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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#271

I read this entire series in one night! Phew!

Such an alluring story! I couldn't stop myself. Right when I thought things were looking up, I see Payal slowly sulking away. I really hope Akash knows about Manorama's words and does something to rectify it. I wish he talked to his mother and let her know how serious he is with the relationship. Arnav and Khushi is another story, I know Arnav has realized how important Khushi is to him, but is he willing to commit himself for a marriage with her? They still have a long way to go, and they really need to sit down and talk about their past, the separation and their future.

I loved the characters and their personalities. Each one is completely different than the other. They're all coming from different phases of life, bonding with one word: love.

I wish I could write more, but I am in a hurry! I loved the story, and I hope you will pm me with the next updates! Please! :)

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#272

Awesome update!!!!! Cannot wait for the next update 😊

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#273

like button not working :(

feeling very sad for payal

i understand wht anji is feeling very much so

happy dance for arshi

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Totaly enjoy the updt butifuly writen al maraige rutal n buty describe so wel but cant undrstnd meaning of last line cont soon tanx for pm

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#275

It was beautiful ...the convo between Ana and Anjali, Anjali 's nervousness, Khushi and arnav 's moments, Ana and aman's moments and the best one was Payal's reply to Manorama..it was one emotional roller Coaster ride..very very beautiful 😊

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supervin76

@supervin76

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#276

Hey, thanks for the PM. Loved this chapter. There is such a a myriad of emotions on display here. Your descriptive style is so beautiful, I felt I was personally present at the mandap witnessing the marriage .

Felt very sorry for Payal. Poor thing! Your ending paragraph of the chapter gives me the chills. Will there be trouble in paradise? I hope all the three young Jodi's and their love prevails, tiding over all potential troubles

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_disha_

@_disha_

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#277

Khushi ka dhak dhak is full on !!

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Archana M H

@archana.mh17

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#278

You know, you have a kind of gift-I have hated most multistarrer movies or any other works of fiction, but you write an FF with 4 couples, 3 getting, near equal space for their story to be told & you manage to keep the reader, at least, me, interested in each of the stories! While Dawn only lit up the sky, slowly dispelling the dark, filling it with mild hues of various colours, Noon seems to be scorching hot & nope, I'm not complaining-I'd rather buy myself a cool drink & deal with the heat!You write 4 couples, each so distinct from the other, not just in terms of where they are, in their relationship, but also, the very nature of their relationships! There's Anjali-Shyam, making it official-you made me like Anjali, & that, alone calls for a loud applause! There's Aman-Anya, the newest of the 3 relationships & yet, seemingly, the surest, too-no insecurities, no fear, they are together & they know they are it for each other! Aakash-Payal, they are amazing together, but how does one get the mother on-board! Then, Arnav-Khushi, they are basking in the happiness that their relationship has brought, but perhaps, this is the one that's so full of insecurities & uncertainties, on bothe ends! It'll be interesting to see where they each stand! There's also such positivity in your writing!

Dawn, Noon & Dusk is one of my most favourite feel-good FFs, that I've read!