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Arilip

@Arilip

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Beautiful story👏...nice update...

Poor khushi 😳...how will she resist the storm called ASR...that to when he is so much in his element😉...

Still appreciate her wit👏

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beenish

@beenish248

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#132

marvelous di .. I can't wait for 2nd part ..

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Arathy-V

@Arathy-V

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Omg u updated 😃😃

I really hope Lavanya and ASR doesnt have a past..Who is Sheetal?? Glad to see Dhruv atleast here...

Did ASR kiss Khushi when she was asleep?? I think so☺️

Inspite of the teaser,i was grinning like a fool while reading it again

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bridgeofdreams

@bridgeofdreams

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Res

Edited~

Khushi is really confused because she is fighting with herself. Sometimes she wants to accept that they are in a relationship, but then she reminds herself that it's all a deal. Why does not she remember the term where he said clearly that if their relationship fits them and they adjust togther then it might be a lifetime marriage? However, I can't blame the changes she has by now. She is in a dilemma and he does not help at all with his talks. But as she said, he does not do that for the mere sake of flirting, it's a second nature to him. So far, the progress comes from Arnav's side and Khushi's secret slow reactions only.

Again, I must say that I love Arnav's honesty. He admitted that he is a show off when he said that he wanted to impress her. He explained his situation whe he could not resist but touch her. And yes, he does not hide anything from her be it his thoughts, plans, suggestion, etc...

I love your choice of words; each single word enhances the situations and portrays them beautifully.

When Khushi names Arnav in her thoughts by his name and not Mr. Raizaada, I find it a little bit..different because she still calls him Mr. Raizaada.

Deep inside her, Khushi wants to be beautiful and attractive for him. I like how you focus on them and the changes in their lives (Like Khushi's job, her views about the limousine, penthouse and all...)

It's so fun to read their conversations and catch the meaning of Arnav's words!

Will Khushi wear a dress for the party? And if yes, it will be interseting to know Arnav's reaction ;)

Shaimaa

Edited by bridgeofdreams - 11 years ago

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Meena

@chotidesi

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Hahahahaha oh my god Lavanya's a bodyguard?! I can't wait to see how that plays out. I'm curious to know what her relationship with Arnav is like. I seriously love this Arnav, especially since he can get Khushi so riled up. It reminds me of the 'naughtier' Arnav they showed in the show when he was trying to win Khushi back. Great work!

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Kavyasarun

@Kavya_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Chap 2 part 1 was fantastic... Loved it. Waiting for part 2.

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#137

Wonderful update!!

M loving this cat n mouse game between Arnav n khushi! Its a known fact that guys enjoy this chasing the girl part , n arnav definitely seems to be leaving no stone unturned to impress/ attract/ woo/ tease khushi! One can imagine the effort khushi must be putting to not succumb to his charms!!

I loved the background story on arnav! His rags to riches story was truly inspiring and definitely admirable!

N it was interesting to see a slightly jealous/ curious side of Arnav when he was casually asking about Aman Mathur! Hmmm... Lets see what dyanmics Mr mathur can bring in here

Also m very curious about Lavanya, y was khushi apprehensive of her? I mean y did she make her uncomfortable? Is there some lavanya arnav history too?

I dont understand , one hand Arnav's actions indicate thatbhe want a long term relationship with khushi on the other hand the last lines of the chapter indicate otherwise! I dont understand what exactly does he want?

M really enjoying this Story! It Reminds me of Judith Mcnaught romantic novels that i used to read way back!!!

Waiting to read chapter 3!!

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Nisha Thakur

@nerdy_Nisha93

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Congrats on the new thread.

I just managed to comment on the first chapter, its on pg 151 of previous thread. Sorry for the delay. :-(
You have already updated the next one. Hopefully I will be commenting early this time around.

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awroneema

@awroneema

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Just read the part 1 girl...its too awesome to be read once...i m definitely loving ur lighter writing version...👏

Now back to chappy its awesome...like khushi i m also feeling uneasy abt why he has to have a scratchy past!! God men r meant to be &%$^$% 🤢 is it really difficult for a smart..good looking.charming...sexy..hawt...yammy...ermm🤪 rich guy to be chaste and neat till he gets married!!😡 bloody men cotrol freaks but jaha control karna chahiye waha behekte rehte hai!! hump..

and thn he came to receive her..with flower kiss..phone..care 😳..all mushy mushy..whn i could not hold my previous feeling how is khushi adapting this..when she bloody well know he wants her!! But why i get the vive dat he loves her!!
u know...when he said about shifting home n all with her opinion..the first thing came to my mind is...this guy has really fallen for his wife...before or after mrg that i donno..but definitely has fallen for her..distance from her uni is just a bahana...he must have taken his ex-es or flings to all his houses..so dont want his wify dear to live in those places...he wants to create new memories..at new place...wanna create a HOME finally..with her only.. lets see what is in store for us!!

