Loved the unique story very much
Sorry for late comment . I went to India and came back and thanks for PMs in my absence
Prologue - Loved how you described Arnav and Khushi characters
Arnav and Khushi didn't met till now as Arnav was in London to extend his company and Khushi was married to his brother after he went to London, Anjali and Nani called him frequently and use to praise Khushi. Arnav too missing his family and wants to go back. Khushi is married to Karan and he is not capable of giving physical needs and father a child. Karan wanted Khushi sleep with his brother Arnav for heir. Khushi married Karan and kept about him as secret because he is helping her poor family.
Chap 1 - Loved the way you described Arnav's portion in RM. Arnav came at midnight and he don't want to disturb his family so he went his portion. Khushi is not ready for sleeping with her brother in law but Karan threaten her saying he will stop giving money to her family so she accepted. Arnav called his supplier to send a girl him and Karan received that call and he took Khushi with him.
Chap 2 - Khushi was a bright student in college and she never has affairs because she believed in marriage. Khushi never interested in money but she married Karan only for money to help her family and now money is her big enemy and Khushi thought her husband is shrewd player. Khushi went to Arnav's room and he was in washroom but when he opened the door she hide herself in wardrobe and prayed DM to help her but Arnav opened wardrobe and saw her and he was mesmerised by her and felt immediate attraction towards her.
Chap 3- Loved how you described Arnav's feelings seeing Khushi infront of him and he was pulled towards her eyes. He felt she was so innocent and pure. Arnav was fully aroused seeing her and he shocked by himself and Khushi felt fear feeling him aroused but Arnav thought she was a girl whom he called but she didn't like prostitute . He want to have her and he tried to make love to her but she was virgin and she was bleeded and Arnav cursed himself eventhough he felt she was not prostitute but he ignored it and damage done by him. Loved he soothed her.
Chap 4 - Arnav said he don't know why she choose this path but he will see that no one force her. Khushi felt how different two brothers are. Loved how Arnav tried to sooth her and how he kissed on her forehead. Arnav went to talk on phone and when came back he didn't found her. Arnav felt restlessness for her safety and couldn't sleep whole night. Karan asked did she slept with his bhai and she said yes and went to washroom and cried and tried to wash away Arnav's touch from her body. Morning Nani felt she was not normal like daily but Khushi said she has cold and she is feared that Arnav may found out her identity.
Chap 5 - Loved Anjali POV update. Loved how she told about her love for Arhaan and Khushi. How she wished Khushi would have married her Arnav bhai. Loved how Ajali wrote about Khushi's innocence and her nature and her character.
Chap - 6 Anjali too asked Khushi whether shi is ok and she said she is fine and acted as she was normal but she has fear of her identity in front of Arnav. Arnav too was with his family but he was only thinking about Khushi. Anjali said Khushi prepared gajar ki halwa for him and he liked it too. Anjali wanted to introduce Khushi to Arnav. Arnav saw her and shocked and saw her mangulsutra and Sindoor and got to know she was his brother's wife and he felt betrayed and went from there as he don't want to do any wrong in front of his family.
Chap 7 - Arnav was angry and he felt betrayed and also felt she was innocent. He thought how Khushi was scared from his touch and how she was not interested to intimate with him and something clicked in his mind and to confirm it he wanted answers so he went out of office. Khushi went to her parents house but she was not happy at there because she was feared seeing rage in Arnav's eyes. Arnav came to her parents house and pulled her with him to get answers from her.
Part 8 - Arnav took her to his farm house and he asked her reason for not saying him as she was his brother's wife and not a prostitute but she didn't answer him. He said she will not go any where till she answers his questions and took her to his bedroom and she scared and said she did all that because she needed money for her family.
Chap 9 - Khushi said to him not to tell Nani and Anjali about this and she will not do it again and she is ready for punishment.. Arnav knew everything about Karan as his 2 wives said about him when they divorced him and his supplier also said Karan changed the girl he sent and he felt anger on his brother for destroying innocent soul, He promised her no one will force her to do anything even his brother too and he will take care of her family. Khushi shocked as he knows about Karan and cried her heart out because of loosing her respect in front of her brother in law and she fainted and took her to another bedroom.
