MG FF HEAVEN IN HELL, THREAD 3, EPILOGUE, PG 100, AUG 15 - Page 26

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MAAN FULFULLED GURU'S DREAM OF OPENEING A SCHOOL AND COLLEGE FOR POOR KIDS
AND GOD GAVE HIM A GIFT OF HIS OWN - HIS BABY
MAAN WAS SO EMOTIONAL
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H2 - 50



Maaneet in hospital

wen they enter Geet notice the whole area was empty.

Geet :Maan i think dr is leave see no one ,better we leave

Before she continue came : hello Mr & Mrs Khurana

Maan &Geet : hello aunty

Geet : wo aunty why no pls

Dr smiles : coz u possessive hubby booked te whole hospital today for ur check up


Geet saw Maan who stood without knowing anything..

Geet holds his arms and mouthed :thanku

Maan nodes his head

dr :can we go inside

Geet :hmmm

dr : Maan r u cuming or staying here

Before he opens his mouth Geet replied : no dr he is scared seeing hospital ,he will stay here


She give naughty grin to Maan who was glaring at her

Dr smiles :i dont want to be refere i ur game, u both decide and cum to 3rd room, im waiting there

Maan :no aunty we are cuming,they followed dr

Maan was sitting out , dr was checking Geet inside te partition.. He can see they shadow how dr tracing her stomach..He can heard wat they talking..Dr was asking her questions and she replying with shy, he wished to barg inside to see her red blushing face

Dr came out,Geet adjusting her sari & came out,Maan pulled te chair for her


Dr : Maan nothing to worry ,but

Maan got worried :but wat

Dr smiles at him : she is little bit weak,take care of her..hmmm

Maan holds her hands which was on her thighs :hmmm

Dr : then i have prescribed medicines,dont skip ur meals hmm Geet now u have to eat for two , as u have to take care of ur baby too along with u

Maan :dr she wont listen , she will look after every one , but she don't have time to care for her , Geet open her mouth to ground & glared at him

Dr smiles : Geet u have to listen to him

Geet : hmm and saw who was smirking at her

Dr : then Geet dont talk with him try to avoid him, u can understand wat im saying naa, with wink

Geet blushed and nodes hmmm..Maan got angry wen dr said dont talk &she too noding her head


Maan (st) : so madam wont talk with me, i didt hear if wife is pregnant she should not talk with hubby..but wen mom was pregnant with Anni,she was talking with papa then.

Dr :ok then Maan take care of her,dont run behind ur business

Geet giggled

Maan :ok aunty

Dr : next check up we will inform u and reports it will delivery in te evening

Maan : ok aunty thanku , Geet too stood up with him,bidding to dr they came out..

Geet to hold him but he snaps..she can sense he is angry

Geet ( st) : wat happen to him suddenly,she followed him

Maan open te car door for her and sat in driving seat

Geet :Maan wat happen

Maan : nothing wear u seat belt

Geet : no first say me wat happen u were nice till we are with dr now wat happen why u avoiding me

Maan got angry and look at her:im avoiding u , u only doing it

Geet got confused :wat I did

Maan :then wat wen aunty said dont talk with him and avoid him,u said ok


Geet realized wat it is &at once she bursted into laugh , seeing his cute frown face..she want to pull hs cheeks,and she did it

Geet pulled his cheeks : ur looking so cute Maan


Maan to glared at her, pushing her hand..He turned his face..Geet saw him who was annoyed.she stopped her laughing

Geet : Maan look at me

He didt, Geet saw who look like baby frowning for his fav toy..She want kiss him hard..holds his arms and pulled his face towards her :look at me Maan

Maan try to snap

Geet with sad tone : Maan pls

Maan look at her, Geet smiles

Geet : dont u know wat dr said

Maan :hmm dont talk with him try to avoid

Geet chuckled : really ur buddhu Maan

Maan gritted :Geett

Geet : then wat i really dont know how u run a big business,i think if dadi was not there u can't not be tis successful

Maan:Geet

Geet closing her stomach :dont shout, baby will get scared

Maan turn his face : im idiot leave it

Geet tap her forehead:Maan im pregnant but u r getting mood swings

Maan raised his eyebrows : mood swings wat is it

Geet :nothing can be done with u leave it

Maan : yes why u will talk with me,dr said to avoid naa

Geet : hare buddhu singh khurana dr said indirectly to avoid physical relation


Then Maan realized her words and grin like fool

Maan : wo wo

Geet blushing :hmmm

Maan again frowned :then i cant cum near u

Geet : who said we can and hugs him, hiding herself

Maan smirks : then we will start here

He took off his seat belt and neared her.Geet lean on her seat, he hover on her , kissing her neck, Geet stopped him


