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Posted: 11 years ago
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Another wonderful chapter!
Life of two being stuck in the complex web of emotions that have power to make and break completely. Just how similar both the conversations felt. In arnav though, his guilt did come up. But in Khushi.. She is fairing even worst! She is more damaged, emotionally it seems!
How did her mother die? What happened to her? Sameer Gupta may posses an ocean of patience, yet it too had a depth beyond which, anything is unexecptable!

Two lives, in themselves now left in ruins.. What next? Both are wasted! Both are connected!

Waiting to read more.
Edited by aashi12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update Dee!!! I am waiting to read the back story, what happened to Khushi that she hates music so much. Arnav is such a troubled soul, I gues when Arshi will come together they will be complete and at peace. Cannot wait for the next update!!!!!!
Edited by anu1017 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ok dee there are two things that struck me wen i read this chapter!
First! There is so much sadness and pain in every character's life! Be it Arnav, khushi or their parents. Every single person is fighting some demon, running away from something , n trying to pass each day rather than live it! There was so much unhappiness in this chapter dee! M sure it all is related to a single incident which changed everyone's life!

Secondly Arnav n khushi talk so rudely with their parents ya! I didnt like the way they talked at all. While Arnav was plain sarcastic n mean , khushi was downright rude and annoying! Poori batameez!
In contrast to them both their parents tried to drill some sense in to their heads, but seems it was all in vain!

Waiting to see why these two changed so much! Why their lives took such a sad turn!
N btw wat exactly is the truth? Is arnav a plagarist or not?
Waiting fr the next part dee!
N sorry fr the late unres!
Edited by Nandz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Lovely start dedee
Both arnav and khushi have a background with emotional turmoil I guess
Great start
Will wait for u to continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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fantastic updates...quite interesting...loved them...plz continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi.. somehow missed ur new ff till now...

amazing concept... loved the first 2 chapters... eagerly wating for the next updates to know what happened to khushi that makes her hate music so much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Both seem so troubled...wondering what drastic npmust have happened...the hurt seems very deeprooted...
It's so ironical..both the Dad's are trying very hard...they can see them in pain...


So well written...waiting eagerly for the next..one...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Terrific update...i'm in awe of ur writing skills...one hell of a talented writer u r...thanks for d update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome updates...
Part 1
I m hating this Arnav and his evil ways... And that journalist... Its a shame that we have these kind of people who claims to serve the country but the reality is totally different...
Khushi can't stand music...

Part 2...
Khushi's hatred for music is associated with her mother's death... She is emotionally torn...
Arnav felt guilty after listening to his father... That's mean everything is not lost... There i:s hope...
Loved it...
Edited by sincereme - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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What Wi liked the most in this update is that Arnav is feeling a sense of guilt when his father tells him he is wrong. His father is being the voice of conscience. So, there might be a way out for him.
He is not do far gone on the path of destruction that there is no way out for him.

And Khushi. She has gone through some extreme trauma which has turned her so against music.
I felt for Shashi. He has to bear the brunt of Khushi's anger.

Very interesting chapter, Dedee.
I read it on your blog too, which I am following.
But preferred to comment here, as its more interactive here.

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