UNTAMED DESIRES-MG FF-UPDATED PT 22 PG 114 ON 16-08-14 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
past n present both are very cute...

superb updates...


loved dem very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
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I was a bit doubtful whether the little baby is Maan's child . as he had sterilized himself at the age of 21
but than again Geet making it clear that he reversed everything and little baby Bhoomi is his blood .
seems like this guy Vikram really disrespects woman and treats them as objects for his desires , good Maan walked into the ward at the perfect time .
Maaneet adorpting Mariah is giving her a loving family is the greatest gift a child can receive .
Maan himself was adorpted by the Khurana's yet their treat him very much like he is their blood .
so Maan bascially met Geet when he was teaching sanskrit
Maan's past when he was with Ahana I first thought that he did not believe in love then , but when he was speaking to Ahana I almost felt that only because he is sterile he does not want to ruin Ahana's life
I'm really interested in Maan's past what he actually endured and why was he that way
at present its clear he loves and worshippes Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
nice part...
Maan did what...
then how come hes a father now?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
nice update dear...maaneet ki cutie pie ko sab se kitna pyaar mil rh h...hehehehehe maan jealous ho rh h bhoomi ko uske grandpa k saath dekh k...
wow maaneet ne ek girl ko adopt b kiya h...ufff mariha ne kitna kuch face kiya h itni si age me...
past was also nice...waiting for nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Part 2/3

Superb...fabulous updates

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
part 3
awesome dear...
nice...
what made Maan change his decision?
and who was Bhoomi?
wow Raj also here...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Fantastic update !!

felt really bad for mariah bt very happy n proud tht maaneet adopted her & whole khurana family acceptd mariah ..

like maaneet's convo in sanskrit ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
Alll the 3 updates were superbbb..
So Maan was adopted..but wht made him so much ruthless..
Maan attracted towards Geet in past...

Present...Awww...Maaneet r parents of an angel..they also adapted Mariah...so sweet of them...
Vikram...such a jerk...but got right treatment frm Maan..
Waiting fr nxt..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
very very sorry for the late response😭

coming to the update.. so maan's daughter was bhoomi and both maan and geet had tragic past... hmm interesting waiting for more 😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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RECAP

PRESENT

On that time cars rushed inside the porch of KM which both Siddharth and Maan heard it.Doors opened and footsteps sounded and both Siddharth and Maan was hugged tightly by the pack.Everyone screamed in unison,"Congrats bro!"Maan laughed hearing their scream when everyone saw both mother and grandmother climbing downstairs together holding the baby.Mariah who had finished her prayers had settled herself on her father's lap jumped on the sofa in excitement.Everyone kissed her too and ran to see the new member.Dev who was the first biological son of Siddharth widened his eyes seeing his niece beautifully jelling towards him.Meera Dev's wife squealed seeing Bhoomi snuggling towards her husband.Next turn was of Siddharth's biological daughter Anwesha(Annie) and her husband Arjun's turn who sighed loving her chubby cheeks.They were trying but was not fruitful to get children for themselves.

PAST

On that time Maan spoke still writing on the board,"Smayte tatparam Ms Handa!"(Smile afterwards Ms Handa)When he spoke in Sanskrit then she was amazed.She looked up but he was still writing something on the board.She lowered her almond eyes and a smile crept on her petal lips.

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PART 04



PRESENT



Maan's family settled itself still playing with the new member and Mariah too.The scene was so blissful and serene with the full family.Siddharth and Soumya enjoyed with their children and grand-children and retired to their room for sleep at night.After midnight,when Maan was peacefully sleeping Geet slipped from his side wearing her night gown and gently lifted her daughter.She walked past the hall and went outside wrapping her daughter in an warm blanket.She walked in fast pace and stopped in front of the large Mango tree in her garden and saw someone standing there.She went near the person when the person got alerted with the sounds of her anklets.

Geet went more near to the person and said,"I have brought her!"That person turned and lowered the hood from the face.The person was a woman who stood seeing Geet intently.

Geet said smiling widely and said stretching Bhoomi towards her,"My daughter Bhoomi!"

The woman's eyes widened and saw the small baby fast asleep.She took Bhoomi carefully and saw her features.She was looking exactly like Maan and her eyes welled up.

She kissed Bhoomi's cheeks and said,"I want to be her god-mother,if u wish so!"

Geet smiled and said,"Piya,i understand another woman's heart!In fact i kept her the very same name so that he see his child inside my daughter and i hope u too see like that!"

Piya nodded and took a golden chain from her pocket and put it around Bhoomi's neck and kissed her forehead.

Geet protested seeing the expensive golden chain but Piya said,"Geet,think its blessings from her god-mother!"

Geet cudnt be convinced but still she nodded forcefully.Piya saw Bhoomi till her fill and gave her back to Geet longingly.When Bhoomi came to her mother she snuggled more sighing softly.

Piya kissed her small feet and said,"I always love u dear!"