Geet : Maan tis hospital , pls leave me naa, but he was busy in tasting her neck, make her to shiver

Geet:Maan pls stop naa

Maan:hmm no i want

Geet:tis is not our home

Maan pecked her lips and left her , licking his lips:so in home no problem haan with a smirk

Geet blushed:Maan

Maan :wat Maan do u want one more,saying he hover on her

Geet stopped him:pls Maan im hungry

Maan signed:nice escape

Geet giggled

Maan:i will see u at night

Geet:no way dr said to avoid u

Maan :do u think u will stop me

Geet node:hmmm

Maan :we will see,once i start u will ask Maan more

Geet closed his mouth:besharam

Maan touching tummy :after tis too u dont know how besharam im

Geet blush:Maan pls

Maan :ok now im leaving u at night i show my besharam

Maan kissed her forehead..He started to drove to km..

Its was since one month ,after te check up, Geet was pampered by everyone, even though Ranbir came to se her, she didt get time to talk with him he will avoid her..Maan strictly asked not to go to school as she need complete rest..he locked her in their room, wat ever she needs it will cum to te room..she got annoy seeing him getting so much possessive..she was cribbing to him, but he care damn..she will curse him and Maan will shut her in his style..He became over possessive towards hearing she is carrying his kid..

Maan came late tat day, he saw Geet was sleeping in her bed, he changed and lye beside her.. he pulled her kurti above , exposing her tummy .. he touch her tummy feeling his baby.. he kiss her tummy, and kept his cheeks tracing it..


Maan : baby cum soon , papa want to hold u

He didt think his life will change and will get family , his family only his..wat else he want now, his dadi his sister, and his angel his wife beside him and now his baby, his blood going to cum.. he was luckiest man in tis world to get all te happiness ..

He still kept on kissing te baby, making Geet to open her eyes, she saw him kissing and touching her tummy to feel their baby

She caress his hair : Maan

Maan saw her who was looking at him, he kissed her lips and sat beside her helping her to sit

Geet leaned on is shoulder :wat u doing , loving ur baby alone

Maan : jealous

Geet : u r too bad , u kissing ur baby but I cant , pouting her lips

Maan saw her lips and smirked so u want to kiss our baby

Geet pouting and node her head : hmm


Maan just smack his lips on her lips and kissing her , making her to gasp, Maan was kissing her , and insert his tongue deep inside her mouth.. he was sucking and chewing her lips, drain all her sweet nectar from her lips..

After some time he broke te kiss, both panting heavily

Geet smack his arms : Maan I said I want to kiss my baby not u

Maan : tat only im doing my darling, he pulled her kurti, exposing her tummy,

Geet : Maan, he just kissed her stomach

Maan : tis is from ur mumma

Geet felt overwhelmed ,tears formed in her eyes seeing him..Maan felt wet drop on his face and look at her

Maan : Geet

Geet hugs him : I love u

Maan too hugged her , Maan kept his hand on her tummy , Geet kept her hand over it.. Maan kissed her forehead

Maan: Thank u Geet for making me feel te most luckiest person in te world..i love u and my baby

Geet eyes welled up and looking at him.

He pressed her lips with his shutting her :dare u shed tears making my baby too cry baby like u

Geet pushed him : im not cry baby

Maan : really then wat his tis,taking her tear in his finger


Geet : tats coz im so happy,holding his face in her palm, tat i got best pati in te world

Maan smirked : so u got best pati,why u girls have to cry for everything

Geet : so u r saying im stupid then go dont talk with tis stupid and turned herself

Maan was fed with her nautankis nowadays she showing so much nautankis for each and every small things ,sighing he spooned her behind ,kissing her cheeks


Geet try to snap,he hold her hand and turned to face him.

Geet :leave me before she protest he smack his lips on her lips shuting her,she felt shuddered with sudden assault.But joined him by opening her mouth for him


Geet pulled him towards by holding his hair in her fist..She inserted her tongue inside his mouth tasting him making him groan...both tongues are dancing in each other mouth..he left her mouth wen both are struggling to breath..Maan slide down and started to taste her neck..he was bitting her and sulking making her to scream in pleasure..Maan exploring her neck with his lips and his hands started to explore her body...