Then comes the ever docile LK turns into the bodyguard and ever tortured AM turns up as the Boss..very interesting.😃..do they luv ASR, KSR respectively??something is fishy...i know u said no twist n all...yet cant help it..😕 Dhruv is ASR's driver right So NK must be watchman 😆 but who the hell is Sheetal..nd Anjali is cool about her...so cant be his ex..may be anji's koi bichari nanand or something ( hope she was also a staff who was fired by ASR after trying something like "aye hip hoper opps... aye ASR mujhe pyaar to kar aye ASR..but it's a different story that this ASR might be more than eager to do that hip hop...in every given chance 😆)"
[chk this out.. i know not related..but i luv it..😆 u will like it too
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qhJI61vz73M ]

Its a relief imagining Manoroma in sober dress up and behavior..taking care of the house..respecting phatti sari...but seriously our beloved hello hi bye bye is THE Caretaker!! that's something new...😆..wait wait...is she payal's would be MIL...hope not Garima invited them in the weekend so may be not...errm got confused...🤔 akash payal..uff i hate thm..hummp😵

And btw ASR kya chance pe dance marli?? i mean neend mai khushi ko kiss to na kar dia...? bechari ko pata tak na chala.reaction bhi de na paya not fair..ASR..😉..plz plz give us the POV of this smitten hubby ...a pretty plz..😳

ROFLMAO is an understatement for their car convo...no words...Khushi tried to beat him in his own game..but i must say he is the principal of the school where khushi is trying to b a teacher!!🤣 luv the way he was back on his position after the initial shock...within few seconds khushi ki bolti band kar di!! maan na parega... he is the boss!!m looking forward to khushi to take ASR's "still on offer".😳..

for me the biggest mystery so far is the mighty ASR himself.. why is ASR is being too accommodating n goody goody? does he really want his mrg to work? then why contract? or just trying to win khushi only for ding dong...ehmmm not him though...uff i have a tiny miny shaq on him sometimes..i know that's useless but something is not right,,with Arnav or this mrg...donno wat!!...btw how did he got her name in the 1st meet? 😲...investigation kareka pari! 😎

and abt part 2...no prob sweety take ur tym...u r always punctual nd give us regular updates [our on the go author of the year 😊]...cant thank and luv u enough for that..🤗.so itna haq to ur banta hi hai.😉..catch u tomorrow...tc.

[ps: ho sakey toh banglow k ek pic up kar dena..hum bhi thora akhein sek lein...!!
now gonna read it agn ...bye]

oh em gee...how cum i missed the lill dialogue session of the thread 2 earlier...its brilliant... i got 1 thing clear that... u toh kuch bhi likh do..mujhe everything accha lagta hai abt ur writing😛

tell u what u dont need to thank ur readers..in fact i thank u for given us wonderful stories...and u r one of the very few authors or in fact only author of the IF who always gives timely updates and never nags for likes and comments and i believe the reason is u believe in ur work and ability...they r so strong that no one can ignore u damn it...like "no one can eat just one"..😃 ekbar koi.. koisi bhi chap parle to tarif karre bina chain na mile usse..😆

lolz i forget the number of times i have edited this post...kya karu evry 5..10 mins baad yaad ata hai..yeh nahi bola..to kabhi oh nahi bola..silly me!! see yeh sab bhi likh diya..🤪

Edited by awroneema - 11 years ago

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#140

Fantastic Fantastic fantastic update 👏 👏 👏

you are such an amazing writer👍🏼,your stories are stupendous stories.

I am loving this story. ❤️

Part A has taken my breath.

Why is khushi searching now about Arnav? I am impressed by Arnav's hardwork, truly his mind is very attractive.

For both of them attraction means something different, for Arnav its beauty and for khushi its some quality or trait of a character.

I sense uncomfortable and tension in khushi at ebing back to home with his husband and getting adapted with being Mrs. Arnav Singh Raizada. She is not used to jets, lavish and luxurious house, room, cars and body guards. She thinks she don't deserve these luxuries even when she is wife of a billionaire.

They planned to live their life their own way then why did Arnav felt for dicussing details of house, he really want a real marriage, companionship and a friend with whom he could share his loneliness.

Khushi don't find herself beautiful, its very strange. For me she is the most beautiful girl because her charm is simplicity which is present in her every bit of her life and i think that's actually what attracts Arnav.

OMG he kissed khushi when she was sleeping, he is getting naughty

Khushi need a lot of strength to ignore her charming, dashing, hot billionaire husband. God help her

Can't wait to read part two.

i am stalking thread to read it.