Chap 10 - Doctor said Khushi was fainted because of forceful intimacy she lost blood and she was weak. Arnav was guilty thinking about last night and he felt possessiveness towards her and felt to protect her from every one. Loved the way he slept keeping her hand on his heart and his hand around her. Arnav cleverly informed nani Khushi was at her parents place and he was in Delhi on office work. Khushi saw Arnav sleeping by her side and she don't want to be near him and she want to go home so she ran away from farmhouse to go to home but when she was about to meet accident , Arnav saved her and took her back to farmhouse. Karan felt guilty for his act but his selfishnss said he was right. He was missing Khushi and he thought after she conceived he will ask her for another chance and he want to settle only with her.
Chap 11 - Loved how he took care of her foot and dressed her wounds and asked her to change wet clothes with Anjali's. Loved how she first time felt for him and how she lost in his body and his features and Arnav felt that he marked her and she is only his and how he pulled her in his arms and aked why she run away from him and Khushi said she don't know why and said want to go home and she asked whether Karan knows she was with him and Arnav said no. At midnight Arnav went to see her and saw her shivering with cold and went tuck her with quilt but she unconsciously made herself near him and hugged him and slept on him and Arnav felt aroused and Arnav forgot everything and lost himself and tried to make love to her but hearing Khushi's pleading he controlled himself and stopped and kissed her softly and went out of the room.
Chap 12 - Since one week they came from farmhouse Khushi only thinking about him and his care and concern for her and his kiss. Loved how Arnav kept her medicines for her without coming in front of her, Khushi felt sad and happy at the same time as he didn't come in front of her or around her from one week. She tried to avoid his thoughts but she couldn't and she liked it too. Khush felt weird seeing Karan's soft nature and he kissed in front of whole family but Khushi didn't like his that kiss and Khushi is missing Arnav terribly and Arnav too didn't like Karan kissing Khushi and he controlled his anger.
Chap 13 - Arnav too missing her from one week and he didn't come in front of her because she didn't like his nearness. Loved how he confronted Karan and asked him to give divorce to Khushi. Karan asked Arnav's forgiveness and asked a month time to settle things but Arnav didn't believe him as he know him inside out. Arnav getting erotic dreams with Khushi. Khushi too getting erotic dreams with Arnav and she is craving for him and she felt thirsty and went to drink water and Arnav too came to kitchen for some work and Khushi was nervous seeing him and Arnav don't want her go away from him and asked to make coffee for him. Khushi prepared coffee with her fast heart beating because of his gaze on her and said his name to take coffee and Arnav lost control and started to kiss her passionately touching all over her body and Khushi too lost in him and Arnav said he wanted her and Khushi too needed him and saw his need for her and gave her consent.
Chap 14 - Arnav took her to his bedroom and Khushi felt protected in his arms and she wanted to leave all her fears and live in that moment because she felt he deserves her and she deserves happiness too and she felt she only belongs to him and only him. Loved how you wrote their love making so sensually and passionately.
Chap 15 - Khushi waited for him at dining table and Anjali asked her from which side she will participate in her marriage from her or Arhaan and loved how Arnav came and said let Khushi decide and sat by her side and Karan felt something fishy but ignored it. Loved how arnav held her hand under table in his tight grip and Khushi said she will come from both sides. Karan received a call that he got a contract and Arnav given that to send him to NewYork and he made him sign divorce papers. Khushi felt guilty and herself cheap and she ignored him all the day but at night Arnav came to her room and asked to open the door otherwise he will break it and when she opened it he took her in his arms and went to his portion.
Chap 16 - Khushi cried and said Arnav that she is feeling guilty and last night was a mistake and may be he is thinking she is cheap but Arnav understood she was different from others and loved how he said she just belong to him and she is only his and lovd how he expressed his feelings about their last night, and how he felt for her and what she meant to him and said he thinks her as his wife from the time he made love to her and he will protect her from world and loved how Khushi asked him "Arnav will you always hold me tight near to your heart?" and his reply " Always" Loved Khushi's thoughts how she blushed whole day thinking about him and she felt protected with him and the way she kissed him first time and the way he said sweet heart goodmorning was romantic.
Chap 17 - full blush worthy update. Loved how Khushi tried to kiss like the way he kiss her and how Arnav said to kiss him and how first time she kissed him and loved the passionate love making and how their love making still on air and how he is addicted to her. How he tore her sarees every time she made love to her and how he arranged a wardrobe for her. Arnav made her sign on divorce papers too and Khushi felt guilt ridden as she felt she was not Karan's wife now. Khushi went shopping with Anjali and Arnav was angry on her as she went without informing her. How he kissed her in lift passionately and Khushi said she wanted her. Nani found out the relation between them.
Waiting to know what will Nani do and what will happens when Karan will come back and how Arnav will protect her from blames.
Thank you for beautiful story
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