SS : As i hold on - *LAST PART ON PAGE 22* Am I in love ? - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
omg my god this is so awsm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Plz update nxt part ASAP
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Posted: 11 years ago
last also no pblm but u gave nice part i like it and ha pls post nxt part soon yar... i cant wait pls...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Awww.. Sandhir scenes were amazing..!!!
Randhir iTna caring hai...!!!
Sandhir in sanyuktha's room...
Update next part ASAP..!!
And thnqz for the pm.."
Love
Shalini
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow awesome
so fianlly the main culprit is out i.e kabir...


phewww...now sanyu is fine

sandhir moment is so cute

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princessaaliya

wonderful update!
do continue soon!



Tysm Aaliya 😊 tday i'll post rest of the story.

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

wow awesome

so fianlly the main culprit is out i.e kabir...


phewww...now sanyu is fine

sandhir moment is so cute



glad you like it kaveri. Thanks a ton 😊


thanks meenu 😊😊


Originally posted by: shalini_shakti

Awesome update...
Awww.. Sandhir scenes were amazing..!!!
Randhir iTna caring hai...!!!
Sandhir in sanyuktha's room...
Update next part ASAP..!!
And thnqz for the pm.."
Love
Shalini



You are always welcome shalini 😊 and thanks for reading 😃



thankyou unisha 😊

Originally posted by: purnima209

last also no pblm but u gave nice part i like it and ha pls post nxt part soon yar... i cant wait pls...


thankyou sooo much purnima 😊 yeps posting tday 😃

Originally posted by: suumi

Awesome update...
Plz update nxt part ASAP


😊 Tysm

Originally posted by: remindmeiforgot

omg my god this is so awsm...


thankyou 😊


Originally posted by: mariya.kamran

Omg what was awesome. Kept blushing on every word said by Randhir. I have just fallen in love with this guy, from head to heels. And now they are doing to share the bed... wow wow wow. Please update sooner xxx


hehehe really charming isnt he 😳


Originally posted by: rinku95

Amazing.
Thanks for pm
Continue soon


tysm for reading 😊

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

great story... continue n do pm me...


sure and thans 😊


Originally posted by: Prachijainn

RES!!!

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YAY!!!! *dancing*
I AM FIRST TO COMMENT
ISS BAAR LATE UPDATE KE LIYE MAAF KIYA

Awesome update!!!👏
Randhir taking care of Sanyukta SO CUTEEE😳
I am angry on that Kabir How dare he to do like this with Sanyukta😡😡

Next time jaldi update
Waiting for last part very eagerly



lol apka dhyanwaad. 😆
yeps yeps aapka order seranko pe. tday gonna update it 😃




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: srividhya68

awesome update
love it
cont soon



thankyu 😊


Originally posted by: simirani

I had just started reading your SS and I couldn't stop myself. I just read all your parts. I just love your writing style. You are incredibly talented! I would love to read any of your other works. This is just super se upar, awesome awesome, damn good, fablous SS. Please update soon and please add me to your PM list.



thankyou so much for compliments. mean a lot 😊 but not that good actually. anyways thanks a ton for reading 😊 and i'm glad you liked it 😃


Originally posted by: starart

Finallly u updated.. THANK YOU..

It was nice .. 👏👏👏👏
PLss update soon..



😊


tysm 😊

Originally posted by: Prarthana7

wow m luvin it...😆

Randhir hs fallen for her completly...jst he hv to realize...😉
n damn u r killing wid suspense yar...
who da hell ws dat man who tried to kill her...😡
do update soon...
thnx for da pm..😊



😊 updated 😃


thnaku 😊

Originally posted by: TashaForever

arre yaar. So chotu update! Who is the bstard who tried to kill Sanyu not once but twice.
Update really soon..too late u do nd we ll frget xP
Update ASAP..plot is so intriguing!!


guess yu forget 😭 😛

Originally posted by: sandhir.candy

u finnaly updated..

& now plz be regular with updating it
& yes it was really nice update
loved to see caring & possessive side of randhir



hehe i'm regular aint I ? 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago

Precap : sandhir sharing same bed.

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"it's going to be difficult" Randhir murmured.

He turned to look at Sanyukta who was sleeping peacefully under the effects of medicines. He unknowingly intertwined his hand with hers and soon drifted to sleep.