Then she looked at Geet and spoke,"Thank u Geet,for this precious gift.Am so happy!I behaved with u rudely but still u dint get angry on me!Am sorry for everything in those days!"

Geet said,"Piya,am his partner and trying to lesser the sins which he committed by asking atonement from the god everyday!He behaved with u very rudely but today he repent his mistakes!"

Piya said,"Am also repenting my mistakes Geet!I should have let him go when he said that he dont have any feelings towards me.But i seduced him when he was an drug addict.I should have acted as atonement to him but instead i did several mistakes in which am the only one to blame!Thank u Geet,when i touched ur pureness,then i became pure.That's why i made my peace with my past and i let him go!I realised that no use of bonding him with me with an loveless life!Thank u once again,Geet!He's changed and he loves u crazily and no one not even me have the right to snatch him from u!"

Geet only smiled at her and Piya said,"Good night,Geet!"

Geet smiled and said,"Good night Piya!"

Piya once again kissed Bhoomi's forehead and hugged Geet tightly and went away.Geet saw her retreating back and came back to the KM.She was abt to climb the staircase when the hall's light lit making her alarmed.She saw around her and saw Maan sitting there.Geet was a bit scared seeing him there as she was afraid of his anger.But Maan walked towards her and lifted Bhoomi carefully from her and snuggled to his chest and sighed.Geet dint speak and saw him intently when he calmed himself holding Bhoomi tightly.

After sometime he asked,"How is she?"

Geet turned and asked,"What do u mean?"

Maan spoke,"Geet,am asking abt Piya!"

She came near him and stroked Bhoomi's head and spoke,"She's fine Maan still repenting her mistakes!She asked me that can she become the god-mother of Bhoomi!"

Maan asked,"And what did u say?"

She sighed and said,"I said yes to it!"

Maan asked,"Cant i never be freed from my past?"

Geet said,"Maan,u know why we remember the past,so that we wont do that mistakes in future!U think by remembering the past u will never be freed from the word remorse then u r wrong.When we remember the good memories from the past then why cant we remember the bad memories and that too just to protect ourselves by doing those mistakes in future?Maan,i know u hv suffered so much and i feel that becoz am ur partner,but my wish is that u remember ur past.Not just for remorse but to protect urself by doing those mistakes in future.I know u have done so many mistakes when u were an drug addict.But for those mistakes u have repented every single second.Just let it go Maan and stretch ur wings in the air!"

Maan hugged her tightly and said,"If u were not there then this Maan would never was alive!"

Geet immediately shut his mouth from her palm and glared at him.

Both Maaneet walked inside their room and Maan made Bhoomi sleep in her crib and pouted,"How much she sleeps?"

Geet asked him curiously,"Why?Why u want her to be awake at this time?"

Maan pouted,"So that i can play,now u made me awake by staying far away from me and now am not getting sleep!I cant even love u as u r bleeding and now i need to sit on the ice to cool my untamed desires."

Geet blushed profusely with his words and glared at him when he chuckled seeing her red cheeks.

He kissed her red cheeks and said huskily,"U look beautiful in this natural blush!"

She hid her face inside his neck and kissed his neck making him groan.

Maan groaned,"Jaan,u r not gonna get good result by seducing me!"

Geet said more coming closer and brushing her lips,"Dont worry,u can love me at this time also!"

He groaned and asked,"How come?"

Geet spoke,"Tomorrow is the last day for my periods to stop and now its tomorrow only."

Maan groaned and immediately took her lips kissing her passionately and his fingers moved to slid her night gown.She moaned when she felt his arousal and undid his tracks.He kicked off his tracks along with boxers and smoothed her waist skin by stroking with his expert fingers.She moaned feeling his finger when her hand moved and immediately pulled him on her.He unhooked her b** after pulling her night gown and slid his fingers on her eager nipple.He softly stroked it and put it inside his mouth licking it swirling it and stroking it.She moaned scratching her nails on his back while his arousal softly entered inside her.When he was abt to thrust inside her powerfully due to his desires then they heard the sharp cry of Bhoomi.Maan groaned and kept his forehead on her forehead covering his body on her.Geet stroked his back to calm him when he snatched her both hands and pinned it around her head.Maan kissed her passionately and immediately slid towards Bhoomi's crib.He took Bhoomi gently and cradled inside his chest and walked towards the bed.

Geet took Bhoomi and stuffed her nipple inside her mouth as it was the time of her feed.Bhoomi drunk the milk hungrily while he stroked her spine lovingly.After her feed Bhoomi was dozing of completely when Maan carried her to the crib.Bhoomi snuggled to the blanket immediately and he kissed her forehead and came and sat beside Geet.Both saw the time as it was 2 on the morning.So they slept immediately inside each other's embrace.

