UNTAMED DESIRES-MG FF-UPDATED PT 22 PG 114 ON 16-08-14 - Page 49

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Maan said huskily,"Geet,this club is full of lusty person who can devour u if given a chance.I dont want u to become teary after what happens here.Am only saving u guys,so stay with me!"

Geet was stunned with the revelation and she turned around her for a moment when she got the true colors of her fellow visitors.Every eye contained either lust or attitude.Now she got to know why he was stopping her in all the ways.

Maan held out his hand and asked,"May i have the pleasure?"

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PART 17

Geet tried to consider it but lowered her head in front of him in submission.But Maan dint like this posture and spoke,"Geet look at me,i dont have problem with them who see me straightly!"

Geet gulped her saliva and looked up with wide eyes and Maan patiently asked her to dance but she nodded no to him.

Maan bit back his dominance and asked,"Am i that bad Ms.Handa?Why u dont want to dance with me?"

Geet widened her eyes and said,"I cant dance professor!I dont know how to dance!"

Maan was amused as he knew she had danced with him the previous night and she had danced perfectly.Maan asked in amusement,"So ur spirit danced with me the other day?"

Geet spoke softly,"I dint dance with u professor..just followed ur dance moves!"

Immediately Maan laughed heartily and asked,"And yet u think u cant dance?"

Geet nodded yes to him and said,"I will humiliate u by tripping or falling on the ground!"

Maan opened his palm and asked,"U cant dance but still u danced with me!Still am asking ur company in dance,will u be my partner,and dont worry if u fall then i will catch u!I wont let humiliate urself in front of everyone Ms.Handa!"

Geet shivered seeing his possessiveness and protectiveness in his eyes.Before Geet refuse he held her soft small hand in his large palm.Geet sucked her breath and looked at him with wide eyes.Maan smiled at her warmly and made her walk with him to the dance floor.The song started behind it which was Maahi song from the Raaz2 movie.


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Tujhe milke laga hai yeh,

tujhe dhundh raha tha main - 2

Tujhame hai kuch aisi subah sa,

Maan held her wrist and pulled her on his body rubbing it and grunted softly feeling her soft body.Maan never felt this sensation as heat coursed through his veins and he felt her shiver.He softly moved his fingers on her bare back and calmed her.But that only increased her desires towards him.Then she turned and pressed her soft back to his front when he took her hand and held her waist so possessively and moved holding her right hand.



Geet immediately got carried away in his passion and he started dancing holding her protectively and possessively.

jiski khaatir main tha jaga sa

Aa tu mere khwaab sajaa ja re,

maahi aaja re maahi aaja re



Tujhame hai kuch aisi subah sa,

jiski khaatir main tha jaga sa

Aa tu mere khwaab sajaa ja re...

Dil roye ya ilaahi tu aaja mere maahi - 3

Mere maahi mere maahi tu aaja mere maahi



Maan twirled Geet and snaked her hand around his waist and started to dance holding her so possessively.Once again Geet was in turmoil.She wanted to get rid of him soon but seems he cant be rid by her for life time.Maan once again twirled her and she immediately turned and he was struck with the vision which he felt.He saw younger Geet and him younger than his age now waltzing for the music.



Maan twirled her and lifted her in his arms and then he took a round and let her down gently.



Tujhe milke laga hai yeh,

tujhe dhundh raha tha main - 2

Tujhame hai kuch aisi subah sa,

jiski khaatir main tha jaga sa



Aa tu mere khwaab sajaa ja re...

Dil roye ya ilaahi tu aaja mere maahi - 2

Mere maahi mere maahi tu aaja mere maahi

Maan immediately came to his present world and saw around him.Geet saw his change and was scared of his shout.But Maan only pulled her inside his hard frame possessively twirled them unison.Maan immediately felt her small face near his and then he looked at her face clearly.It was total familiar and those eyes which were almond shaped made him captivate and tempt him to drown in those deep oceans.



Dil roye ya ilaahi tu aaja mere maahi

Maahi maahi maahi,

maahi maahi maahi

Dhadkano mein maahi,

saaanson mein hai maahi

Tu hi hai mere dil ki tamanna,



teri hi yaadein har lamha

De mujhe de apana aanchal,

dhoop mein jalta main harpal

Tujhme hai kuch aisi ghata sa,

He immediately twirled her and bent her backwards while his hardness rubbed her softness and he earned her blushing red cheeks.He was mesmerised while she was tempted of moving her fingers on his face and she dreamt it immediately.



jiske liye hoon main pyaasa sa

Aa tu meri pyaas bujha ja re...

Dil roye ya ilaahi tu aaja mere maahi - 2

Mere maahi, mere maahi,

ho aaja mere maahi

Dil roye ya ilaahi tu aaja mere maahi

He said unknowingly looking at her deep oceans,"U have a very beautiful eyes...almond shaped with lovely brown eyes...i love to call u almondy!"

Geet froze immediately hearing her pet name from his lips and looked up so eagerly that he immediately asked,"Something wrong!"But she dint answer him and he held her and twirled once again to the dance steps.

Maahi maahi maahi,

maahi maahi maahi

Bas mera tu maahi,

saaanso mein hai maahi

Hain mujhe hai tera armaan,

hai tujhe hai mera banana

Har ghadi teri dil mein aahat,

tu mile mil jaaye raahat



Jud ke bhi tu mujhse juda sa,

khilke bhi tu kyun hai khafaa sa

Aaja meri baahon mein aaja re...

