Arnav & Khushi TS || Fasten & Lock || Part Two COMPLETE

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sadhnasoumya

@sadhnasoumya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Very well written
So that was khushi and she came back

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

mind blowing concept
marvellous
ts
loved it
really hearrt touching

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meera30

@meera30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

I wish you hadn't lost interest in this really. Don't get me wrong, the TS still does read pretty well but the start was fabulous and so different. I wonder what it might have been if you had continued it like you probably meant to at the very beginning!

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Zee

@aamir18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Thank you so much for the comment, Meera!

Truth be told, I just got really lazy 😳 I'd planned on delving into far more detail for part 2, but ended up just rushing the story line. Bad decision on my part.

But what to do!? 😆 Thank you so much for reading and for leaving a comment. It means the world to me.

Originally posted by: meera30
I wish you hadn't lost interest in this really. Don't get me wrong, the TS still does read pretty well but the start was fabulous and so different. I wonder what it might have been if you had continued it like you probably meant to at the very beginning!