Next morning Soumya was preparing breakfast when Geet entered.Geet said seeing her working,!Mom,let it be!I'll do it!"Soumya said kissing her forehead,"Its ok beta,this is my house only!"Geet immediately said,"Then why dad wont think like that!"Soumya dint answer her question and busied herself in the work when Geet once again said,"Mom,this is bad!U cant stay in ur ancestral property house when u have ur own house where ur children grew up!"Soumya still dint answer but Geet said once again,"Mom,we will be here for only holidays!Why cant u guys come and stay here,so that u will be able to take care of this house and then we will be able to move in whenever we want.I want u both in this house mom,its dad's and i cant let u guys stay there in that small house!"Soumya sighed at once and said,"I will convince ur dad,alright?"Geet squealed in delight and started helping Soumya.

Here in Maan's bedroom,Maan was arguing with his lawyer come best friend,"I want to destroy his existence,so search any way but i want him to be broken.He broke my Geetanjali and he will be broken too!"On that time someone replied for Maan said,"Veer,i dont want to hear ur plans theoretically!I want ur plans practically!"Veer said something for Maan said,"Good!I want him to know what is hell!He has messed with Khuranas and i dont want him to stay normal after messing with Khuranas!"

On that time Dev came outside not wearing any shirt on his upper body and sat on the sofa watching TV.On that time Maan heard a whimper and a scary scream.He ran downstairs to see Mariah seeing Dev half-naked in horror.She whimpered and he immediately ran towards her and hugged her tightly but with immense love.He snarled at Dev,"Wear something Dev now!"

Dev who was shocked with Maan's snarl stood more puzzled.Meera who came there hearing Maan's snarl ran inside her room and grabbed his shirt and was beside Dev in nano seconds.

Meera said,"Wear it Dev now!"Dev immediately wore to close his upper body and saw Mariah scared of something.

Dev asked,"What happened to her?Why is she so afraid?"

Maan snarled,"That's becoz of u,moron!"

Dev glared at Maan and flexed his biceps for which Geet said who had came there hearing the snarl,"Dev,Mariah is afraid of men who is half naked!She will be reminded of those men who harassed her in their room.Try to understand and Maan calm down and take Mariah from here!"

Maan glared back at Dev and immediately walked outside the house towards the garden murmuring soothing words in her ears.

After Maan's exit,Dev asked,"What was that Geet?"

Geet explained,"Dev,Mariah is an traumatized girl.She was sexually harassed and is so scared of half-naked men.She thinks that she's gonna be harassed seeing the half-naked men.That's why ur bro always wear clothes in front of her.So till u stay here be careful to wear full clothes in front of her!"

Dev pitied her and spoke,"Am sorry Geet,i wont do that again.But am angry with those family who made Mariah like that,if i get them then am gonna strangle them!

PAST

At the end of the class,Maan said to Geet in Sanskrit,"Ms Handa,mama sangama kaaryalayaha.(Meet me in my office)

Geet was scared but gently she nodded to Maan and collected her papers.On that time someone cleared his throat to distract her.Geet looked up and saw a handsome boy smiling at her.





He stretched his hands and said,"Hi!Am Prem Nanda!"

Geet smiled and kept her hand inside his wide palm and said,"Geetanjali Handa!"

Prem felt the soft skin of Geet's hands and was marveled how it was soft.

Prem said smiling more widely,"Pleaure to meet u Geet!Am sorry abt the professor,i dont know what's eating him.He was so happy this morning but from starting of the lecture.He was agitated of something!"

Geet wondered thoughtfully,"Why is that so?"But dint answer him and busied herself collecting the bag.

Prem asked further,"U r from this university?"

Geet nodded and turned to go when Prem followed her.Prem spoke,"That's good then u know all abt Professor Khurana!"

Geet nodded no to him and spoke,"I only heard abt him not attended his any of the seminar or classes or private lectures."

Prem asked,"So u r here for MA or doctoral!"Geet said,"Mine is doctoral program and urs Mr.Nanda!"

Prem said casually walking with her,"Call me Prem and am also doing doctoral program here!"Prem asked,"Any idea,why he called u to ur office,becoz he dont like to waste his time as he's leading an number 1 constructions company!"

Geet was shocked to hear this piece of information and Prem noticed that she's feeling uncomfortable.

He decided to let her go and said,"U should be going to his office as he dont like being waited!"

Geet nodded and asked,"Do u know where his office is?"

Prem said the direction and went away while Geet walked past one corridor to reach his office.When she reached his office on that time she saw the door stood ajar and she saw Antara standing close to Maan exposing her curves to him.




Maan who dint even glance her spoke harshly,"Ms.Sharma,ur thesis is juvenile!I want it to be more specific and explanatory and for god sake Ms.Sharma please stop plagarize others words.Write the thesis in ur words,do i make myself clear?"

Antara who was unsuccessful seducing him sighed disappointedly and nodded.She collected her things and walked outside his office.Antara saw Geet standing and glared at her with her doe eyes and went from there.Geet dint understand abt that and went inside the office.





Precap-Past-Maan's lips brushed immediately to her lips which made him fire to be ignited.Geet who felt his sculpted lips widened her almond eyes and tried to stand far away from him.

Present-Geet was preparing for her second lecture which was once again invited by Professor Agnihotri.



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