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ankita sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: rbb1
yay can't wait to read it

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ankita sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

part 3

Shlok has been reached to manali where he has bought a new company. He is gonna live in his friend's farm house. For some unknown reason shlok was feeling relaxed...he was feeling her presence in the air. Just the thought of his lovely wife and he is guilty all over again. He was again lost in her thoughts and realised that he was a fool to hurt such a lovely and innocent soul. Her loved fill eyes used to appear infront of him. He used to compare the aastha of before the marriage and after the marriage. He find they were different as fire and ice. That aastha was chirpy but after his betrayal she was like a body without soul...a lifeless creature. He doesn't know why but today all his thoughts were just about aastha. He brushed these thoughts away and went to office by wearing the mask of a heartless person..

Shlok entered in his new office and got irritated as his dynamic nature and hot looks were making girls drool over him and he always hate the unnessesary women attention. He took quick steps and ordered his manager to call the employees one by one in his cabin. He liked many people but there were some cheap girls as well who were giving him seductive smiles and were willing to do some more indecent things too. Shlok showed them the way to exit. He was totally tired so he give a break.

On the other hand aastha was very nervous and got scared too as some girls sadid that he is not a nice man and don't even know how to talk to girls. It reminded aastha of shlok but she got angry on herself for thinking about that man. Aastha was lost in some thoughts but a voice broke her chain of thoughts.
Vishal with a smile-hlo...beautiful..
Aastha smiled-godd...you have no manners..you don't even know how to talk to a girl.
Vishal looked here and there-aastha where is a girl?? I mean here is no girl.
Aastha narrowed her eyes-vishal..i guess you need an eye specialist
Vishal chuckled-so why are you so tensed?? Pari is alright or not??
Aastha-pari is absolutely fit and fine..i m nervous because of this interview..
Vishal puts his hand around her shoulder and gave her a side hug-no need to be nervous..you are going to rock it.
Aastha smiled-hmm..hope so..
Vishal is a very kind and helping guy. He is sweet and always used to make others laugh. He became aastha's friend and helped her during her pregnancy and even took care of her meals at that time. Aastha was touched by his nature as the years passed he became aastha's best friend and know her better than others.

One more hour passed and shlok asked his manager to call the last employee. By this time shlok was irritated to the limits. He turned his chair around and closed his eyes. Therr was a knock on the door and then someone entered the room. But he didn't opened his eyes and didn't even turned around.
Shlok with closef eyes-name???
Aastha-Mrs. Aastha Agnihotri...
Shlok just turned around and saw his aastha standing there infront of him. He was shocked and happy at the same time. He saw her from top to bottom. She become more lean. Her lips were still pink,her maang filled with sindoor and neck adorned by a mangalsutra. And then he looked at her face which become pale as she had seen a ghost. Her eyes were filled with tears which rolled down her soft cheek. And a sob escaped from her lips. After seeing this he started moving towards her but to his surprise she took a step back. Shlok just want to pull her in his arms. He wanted to say so many things but tk his dismay she turned around and left the cabin.
Shlok got shocked but he ran and opened the door of his cabin so that he can stop her but the sight infront of him burned him beyond the limits..HIS aastha was in someone else arms. She was hugging him so tight and was sobbing whereas as he was consoling her. If eyes could burn then vishal must have been turned into ashes by then. Shlok shut the door with such a force that made the vase outside his cabin to break into pieces.

Aastha was shocked and frightened to see shlok so without thinking anything she stepped out of his cabin but met with vishal who was passing from the corridor. Vishal saw her state and asked her what happened but she just hugged him tightly and started crying which made vishal worried even more but he waited for her to be back to normal but the sudden sound of something made them apart.
Vishal with concern-what happened aastha??
Aastha wiped her tears-nothing...i just wanna go to home.
Vishal-aastha you are not lying right??
Aastha nodded in no. And then left from there as soon as possible. She got scared on the mere thought of shlok snatching her pari away from her so she thought with determination-Mr.Shlok Agnihotri..you took my everything away from me but i won't let you took away my daughter too. I will do anything..but i won't let you know that pari is your daughter..not at any cost.

Here is the part 3 enjoy... 😊

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AlbusDumbeldore

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Yipee me first.

Awesome update.

Love the emotions of shlok.

Thanks for pm but u give wrong link.

Lovely update.

Do update soon.

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ASRKKGfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Awesome yaar.. Can't wait for next update.. Pls update soon don't make us to wait for long time.

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Serviana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Awesome update!! Loved it!! Update soon and thanks for pm!🤗

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latha_555

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

awesome update, loved both their reactions, and aastha hugging the other guy and shlocks jealousy...just awesome! Cant wait till the next part

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Ashlesha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Yay !! Can't wait to see Shloks thoughts when he finds out about Pari!!

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ankita sharma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: anjipankaj
Yipee me first.
Awesome update.

Love the emotions of shlok.
Thanks for pm but u give wrong link.
Lovely update.
Do update soon.

Yup... 😊
Thanks alot dear.
Oops..sorry but first time link provide kiya tha to galt ho skta h. Will try to provide correct link from the next time.
Thanks once again. Will try to update soon 😊