Hey!!i never believed one FF would affect me so much...!!!
when i started ur FF along with many others i never thought i wouldd get attached coz most FF strted the sameway..!!!
but ur fast updates kept me coming and reading chapter after chapter...!!!
i was amazed at the confession...it kinda reminded me of MJHT MaYur who i was a major fan of..and their confession took place in somewhat the same way.. bt u didnt let go the style of the two..!!! Randhir and Sanyukta...i was marveled with the confession speech it was so beautifully penned...!! this was the real start of my journey to falling in love with this FF!!!!
Never in my mind did it occur to me nyone could write down such a story without losing track of the character... but u r one of them...!!! U hv turned in a phenomenal writer...ur chapter 23 was the 1st tym i felt the urge to comment for the way u wrote it as i was dyin to read further... then came chap 24 honestly my favourite one... call it the sadist in me who liked the chapter or just ur writing ability which could make me cry... but it made me cry...!! these last 3 chapters every morning the moment i woke up i had to prepare for my board but i care...no i would drop on SH forums and be satisfied that u had updated...every morning i fell in love with this storyline even lil did i know u were gonna end it...i would have luved to read a few more chapters...!!!
i didnt want my ritual nor my obsession towards this story to end..this is one of the best FF i hv read on sandhir...opps i mean stories not FF!!! i read it all over again ryt now before commenting..!!! i juzt couldnt help reading it once more to pen down exactly my points..!!! and thats what i did... u have portrayed the FIGHT... to slight FRIENDSHIP...to JEALOUSY...to CONFESSION..to a simple yet affective DATE...the cunning TRAP...the BREAKUP...the ACCIDENT ...den came Randhirs BREAKDOWN...and finally the reunion...!!
what else is missing...am i ryt...u hv put in every possible angle and yet nailed each of it to perfection... that today i cn say that i am glad this was the 1st FF on sandhir which is finished and has such a beautiful story that alll i can do is keep writing..!!
lets not waste ur time!!! 🤣 🤣
u hv turned into a hell of a writer...do keep writing!!
regards
safrena
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