An ArHi SS: Shaadi #2 *Completed, moved to open blog* - Page 22

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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the cocky arnav and simply adored khushi's retort. i could actually picturise the scene
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Posted: 11 years ago
expel ji from a watchman to millionaire???i mean i know arnavji has reached this heights from sractch but watchmen..this just reminded me of tthe show were khushi was imagining arnav werever she went and then barun as a watchman he was so cute...
lavanya as bodyguard and manorama as house help🤣
hillarious...
you see you are back with your cliffi i knew you cant be far away from them...
vaiting for part 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love the word games but when ll the love games begin 😉

Watchman to CEO, really 😆 But yeah with ASR anything is possible 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
well itz super update but seems to short for the curious side of me... Well happening happening hote khushi so gayi,


Why...



Itz so sad to wait for 24 hour for next ,,,















plz make it soon


















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Posted: 11 years ago
Congo on the new thread.
Very interesting ASR with no baggage whatsoever and shy, yet gutsy Khushi. Loved it.
Manorama - the housekeeper was the best one yet.😆
Edited by Saffronia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
part one is fabulous .you included all characters but in different avtars .very nice . the house keeper manorama was something special
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Posted: 11 years ago
First of all an epic of your writings this would be.. No cliff hangers but you still get us hooked anticipating for the next part.. That cant be changed J.. 😆

Part 1

wow the journey from US to Delhi; from terrace to the hotel room on her suhaagraat. Khushi is really modern, logical practical who wants to stand on her own legs.. Bravo.. The swayamvar for the most eligible Bride for the Arrogant Womanizing Jerk. Payal is caught up in trouble seeks her elder sister help while Khushi is being practical in terms. Unlike the sacrificing Jiji choti behen they portray their beliefs and terms without losing their individuality. The terrace scene was really hilarious. Especially the dhak dhak confrontation of the jerk with our over practical Gupta. Wow what a convo.. I love this flirtatious yet decent Raizada. she appears to be on her resolve of not entertaining the jerk at any cost. Still with his wits he is able to bring out that blush on her cheeks.. kudos man.Then the self introspection during her travel to Lucknow.. what made her so intriguing into that convo that she had given so much effort to counter his dialogs. Least she knew that the predator had already laid plans to catch his prey by trapping her from all sides.

That surprise meeting by the Jerk at her house, the conversation of not so lightly but a grave situation. Marriage a contract a test of endurance for one year. She had been pressurized from parents to consider him, Payal's love life, her education, career and on the whole her flexibility and convenience from his end. but this flexibility had proven a bigger thread.. what after one year if they dont seem to work this out? Optimistic Jerk assures he will not think negative, while our heroine is thinking the worst come worst possible situation and holding on to her horses. Interesting enough to say both did this just for the sake of their own families. He did like this wild cat and caught her at the most tricking point.A marriage of convenience, a prenuptial agreement .. hmm. this man has really dug out the history from the graves of her ancestors too right from her Molecular biology to convincing Akash's family..

I like her honesty of not taking alimony after the divorce.. I think she was stepping into his good books step by step that more than attraction there seems to be an air of respect and admiration for his lady.The magnet is getting him attracted but he holds himself respecting their mutual conditions. but how long?

Part 2 A - Now journey to the married life in Cal.. Private Jet and the glory of the millionaire surprising her. From rags to riches from a watchman to a millionaire? 😲 Well..the man has got the determination and hardwork no wonder he had scrutinized her background details so much before proposing the contract to her. Perfectionist. Lavanya as the body guard.. thats the funniest characterization anyone had portrayed her till date. The pomp and glory of the man attributing to his charm really blows her off when she saw him inside the Limo welcoming her. I loved their casual convo.. Now comes the new characters.. who is Sheetal and NK now? uh..
Manorma the house keeper.. wow.. J.. thats unexpected.
He made her totally comfortable in his house without the compulsions from his part. and that feeling in the middle of her sleep I feel the jerk just got time to admire his wife's lips 😉 That car scene was really fun. Attraction temptation but the invisible line of control. 😆
OMG that shaatir dimaag did blow him away.. He expected over the top from her but she pulled him down from the sky on to the ground with that one reference. 😆 Aman the studious innocent colleague..Now whats waiting for us in Menlo Park? 😛


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Posted: 11 years ago
I m just speechless... Beautiful story..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesomeee ... brain seriously ????? I love this gutsy khushi who can make ASR speechless for a minute hmm.. I love this already Now Manorama and housekeeper hilarious ... waiting
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plz mention the time for update. plz...

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