Maan was kissing her neck from one side to other ,Geet just moaning his name and moving her face according to him to give him better access..

Maan hands went to her back to unzip her kurti,caressing her back.his slide tracing her every contour..Geet hands roaming on his bare shoulder and back twisting her body with his pleasuring..

Maan hands further on her waist and slide te her pant untying te knots..

Geet moaned Maan

Maan :hmm sucking her collar bone

Maan hand goes inside her kutti to feel her breast..once he touched he felt something and pulled himself away from her..


Wen missing his warmth she open her drooply eyes to see him ..Before she realize Maan pulled her kurti from her body almost tearing it..

Geet was shocked: Maan

He saw her bra which was holding her breast so tightly like she cant breath.he removed te bra and throwed some were..glaring at her

Maan : wat is tis

Geet blushed : Maan pls u dont know wat is tis,she thought he was asking abt her breast which grown little bigger in size due to her pregnancy

Maan : Geet im not in mazak mood

Geet sensed his seriousness:wat happen Maan

He caress his thumb below her breast , she winched .. Maan look at her

Geet : wo tat I wored tat bra , so I think it became tight little bit

Maan : little bit ahan, then wat is tis, he traced on her waist showing te mark on due to pant ,and on her panty line

Geet : oh it became tight Maan

Maan : then why te hell u wearing tis stupid things wen u cant ahan, next time If u wear tis mujse bura koi nai hoga

Geet pouted : then wat I will wear

Maan : 2mor we are going to shopping to get new set , little bit loose


Geet open her mouth to ground : wat u saying tat I became fat and ugly naa , she pushed him and turned herself, and started to cry

Maan want to pull his hair, here he is worried abt her but madam is crying for some thing else.. Maan slowly try to turn her, Geet snap ,


Maan got furious & turned her, wiping her tears: wat happen

Geet : u don't love me, im looking fat ugly naa, then why u here go, she opened her water tap

Maan : Geet from were to were u taking te topic, I just said ur getting rashes due to ur stupid inners and ur saying abt fat

Geet started to cry : so u have problem in my crying too

Maan don't know wat to do, and stared at her who started to sob loudly.. he just smacked his lips on her ..first she was wriggling to get go ..but Maan was controlling her whole body without putting much weight on her tummy .. slowly her protest stopped and she started to respond for him..he was kissing her lips and plunging his tongue inside her mouth, Geet captured his tongue and taste it.. both are kissing , so hardly.. he left her wen he need air..

Then Maan slide down kissing her neck and then reached her curves..he cupped her breast , lifting it little above & started to lick te skin below her breast where there was marks..His hot tongue was sucking her skin wetting with his saliva..She gasp and hold his shoulder .. his hands went down , caressing her panty line , making her shuddered with his touch... He raised himself and captured her nipples In his mouth..her curves became so big tat he didt get enough of her, his hands was playing In her core and his lips assaulting her b***, making her to squirming under him..He tasting her mounds and latching it..

Geet : Maan im became fat, u don't love me like before

Maan chuckled

Geet pouted : ur smiling at me, she turned her face, as he was lying half on her..

Maan turned her face to face him : Geet do u think I wont love after all tis, do know how u look, BEAUTIFUL,

Geet blushes

Maan : with tis plum lips, pulling her lips with his two fingers, ur fully grown curve ,oh god Geet I cant say how it taste, I want to eat ur curves till ur became sore..u little flesh here and there making me mad , im controlling myself for u and Baby..if not I have made love to u, then u cant walk for one week

Geet was shocked and blushed hearing his words : Maan and hugs him pressing her softness to his chest making him to groan..


Maan pulled out and started to complete his task which he left In half, latching her another curve to make it sore like first one..she was screaming & biting his shoulder...he licked her nipples sending jolts in her... He slowly slide down kissing her stomach,and licking it.. he pushed her thighs apart and , squeezing it, he placed his face between her thighs.. he started to lick her wet core making her to gasp..He give her suck and started to chew it .. she was breathing heavily, her hormones making her to carve more from him..the he came up and latched her curve

Maan : Geet will u be ok if i


Geet holds his face : yes Maan pls

Maan slowly moved inside her , making her to gasp..

Maan : r u ok, he as very much worried for her

Geet moaned : hmm

Maan slowly went deep inside and wen she relaxed , he increased his rhythm..Geet kissed his lips, bitting it hard to control her screams, digging her nails on his skin..