That night both slept peacefully with each other, forgetting who they were sleeping with. Next morning Randhir wake up first . he saw Sanyukta sleeping next t him. Her hand resting on his chest and his one hand holding her from waist and another intertwined with her hand.

Randhir smiled but soon reality hit him and he tried to sat up waking Sanyukta unintentionally who looked at him with her sleepy eyes and smiled at him. She looked at Randhir who seems to be lost soon she looked at their position and she at once sat up followed by Randhir.

"sorry for waking you up. I'm going you can sleep now."

Sanyukta was still sitting in her room thinking of Randhir. Hw caring he was towards her. She felt good being with him though they don't talk much but his presence was enough to give her peace and sense of security.

"I love you Randhir.." she said hugging her pillow then soon she came back to reality and was amused at herself..

She got ready and headed towards the class. No one was there.

"miracle! for the first time I made it that early all tahnks to Randhir. !" she said making a face And sat at her usual place.

Then entered Randhir. Sanyukta thought of something and smiled evilly.

Sanyukta looked at him and smiled widely confusing Randhir.

"you are back I missed you so much Randhir."

"huh ? you okay ? kuch ulta seedha to nahi khya na ?"

"offo ranhdir can't yu be serious ?"

"wair a sec is this the new drama of yours ?"

"drama...! So rude f you.. katti.."

Randhir was totally confused then he saw her laughing badly and he got everything.

"bht mza ata h na mere sath games khel k"

Soon students started entering and Randhir took his seat and continuously stared Sanyukta who in return laughs.

After the class Randhir and Sanyukta were working n dream team project

"Randhir you don't look well. What happen ? she said twinkling her eyes.

Ranhdir gave her an irritated look and said tiredly

"tum jha ho vha sab well kese ho skta h!" after caressing his forehead with his thumb and index finger he said " headache h rha h n it's all because of you."

"haww n you didn't even tell me.. and how come I responsible for that ?"

"coz of you I ddin't sleep peacefully and since morning you are irritating me"

Sanyukta faked anger. Randhir ignored her and laid his head to the top of chair and closed his eyes.

Sanyukta noticed that he was actually tired.

After sometimes he felt soft fingers caressing head, massaging it softly. His eyes snapped open and met her concerned eyes

"what are you doing ?"

"trying to reduce your pain."

"it's my head not neck that you're worried."

He again laid his head in that position and after few mins said

"if you want you can continue with it." He said pointing towards her hand on his head.

Sanyukta started massaging his head.

Randhir felt good. He was really tired and her soft touch Made him frget his pain. She saw frown disappearing from his forehead. She smiled and don't know why she did the next thing but she did, Randhir was enjoying her touch and was to sleep but was shocked when he felt her lips on his cheek and he didn't dare to open his eyes sanyu hugged him saying

"thankyou Randhir"

with this she broke the hug and she started doing the project leaving a peaceful Randhir sleeping beside. In between she catches a look of him sleeping and used to smile cutely

___

It's been one year and things have changed a lot b/w them not exactly different they still fight a lot and at times ended up hurting each other but somehow their fate get them more closure with it.

"Sanyukta !" shouted Randhir entering the mechanical lab.

Sanyukta didn't look back instead clutched her hands in fear.

"what do you think of yourself haan ?" he said in full anger "do whatever you want but stay away from my life and for god's sake don't interfere in it."

"enough Randhir.. don't you want it ?"

You don't have t bother but it. Kya.. kya prove kya krna chhti ho tum ? kit um bhut mahan ho ? see enough of your mahanta now pls stop poking your nose in my matter." Saying this he turned to leave but sanyu pulled him.

"why ranhdir why don't you want your parents to be together ?"

"I want them to be together but in a peaceful way." He gritted his teeth. " whenever they're together they kept fighting and I can't see this smjhi"

"but ranhdir it ain't so. I myself talked to them at the same time. They had some misunderstanding but.."

"enough Sanyukta aggarwal. Who are you to do this ? you have no right to .."

"Randhir tumhri problem kya h ! just go and see it once."

"I don't need your suggestion."

And he rushed towards his room.

__

He went to his room

"why snayukta... why !" he said throwing things here and there in anger.

__

Sanyukta was in canteen when she saw Randhir heading towards the main gate.

" So finally ise akal a gyi "

Jiggy came rushing towards her.

"Sanyukta did you say something to Randhir bhai ? He was so angry when he was in the room and when I asked what happen he packed his bag and left. I'm afraid khi ye college to nhi chor re ?

sanyu was tensed. She ran before him.

