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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: meerab...
jeeni dear thanks for the double dhamakha yesterday...loved both updates

so you read them? i thought...😆

Ok if you read, then there was a contradiction in updates...tell me...

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#732

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love u dear...
yesterday what happened with me was a real surprize...first i read the second update and then in the evening when i suddenly noticed the first update...that time i was super duper excited

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#733

so jeeni dear mera bi test le rahi ho aap...how can u imagine that i can miss ur update sweety...well i m not good in these type of analysis

but ok let me tell you what i feel

1-firstly anjali decided to separate them though for their betterment but after shlok left she was the one making shlok more closer to astha saying all the stuf when astha comes to know that she is upset

anjali got upset before and still upset ...but for different reasons

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#734

2- first update...with their growing age their friendship was also growing...a relation that was becoming more than friendship

and in second update love started to replace friendship na...

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jeenia123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#735

very funny meerab... anjali was upset because of obvious reasons... yes she wanted to separate them for their betterment bt which mother can tolerate to stay away form her loving kids?

secondly...yes, their relation is changing,. even both mentioned when astha brought locket for him and shlok in call left sentence incomplete...

it was something else, that no one could get, just due to clear that i have to modify my update for today...will update in half hour...

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#736

3-shlok possessive for astha in first update

and in second astha was...as that swati thing

and i can now go on and on

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Roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#737

hey jeeni i want to read more please update

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#738

@ jeenia

atleast hint to do...

and dear waiting for ur update... sweety love u

Edited by meerab... - 11 years ago

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#739

Originally posted by: roshanii
hey jeeni i want to read more please update

good morning dear

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meerab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#740

jeeni waisey astha shlok itney years se aik dosrey se sab share kar rahey hain but astha ne still us ke jhoot ke liye usey maaf nahi kiya na thats why she never face him...never show him her face

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