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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it. beautifully written part
especially the unspoken conversation bet Arnav and Khushi and the detailed explanation of the decor and clothes. could actually visualize everything happening.

Big Chapter... It is just exciting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I always admire ur style of writing especially d way u convey such intense emotions through simple words...marvelous update...thanks for updating...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice chapter
loved the wedding atmosphere
but hate manorama
will payal break up with akash???
waiting for next part😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome..., really love the story... hmmm I hope u give everyone a happy ending
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi ... Had been stalking since yest n was finally goin 2 ask whn u r updatn n i recieve ur pm ... The smile on my face couldnt hav been bigger n my husband looked at me as if i hav 2 horns .. Z

Well he would never know the feeln as he is nt reading ths wonderf piece of wrk ... His loss ... Comn bak 2 the update ... Beautiful ... The way u potrayed the pre wedi g jitters 2 the lovely description of the weding it was all amazing ... Just the last sentence left me a little baffled thinkn u hav some surorises stored up ... Its such a cute story dont want any mishaps ... N yes maamiji ... Hate her n feel so sorry 4 payal ... Hope akash is strong enough to stand up for her
Tht has 2 be the longest comnent ive ever written 4 any ff im reading 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for the PM and its nice update. i alys love Indian wedding and i enjoyed reading it. there was not much of Arnav & kushi Scene in here but i enjoyed it. Hoping they also have happy ending like Anjile & Shyam. if its to go bay ur prologue then its kind of sad and hoping that the lady in is not kushi. once again thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg yay Anjali finally got married! I'm so hPpy she was able to go through with it :')
And yikes, why is manorma mami so cold to Payal?! It's so unfair of her to treat her that way, I wonder what's going to happen to akash and Payal now.
The ending did not give me a happy feeling... Seems like something bad is going to happen very soon :( can't wait for the next update! I am excited to see Arnav's reaction to Khushi staying longer!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update
The last line left me so confused . R Anjali's dreams for a happy family going to shatter ? Is the past gng to repeat? Is shyams goodness a facade? As she knits her dreams of a perfect happy family Dnt want her for a heart break .
The convo between two sisters was so beautiful n emotional . Would have loved if Arnav too had joined this sibling conversation remembering their beautiful memories with their mom ...

As usual Manorama was very rude but PAyal was absolutely brilliant with her answers stating that though an orphan her morals n values in life are too strong n she is not a selfish woman who will hurt others n build a castle of happiness for herself . She deserves an applaud👏. It's gng to be a tough job for Aakash to convince both the parties ... Let's see how he manages...
Loved our beloved Arnav khushi . As usual their love story just melts my heart n just want to get carried away in their little world of attraction , love , passion , desire ...
Loved Amans wAy of complimenting Ana but 4 years is a long wait😕
Just love how beautifully n intricately you explain about each n everyone's wedding trousseau n also the beautiful luxurious floral decorations too making the story more imaginative for the readers👏
Thnks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

wow...amazing update... beautifully written...

Poor Payal... she got taunted by Mamiji and still she gave her respect and assured her that she will not come between her son and her... feel so proud of her...

Anya and Amaz's part was sweet...

Arnav and Khushi will be able to spend more time because of Anjali...

Anjali finally married... but your last line scared me... what do you mean by it????

"It's a mistake to look too far ahead. The chain of destiny can only be grasped one link at a time." C'est dur mais c'est la vie.

loved the update 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
The long and wonderful chapter is a sur compensation for the delay.. Thank you very much.
The worries of anjali, or rather of any bride is soo true. But for wat anjali has experienced, the fear will be a lot more. I loved anya was calming her down. I especially loved wat khushi said. "Amma says and I personally agree that a marriage - love or arranged works only when both spouses have self-respect and mutually respect each other, accept each other with all their strengths and weaknesses and compromise. " it is absolutely true.
Anya n amans convo was cute too.
But payals emotions made me tear up. But i repect and admire the spunk in her to still stand up for wat she believes in.
Can khushi get any sweeter. Arnav being miffed and though she is trying to ignore it, she definitely cannot. Moreover she is feeling so sad abt it that she ends up apologising. She is soo understanding.
Last but not least, nani's emotions. It wud be any grandmothers thoughts to wish her daughter was here to see this blissful moment of her daughter's life. To see how thay have become successful and overcome their fears. A very proud grandmother in the role of a mother. And yet she wishes to be just a grandmother and have her daughter here instead.
The speciality of this story is u cant leave one and think only of another. They r all important. I wish all of them to b happy. Thoug i know that can never b in real life.

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