Ho o jud ke bhi tu mujhse juda sa,

mulke bhi tu kyun hai khafaa sa

Aaja meri baahon mein aaja re...

Dil roye ya ilaahi tu aaja mere maahi - 4

Maahi... maahi... maahi



When the dance ended on that time Geet was totally in verge of tears...she cant able to control her untamed desires which were brewing continuously.She wanted to shout to the world that she loves Maan.But in other way she wanted to know that do he have an soft corner in his heart for her though he dont remember her.But whatever went on now made her confirmed that he dont remember her and for that she wanted to run away from everybody and cry her heart out and let her bottled emotions out.Meanwhile Maan was confused and was startled getting that type of vision...as if he was there in tht memory..as if he thought tht he lived tht memory...nt any illusion or fake.He dint feel calm after having dance with Geet.He wanted to calm his raging emotions and thought after dancing with her his emotions ceases and wont react for Geet.But it went other way round.His emotions once again got hyper and those visions made him restless and he wanted to know tht is is true or false.He dropped Geet to her flat and was abt to go when her sweet gentle voice stopped him.Geet wanted to say so many things but ended up saying hurted words.

Geet said in hurtful voice,"Professor Khurana,i know that u dont want to see my face and u r tolerating this becoz am ur sister's best friend.But from tomorrow...i wont be bother to u...i wont cross ur pathway ever...i know that u r having difficulty tolerating me but from tomorrow..its not gonna happen and i know u r ashamed of me as am no match to ur standards but from tomorrow that's not gonna happen becoz Annie gonna go back to her house.If u r scared of the university rules then u can trust me as am good at keeping secrets.No one ever know that u once entertained me in the club and had danced with me!I know u r worried abt ur job.I wont become a pain in ur throat and we can stay away from each other!"

Maan was so hurted with her words and cant able to speak and even he before speak,Geet went inside her flat and closed the door.Maan cant able to imagine why his heart is so hurting..paining like anything.He drove the car back still not glancing Annie while Annie was the silent spectator of his behaviour.She knew something had happened and thats why Maan was silent.He was in total confusion,and he cant figure out what was going on.

Meanwhile next morning Annie came to Geet's house and confided her fears abt Maan to her.

Annie-Will u keep an eye on Maan,Geet?Since his mother died he had become a robot doing all his works mechanically.Mom worried becoz of this and she's crying all over the place seeing him act like this reason.

Geet dint say anything when Annie held her hands and said,"Promise me that u will keep an eye on him!"

Geet was a bit reluctance and she was thinking abt herself.She wanted to break all the memories which is related to him but here her best friend is giving new responsibilities to take care.

Geet said firmly,"Am sorry i cant do this!"

Annie looked at her eyes and said,"I know the reason of ur refuse.I know u r affected becoz of his demeanor.But Geet please for mom's sake will u keep an eye on Maan?"

Geet was trapped here and she cant even refuse her friend.She's her best friend.How can she refuse her.Geet got up and stood near the window and some tears spilled from her almond eyes which she wiped immediately when she felt Annie beside her.

Annie pleaded,"Please Geet,for mom's sake!"

Geet meekly nodded and Annie was so happy that she hugged her tight.Geet was in the situation where she neither express her feelings to Maan nor deny Annie.Geet was thinking abt the future when she keeps an eye on Maan.

Precap-

Present

Maaneet patching up and Bhoomi in action once again and this time she's making her grandpa Siddharth's life hell.

Past

Kiss me...Kiss me Geetanjali and then am gonna go to bed!"He said that licking his dry lips.Geet saw his dark yet passionate chocolate eyes and was abt to swoon but right now she was swoon proof.Meanwhile Maan came near her closing all the distance and pressed his sculpted full M shaped lips on her soft ones.Geet shuddered feeling his rough yet sensual mouth and he tasted brandy and smelt the Denim cologne making her mad...


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Edited by geetsrir.maan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice prt
maaneet ka passion filled dance
hayeee
wating for nxt
bhoomi ka action dekhna
aur uske dadu ka reaction lol
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Posted: 11 years ago
aap bahut naughty ho
still not past teaser come
chalo koi nahin
wow that was some passionate dance
and he doesnt know why he feels for her so
i dont know maybe cause you knew her
but you forgot her
so sad right
yes that it is
man why them
no really why them
she is heart broken he doesnt remember her
and he is confused why she feels so familiar
calling her almondy and all
oh dear but it seems fate didnt want her away from maan
thats why annie asked her to keep an eye on him
poor maneet
but good for us
hmmm naughty devil bhoomi making grandpa life misery
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi dear! fab update! Sizzling passionate dance! Awesum song! Maaneet attracted to each other! Maan does nt remember her n she is sad! Annie asks Geet to look after Maan! well written! update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice udate
wow maaneet dance
love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
siri mai Goldie bann gai 😃😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow dear passionate dance of maaneet want to see bhoomi in action continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update siri
wow maaneet's passionate dance
maan still not remember geet...maan ne geet ko phir se uska pet name almondy diya uski eyes dekh k...geet feeling hurt n heartbroken bcoz maan not remember her...
maan confused h bcoz geet usse familiar lagti h
geet ne maan se dur rhne ka decision liya but Annie ne geet ko maan ki responsibility de di
waiting for nxt
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Posted: 11 years ago
brilliant update...lovely maaneet passionate moments...😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow lovely update geet maan se door rehna chati hai aur annie ne geet ko hi maan ki responsibility de di hai

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