Both were flowing in ectasy.. both hit te climax together..Maan slowly pulled himself , making her to gasp loudly..He lyed on his side breathing heavily , taking Geet on him, covering them with te duvet..

Maan rubbing her back : r u ok

Geet : hmm, kissing his chest

Both were talking for sometime

Maan : Geet sleep , its became late

Geet : hmm, but she felt something raising over te duvet, she know wat is it, her hands slowly slide down to hold his manhood which is hard .

Maan was shocked and groaned : Geet , holding her hands, no Geet

Geet : Maan ur hard

Maan : its ok Geet u sleep


Geet felt overwhelmed seeing him controlling for her : Maan it will be painful

Maan : I will control Geet u sleep

Geet : but I cant

Maan looked confused ..Geet took his hand and placed on her core which was so wet..

Geet : pls, almost pleading

Maan turned her and brought her under him : Geet u look tired , do u want it

Geet : pls Maan I want u

He started to drown her in his passion.. both slept after some time..

Morning

Geet was getting ready, she was abt to put her bra,

Maan stopped her : no need to wear it

Geet shocked : then wat I will wear,we are going out Maan

Maan : no means no


Geet : r u mad , how I cum out, give it, she try to take her bar, but he throwed and made her wear te blouse forcefully

Geet : dust dhanav

He pinned her pallu, took a shawl and placed around her

Maan : now cum

Geet : I wont Cum and sat on te bed

Maan signed and carried her In his arms

Geet : Maan leave me

Maan : u want to have free ride in my arms, u can ask, why to show tis much nautanki

Geet : nautanki, she hit his chest with her fist,,

Maan carried her downstairs , dadi and Anni giggled seeing them, making Geet to blush..They reached te mall

Maan took her to lingeri shop...Geet felt embrass wen he started to select her inners, in front of all te girls..and he is asking for cotton type,.. but she fumed wen he asked for medium size

Geet holds his hand : Maan mine is small size

Maan : Geet now u need medium suits

Geet open her mouth to ground : so u r saying im fat


Maan : not again, just shut up

Geet : then purchase and wear urself, im going, she went to others side..

Maan brought many things and called her, she didt respond.. he rubbed his forehead : tis girl, he went to her , he dragged her to changing room, pushing her inside and locking it after he went inside

All girls there started to giggle and surprise to see so much care from a man to his wife..

Geet glaring at him: do u have any idea how embrassing , how I will face them

Maan : why u have to face them , u just try tis

Geet : I don't need , she turned

Maan pulled her pallu, and started to open her blouse hook

Geet stops : I will do, she took te inners in her hands and wear it

She was abt to hook it, Maan hold it and hook te bra, and embrace her from behind, placing his chin on her shoulder.. he was admiring her thru te mirror , Geet tilt her head down in shyness


Geet felt his hardness poking her back, she moaned : Maan

Maan : shh, he corrected her bra, he cant control seeing her red face, he just turned her face and smack his lips, kissing her..

Maan purchased almost te whole shop, and came out.. Maan asked her to wait and went inside ..after some time he came and both left..

Wen he stop te car in te signal,Geet eyes went to side and started to lick her lips Maan saw Geet who was looking out thru te window.. He notice her glowing face and her twinkle eyes , excited to see some thing.. He wonder wat made her to get so much excitement and turn his gaze outside. but he cant see anything rather than a chat stall on te road side..


Maan got confused: Geet

She didt reply

Maan again called her little bit louder:Geet

Geet turn to him: hmmm

Maan :wat u seeing


Geet eyes widen and licking her lips making hard for Maan :Maan Maan

Maan lost in her antics :hmm came as a whisper

Geet:i want to eat golgappe

Maan who was lost in her got shocked :wat

Geet showed her face :i want golgappe, pointing her finger to road side chat shop.

Maan looked at te shop which was on te road side,he didt like it : no way u having it

Geet pouted :why

Maan :its unhygenic Geet,if u want i will take u to some restaurant not here

Geet :no i want tis golgappe,like a baby started to cry..Maan rolled his eyes seeing her, but he is not going to get her, tat stupid road side food at any cost.he started te car after te signal starts.making her fume

Geet :Maan i want golgappe


Maan :Geet dont behave like a kid chup chap betao

Geet :ohh u have problem in my talking also..u dont love me i know..i hate u.

Maan: Geet for tat stupid golgappe u behaving like tis

Geet didt say anything and turned her face..Maan thought let her be like tis..they reached km.

Before Maan cums out ,Geet open te car door and stomp out.

