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ipkkndeternity

@ipkkndeternity

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Very nyc os i must say write another1 will u and i think u used love and hate relationship with a bit of betrayl in your love i guess

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nadiafarjana

@nadiafarjana

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

nice os..
and the ff you have used is betrayal in your love and hunted soul and pregnancy and love hate relationship.

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Lovely OS...
I loved it ...
Very well written...
It is from BIYL, Pregnancy and Hunted soul...

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SAM32

@SAM32

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

awesome os.. i thought pavin has thought of mixing her work :-P
u did a lovely job
it starts with betrayl in ur lov than turned to love hate than the night mare part of hunted soul n funally towads her short ss that was about khushi"s preg.. cant recall its name..
if u have a link now of thaf os that u made for madhu di plz plz pm me

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simran

@Laters_Baby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

mash up of pregnancy , betrayl nd lil bit of hunted

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

fabulous one 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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aysemLDG

@aysemLDG

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Like father like son... He is a carbon copy of his father. At the beginning the story was romantic, later it turned into scary, then it became emotional. You managed to put all emotions in one story.

About your question, I guess you had used Pavin's four works including:

'Betrayal in Your Love' Aryan's possessiveness about Khushi reminded me this one.

'Love Hate Relationship' Arnav's jealousy about Khushi's couple dance in college.

'Hunted Soul' Unknown voice that calling Khushi and something creeping up on her legs.

'Pregnancy' I mean the complications during Khushi's pregnancy and Arnav's decision about abortion and his hatred towards their unborn baby.

Edited by aysemLDG - 11 years ago