Arshi TS- Hand In Hand *COMPLETED*

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Vithagan2304

@Vithagan2304

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

jys luvd it
plz continue soon

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Ohhh wat a tragic end pls cont sooon

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

edited my comment on page 2:)

Edited by cheesemad - 11 years ago

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Aisha

@Aisha1996

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

AWESOME PART 👏👏

LOVED IT 😛

THEY BOTH R VERY NAUGHTY

PLS UPDATE NEXT PART SOON

PLS PM ME WHEN U UPDATE 😊

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Hina malik

@HinaMalik91

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Hey wow u started a TS and didn't even tell me😭😭

Thats not fair😡

It was an awesome read!!!!

Esp "Chuhiya" and laad governor parts and when Khushi was pulling his hairs🤣

Oh God! Their parents died😲

Now what??😕

Update soon ,OK!😡

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pinkwhalefish

@pinkwhalefish

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

miss jas aap tou chupay rustum nikle...

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Oye Jas ji you are aslo started writing stories😉

But i cant believe this is the first time you are attempting to write... i must say you done a fabulous job dear 👏

Beautiful Start.. I loved Arshi pulling each other legs and creating problems but they do care for each other...

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Roshni

@rashika

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Really? Seriously? Your first ever TS. Reading this it doesn't seem like your first piece instead it's like you have been writing for ages.
So back to the update.
Mind blowing comes to mind.
So Arnav and Khushi are brats. Both argue a lot and fight a lot.
The whole families being friends is nice but Arnav and Khushi are not.
From childhood till their teens still fighting.
Poor parents having to deal with them.
Now Khushi has rescued Arnav once from being scolded and she got a slap in return making her cry and Arnav feel guilty. Well it seems that without knowing they care for each other deeply.
Now with the bad news that maybe both their parents have been killed is not good news for either.
Can't wait for next part.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Why do I think that they are no more

Their parents please not that

So they are always fighting with one another

But still take care of one another

She saved Arnie when he would have been scolded

Why as only she has the right to do that

And they still havent changed

Can't wait for next one

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arsneh

@arsneh

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

its interesting i loved it but u ended 1st update like this 😡 update next part as soon as possible now i am curious to know.what happened

also i didn't felt u r writing first time a TS its great

Edited by arsneh - 11 years ago