Dadi saw Geet ki sad: Geet wat happen is everything ok

Geet started to cry,Maan sat beside them and closed his ears..Dadi got worried

Dadi :wat happen Geet why are u crying

Geet :ask ur grandson

Dadi : Maan wat u did to her,in tis condition also ur making her to cry..i didt expect tis from u

Maan rolled his :Dadi i didt do anything

Dadi :then why she is crying

Maan : i dont know


Geet glared :u dont know dadi he didt buy golgappe for me

Dadi & Maan said in unison :wat

Geet nodes her head hmm,wiping her tears

Dadi know why she is behaving but wat to do her buddhu grandson dont know anything beyond his business

Dadi:Maan tis not fair u didt get her golgappe

Maan :dadi its unhygenic

Geet : dont give reasons Mr.Khurana why cant u say clearly u dont want to buy it for me..u dont love me..i know..

Maan want to bang his head some were : Geet for tat stupid golgappe u behaving like a kid

Geet got more angry and started to cry loudly

Maan holds his head: oh god

Geet:dont say my golgappe stupid,u dont want to buy naa leave it..she rush to her room.

Maan stopped her :be careful Geet

Geet : i know how to look after my baby u dont need to bother and went te room

Maan :damit

Dadi chuckled seeing him

Maan :dadi here she is making me mad but ur laughing at my plight

Dadi smiles: Maan its not her fault her pregnancy moodswings

Maan got confused : moodswings

Dadi rolled his eyes : Maan some times cum out of ur business mood and look after ur family too

Maan : Dadi pls

Dadi : Maan her moodswings..wen girls are pregnant they taste buds changed and crave to have chat foods..they have sour taste more..one time they will he happy next became sad..they will get often hungry..now they have to eat for two naa..


Maan listen to her every words : but dadi its not good for health

Dadi : so wat fulfilling her wish is bigger task now..we have to fulfill all her wishes then only baby will be fine

Maan got confuse : wat is connection between her moodswings and baby

Dadi smiles : Maan baby will make cranky sometimes..if u fulfill her cravings Geet will be happy and baby to feel her mothers feelings and wen she is sad baby also feel sad..so fulfilling Geet's wish, u indirectly making ur baby happy

Maan was staring at dadi hearing her words

Dadi know wat he thinking,patting his cheeks : its not easy to give birth to a baby Maan,every girl get a new birth on her delivery..so now go and call ur sherni for lunch

Maan smiles : thanku Dadi

Dadi left..Maan called some one and smirks..he went to his room to pacifly his sherni

PRECAP : MAAN TALKING TO RANBIR

NEXT PART: 51, PG 62


Edited by Desigirls12 - 11 years ago
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I CANT BELIEVE 50TH PART..THANKU FRIENDS FOR UR LOVE H2 TO REACH 50..LOVE U ALL...
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Congratulations for the 5oth part of this beautiful fiction


Awww ... from where too start, now maan looked more cute to me rather than scary ... with his little frowned forehead and twisted nose.

Poor bacha, didn't get the clue of doctors words and Geet is teasing him well he got good lesson to teaed mk ... car mai suhru ho gaya ye tu...

Oyeee they can't control each other ... that is now sure

Oyeee create whole drama for just mere gol gappe
Oppsss not mere but percious gol gappe

Bechara maan sab chadte hai ... dadi bhii
Oyee chalo now he understood little bit about geet cravings

I know what is the surprise ...


Geet ke baby loss se before jo scene tha golgalpe in km
Vohii aaye gaa naa

Well maan have to pacify his wifey naa after all

Edited by -Mitu- - 11 years ago
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babaji this maan naa
sach mein buddhu hain
dude doc meant no physical intimacy for a while
but he was thinking something else only
no wonder she was laughing at him
that was so funny naa
just loved it for sure
bechare maan he doesnt know whats wrong with his wife
getting cracky and all
crying and saying things like he doesnt love her
when its just her mood swings
thank god for dadi
she told MSK why geet is being this way
no at least this way maan knows how to deal with her
why didnt she tell him about her lingerie getting smaller
which they would do right
since she is getting bit bigger
man lingerie shopping was so cute
he really loves her dont he
awww he was worried if he would hurt her during their love making
but she said it will be okay
well duh her sexual appetite will change too
hmmm seems ranbir is still running away
well not for too long
ahhh will it be junior MSK or junior GSK
lets see shall we
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geet moodswings making maan mad dadi explaining to maan

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