"Randhir... " she shouted

Randhir stopped for a while but again started walking.

"Randhir stop." She came before him and said in a panting tone.

She saw his face it was clearly visible that he was damn hurt. Sanyu's face get concerned.

Randhir pushed her aside and again started walking.

"Randhir you can't go likethis." She said blocking his way.

"Sanyukta just move. Isse pele ki me..."

"isse pele kya ? tm eek bat bhi smjh nhi ati hai ranhdir ? tume bola ja k bas ek bar apne parents ko... par tume to kuch smjh hi nhi ata. College hi chor k jane lage... tum k.."

"ho gya tumhara. Mil gya tumhe jo chie tha ? happy now ? vese t sabk dikhati ho that you're so nice. But mjse revenge lene ke lie is had tak jaogi I don't believe this."

"ranhdir I didn't do his for revenge for your family to be one."

"yaah.. these words don't sounds good from your mouth aggarwal. Apni family ki t ajtk kabhi hui nahi meri family kya krogi. Dn't forget tmri mom ki responsible bhi tum hi ho. Coz f you she had listen so many things." He left after saying this leaving a broken sanyu behind.

Randhir was parching when a sudden thought stroke his mind.

"oh no ranhdir what the hell did you just said to her." "shit" "I have to apologize"/

As he turned around to g back to campus another thought made it's way to his brain.

*tum ek bar to ja k dekho Randhir*

He thought how much she wanted him to go and meet his parents . he changed his mind.

*bell rang*

"coming."

As she opened the door.

"Randhir" renuka just hugged him till then his father came. "oh ranhdir my son finally you're here. How much we missed you son. Me and you mum were waiting since morning why didn't you come ?"

Randhir was feeling good seeing his parents together but a inner part of him was saying it's all fake.

"I need to use washroom" he lied and hid behind the wall.

"harsh I'm really glad that our family is back again." She said happily

"yeah I'm glad that even Randhir is with us. I thought he would understood it as drama. But see our son is understanding."

"it's all because of sanykta . such a nice girl she is."

"really renuka. I misunderstood that girl. She ain't like that. Infact I wuld be really happy if she became a part of our family.

"really ? even I was thinking the same. I liked her from the beginning "

Randhir who was listening to everything frm the back came in front and started heading towards the exit

"Randhir where are you going ?"

"to apologize to your daughter in law." And he smiled at them.

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In fite

Sanyukat was still sitting in the bench near the backyard and was still crying.

The moment she saw Randhir in front of her she stood up.

"Randhir." And she kissed him on his lips passionately as if she was meeting her loved one after a century .

"I love you Randhir. I love you. I'm so sorry I didn't mean to hurt you" she said hugging him.

Randhir was way to shock at this behavior of her. He had expected something like this but not exactly this.

Sanyukta relaised what she Is doing and she pulled herself back . she looked at him as if she murdered someone and rushed twards her room.

Randhir laughed at her behavior.

She went to her room. compeletely lost after 10 to 15 mins she finally said to herself

"how I can be so silly"

"you always have been so silly" Randhir smiked at her from the corner of her room.

"ranhdir what are you doing here."

"what were you doing there ?"

"wh..a...t ?? where ??"

"what ? shall I remind you Sanyukta ?" he said coming towards her.

"that was a mistake."

"oh it was ?" he kept moving closer.

Sanyukta's foot hit the bed's corner and she fell Randhir caught her as always and pulled her towards her and in a low voice.

"I'm sorry for those words soon to be mrs. ... shekhawat !"

Sanyukta who had closed her eyes before falling snapped open her eyes to meet his and automatically a smile played on her lips.

He throw her on the bed along with himself on top of her.

"what are you doing ranhdir ?" she aked nervously.

"spending a night with my future wife.. can't I ?" saying this he kissed her deeply

"I love you too Sanyukta.." he said after the kiss

And they had a beautiful night

________________THE END_____________________

Here ends my first at last .

Thankyou everyone for reading this and tolerating me.

Sorry if you didn't like it. I wrote it in hurry and skipped a lotta parts like what convo b/w sanyu and Randhir;s parents I had to finish it that's why.

Anyways thanks again byeee I'll be after a year perhaps. ! (not sure though) wish me luck !

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear.. Love it.. Thanks for pm..
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awsme part yar i loved it and all the best for ur future have a bright future...

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