his nature...
Hw different he enact wen he is with family and hw different he is with her...



I was always attracted to this quality of arnav...

He love her and evn express it in form of kisses... Bt publicly nvr he shwcased his love nr his affection towards her...
I likd this thing...

As i remember a dialogue of arnav" Khushi sbko ye jan ne ki jarurat nahe hai ki jb hum akele hote hai tho kya karte hai"


Here i think the same thing follows..


arnav is nw vry close to line of control wer if he lose a bit den it can overpower him and can lead to any kind of destruction...
bt if he is undercntrl den i guess it just hia wife's unvisible magic wand of her love and affection working for him...


Khushi nw gtng comfortable with his touches also i think can give arnav a assurance and trust to step a level in deir relation..

So asr who nvr think twice to say no... To anyone.. Is just diff wen it cums to his wife.. Woq that was like hw he is changing ... For her and hw his priorities too are changing ...
Wen his desires to love her made him to finally ask or say request her to gt her in himself..
Bt he yt fears that she may reject his req...

Bt thank god u didnt end it with a cliffhanger ...
As she was evn in in the relation to take it a step ahead...

I think this step or consumation will make their bond strong and fill the gaps to bud a strong bridge of undrstanding and of love btwn dem...

It was a marvellous update...
i guess no word of my cmnt can do justice wat u hav penned dwn..its amazing hw beautifully u put dwn ur thoughts...


i wish u keep on writing ur thoughts ..and shine as a brightest writer.. nt only on if bt also out in this world...


bst of luck for ur future updates.. and stories...

Oh snap!!! Things are about to get steamy!! Kya baat hain!!! Great chapter!! I love the learning curve they both have in this relationship!!!

Wow wht an update that to on the day of Valentines Day... bass was a little disappointed tht u left us wanting for moreee...😔

Marvelous!!Looking forward to Khushi's reaction...loved it!

OMG You really stopped there? as in here at this point!!! Cliff hanger yaar!!

wonderful update anonymous ji...

Oh.. Wow,glad to see quite a huge progress in their relationship! Hmmm... So they are gonna consummate or what? Continue soon.. :)

Amazing update. She is really a titaliya in this ff. Loved her character. So strong woman yet so innocent...now she got to know about Arnav's mother and her bad doings. She understands her husbands needs so well and take a good care of it. And Arnav...he is really getting better nowadays. Seems to trust her and his love for Khushi increasing day by day... He badly wants her and Khushi is in a pleasant shock to even utter a word. Hope their journey of love goes better and better in this understanding way. Loved Madhumathi for her immense affection for both Arnav and Khushi and Sumer is truly a gem...a gud father for Arnav and Laddoo as wel as a gud brother of Madhumathi. This is one great family where lots of love and care are brimming...thanx for such a splendid update and make this day very special for me. Really enjoyed reading ur updates. Hope we will get our next update soon. Happy Valentines Day!!!

That was a wonderful update