Arshi FF: Tune Into Me-chapter:26 Updated Page 101

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

What exactly happened? Both these two hate music now! They detest it actually!!

I pity both the fathers! What kids have they got! Even khushi?? I can understand Arnav but khushi too?

Hmm! What happened? How did khushi 's die? How is it related to music??

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mrin0709

@mrin0709

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Just found this story..

Very strong n intense feelings.. Loved it

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soaringskies

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

interesting update deedee😊

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

This FF is asking me ''Tune into Me'' Nooro...hehheheh... Sorrry for being extremly late in my comment... From Ur note,,I didnt get that how they will be related to music...but after reading prologue I got some inkling... In Childhood flashback they were together...But now At present they are separated... Khushi who made music notes herself hates music now... On the other hand,,Arnav seems to be transformed into a popular singer,musician...But he is arrogant n Favr8 of media becoz Media wants to gossip about him alot...the whole scne with Divya was awesome... I was surprised that after ebing openly insulted by Arnav she still grabbed his hand to be with him...ahemm aheemm... Arnav had passion for music but he had lost it now...*wondering**confuse* But I wthink things will start becoming clear as the story is going to progress... Wese I like coco... Where is Cathy aunty... Too many questions n too many guesses...But I trust U Dedee...! *hugs* for starting a new story...Thankkks for PM...

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Mahnoor

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Chapter 2... Awesome One... I m loving bond between Sumeer Gupta and Khushi... Khushi seems to be affected in a wrose way due to her mother's death...n thats why she hates music...n behaves rudely with her father becoz he wants to hold back to his past... But I just love Sumeer Gupta...He handled his daughter's tantrums,,intentional taunts n cruel remarsk with the love of father...Like some loving father taking care of his Laadli beti/daughter...:) On the other hand,,Arnav is behaving in same way to his father...I guess his father was a big name of music industry n Arnav's afffairs are ruining his reputation...Arnav didnt want to listen to his father's lectures or any other thins...He feels guilt matlab he is stilll agood boy from inside but he has hidden that side well in his arrogant n I-dont-care attitude...He wants to listen to him but he deliberatly avoids to ponder on those thoughts or act on them... Nice update Dedee... Oh Yess ..One line caught my attention n I laughed at it...The line is *you should give up calling me when I don't pick up in the first two times.* this dialogue of Arnav is exactly My dad's...He just hates it when a person calls him twice if he didnt pick it first time...he just avoids receiving any call of that person for whole day...hehhehe...

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preethi.saseeda

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

I am completely tuned into their lives now... You have this innate ability with words to pull us head deep into the vortex of the emotional pool of your story... Its contagious and we are left with no option but exactly reflect every single emotion of your character...

So we have it in words the reason behind Khushi hating music... It was a lovely conversation between dad n daughter... It just breaks to see our loved ones struggling to cope up with tragedy even after years... 10 years is too long and my heart went out to her... I know there is more to the past n we have more to cry about but I cant help myself from seeing past it for the sunnier times that is to come in her life ----- for the sun shines more brighter after the storm.

He might appear ruthless, but he is hopelessly lost... The pretend is not going to be there forever... Curtains will rise and so will his pretense when she comes back in his life... the past is so intriguing now... i cant wait to know what was the tragedy that connects them to live a dead life... I couldnt relate why the guy will have to be the musician for name when he is clearly not ethically involved with it... Somehow this is not justifiable as yet, but i m sure u will address it soon... As of now it is a bit disturbing to know that he is not living a honest life... U had made it clear what we feel about him through his dad's words... It is really painful to read about Arnav n Khushi here...

PS: Awaiting an earlier update as this pain is being felt for real,,,,😭 n hope we could atleast get to this 😔 stage soon from the above one... N most importantly I just hope this story will have a 😃😃😃 ending

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Nandz

@Nandz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Comment updated On page 13
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luvbug

@luvbug

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

wow... the realtionship btw sameer n khushi was very different ...strained...and arnav n Siddhanth dont get along either... wow one in mumbai n other in scotland...wonder how they separated and how will they meet... interesting...

lovely chap..looking fwd for the next :)

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Barunz4ever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#89

OMG unbelievable. Arnav n khushi why are they behaving such rude arrogant jerks with their parents. Something grave has happened in their past which has turned their paths completely.

Externally they are behaving like jerks but internally that guilt feeling is there. Especially Arnav . That's why he keeps on drinking hard to get rid of the guilt feeling for his behaviour.

Whatever their past is but it has terrible affected their present n made them emotionally weak individuals who want to mask their emotions under their bad behaviours .

Looking forward to know more about their lives